Devil Meets Demoness

Masterful ink. Love it.

you're far too kind Lord Hades I made so many errors on this starting with not double checking my Latin.. bowing to your greatness I can only aspire to touch the hem of your shroud.. thank you love Crimsin

We learn by trial and error. I am not without my missteps. But, thank you for thinking so highly of me.

thank you Hades for the help on the Latin and I know greatness when I see it..

love Crimsin

Just the fact that you say "double check my Latin" earns my respect.

thank you DPW :)

love Crim

Wicked excellent Crim!

thank you most kindly Fifty..

love Crim

It's still an amazing poem

thank you most kindly Kavik I think I worked out the errors :)

love Brenda

Miss Crim. . .w/ or w/out the alternate language, your poem is still bitch wicked. . .Enjoyed. . .xo, Devlin.

thank you Lady Devlin for such a wicked fantastic comment..

I cherish your visits :)

love Crim

This is a great narrative on the love life of two evil characters. :)

thank you most kindly aarti :)

love Crim

Love your hellish erotica. In some weird way I relate to this one. Great write Crim.

thank you graciously DPW :)

love Crim

Wonderful to say the least ^^
Very much my favorite poet on here right now :-)

thank you most graciously DC for such a great compliment :)

love Crim

lowing out          
the meeker stars          
leaving them in our wake          
we continue on a death march          
         
abiding in hell          
walking the Earth          
soldiers we are          
of the finest fucking order        

Honey this was intense..wish i could have seen the latin..think the most important part is we try sometimes with language that is out of our grasp of perfection...
At any rate Powerfull lovely stuff Crim

Love
Jennifer

thank you beautiful Jennifer sorry I made errors with the Latin so put the title in English..

love Brenda

I think the Demoness gets the upper hand.  Satan's no match for you Crim.  This is intense, sinister, incredibly erotic and so much fun!

" slithering through the computer          
our message sent in code          
not to be gotten by those          
who aren't in the know"

If this is a virus it's one I wouldn't mind having.  I like to think I'm in the know and keeping up on the code.  Wouldn't want to miss anything.  Great job wicked Crim!          

thank you Sir Crow you always make me smile with your comments :)

love Crim

you are a painter of the mind, "creaming out my perversion" sizzling line!...

thank you Dean for making me smile I look forward to your thoughts and visits :)

love Crim

One of your finest inks! You never sway from the dark path when pleasing Him. Lovely devotion to darkness, Sweet Sin. - blue angel

thank you most graciously lovely Angel for making me smile with your comment :)

love Crim

Damn, you make dark so fuckin' bright! You make hell so fuckin' heavenly! You make demons so fuckin' angelic!
Yes, your pen is so fuckin' amazing.....

lovely Rain I'm blushing wildly from your kind, fantastic comment I am humbled thank you beautiful lady..

love Crim

"Devil meets demoness"

THIS is the whole poem  condensed in three words . . .  

Ahhh . . . But of course you did go on and you went on masterfully . . .

As you instructed Lucifer about how the intimate lasison it was quickly
apparent that you were the one taking charge and calling the shots.

"by night's shine       
bewitched by your evil brew       
I drink your satanic semen       
delirium of the brain begins"

Yesssss!  Totally kickass poetry!!!

thank you kindly Sir for such a bad ass comment :)

love Crim

Brenda, this is fucking art.. i love every line in this dark masterpiece.. inked by crimsin pen.. and the words of your soul scream through out this piece.. into the list, this brilliance will go.. with love..



Dave

thank you Dave love your enthusiastic response to this poem made me smile wide :)

love Brenda