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Longing for.........
My arms, they long for and
miss you so;
I just thought that you
should know.
My mouth misses the taste
of your lips;
my hands the feel of the
your hips.
My tongue the taste
of your skin.
My eyes, the gazing
deep within.
My skin the feel of your
breath upon it each night.
I miss being held in your
caresses so tight.
Of your sweet kiss,
I often reminisce.
I am haunted by these memories,
the whole night through:
while lying in our bed
next to you.
miss you so;
I just thought that you
should know.
My mouth misses the taste
of your lips;
my hands the feel of the
your hips.
My tongue the taste
of your skin.
My eyes, the gazing
deep within.
My skin the feel of your
breath upon it each night.
I miss being held in your
caresses so tight.
Of your sweet kiss,
I often reminisce.
I am haunted by these memories,
the whole night through:
while lying in our bed
next to you.
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20th Oct 2015 11:31pm
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Re: Re. Longing for.........
20th Oct 2015 11:43pm
There is that word again, sweet Taryn.
This time sometime different " a damn you". Sorry sweet lady to evoke such an emotional response from you. I know in my heart that you are right.
I just have to find the voice and the courage to say what has to be said.
Thank you for the advice I have been delaying this for too long.
With love
Keith
This time sometime different " a damn you". Sorry sweet lady to evoke such an emotional response from you. I know in my heart that you are right.
I just have to find the voice and the courage to say what has to be said.
Thank you for the advice I have been delaying this for too long.
With love
Keith
Re. Longing for.........
20th Oct 2015 11:42pm
Keith I what a heart in the throat moment when I read the ending feeling you my friend..
love Brenda
love Brenda
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Re: Re. Longing for.........
21st Oct 2015 00:21am
Sweet Brenda I guess you didn't see that coming. Well I never thought I
would be living it. I thank you for your
kind words.
Keith
would be living it. I thank you for your
kind words.
Keith
Re. Longing for.........
21st Oct 2015 00:20am
"I just thought that you
should know."...
~.. the tone is lain deep and is strongly felt.
shiny tears broke .. abouttt.. ~~> ..*here..
..and continue..[w/ lil grss] at such Heart rendered aching..
"My skin the feel of your
breath upon it each night."
~simply perfect.
thinking night hours bring on the strongest reminiscences of snuggle, heat, & loves..
so sweetly written Keith.. glad my computer behaved long enough to scrawl at the end of this jewel..
hugs n awes to your pen misters!
~d
should know."...
~.. the tone is lain deep and is strongly felt.
shiny tears broke .. abouttt.. ~~> ..*here..
..and continue..[w/ lil grss] at such Heart rendered aching..
"My skin the feel of your
breath upon it each night."
~simply perfect.
thinking night hours bring on the strongest reminiscences of snuggle, heat, & loves..
so sweetly written Keith.. glad my computer behaved long enough to scrawl at the end of this jewel..
hugs n awes to your pen misters!
~d
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Re: Re. Longing for.........
21st Oct 2015 3:13am
Thank you so much for your always kind words and thoughtful comments.
You always feel the words; it is so greatly appreciated. I am so glad that you hear me.
Love and admiration
As always
Keith
You always feel the words; it is so greatly appreciated. I am so glad that you hear me.
Love and admiration
As always
Keith
Re. Longing for.........
21st Oct 2015 1:19am
Heartbreaking! I am so sorry you're having to go through this! No one deserves to feel lonely when you have someone next to you! I hope and pray you find peace in whatever you decide! 💕Sissy
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Re: Re. Longing for.........
21st Oct 2015 3:21am
My friend, your loving comments and thoughtful words are very much appreciated. I know that it is time
to speak up or forever hold my peace.
I just ant seem to find the words.
Doesn't make much sense when the words are what you are commenting
on.
Love always
Keith
to speak up or forever hold my peace.
I just ant seem to find the words.
Doesn't make much sense when the words are what you are commenting
on.
Love always
Keith
Re. Longing for.........
21st Oct 2015 4:33pm
I have been here. The recent past, but it still sits within me. There is nothing lonelier than those last lines. Memories of that feeling, of missing that person so much, and they are right in front of you. The inevitable task of confronting this...I don't envy you. But you will be freed by doing so. Sending you the light and strength to take it on. Life is too short, don't waste a moment. Loves.
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Re: Re. Longing for.........
22nd Oct 2015 2:50am
Thank you so much for your caring and warm words. I only wish that you had never experienced this. I thank you so much for taking the time to share.
Keith
Keith
Re. Longing for.........
21st Oct 2015 4:39pm
I had to read it twice to make sure what I read was correct. The comments solidified my suspicion as I felt this was a sad poem. But opens as with a romantic touch. So yeah. The ending threw me. I felt sad actually. But you made this poem work. Very nice write k2m
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Re: Re. Longing for.........
22nd Oct 2015 2:54am
I appreciate your comments my friend,
This poem started out as a text message to my wife. Never sent it;
probably should have. I am please that in your opinion it worked. I kinda like the ending myself
This poem started out as a text message to my wife. Never sent it;
probably should have. I am please that in your opinion it worked. I kinda like the ending myself
Re. Longing for.........
21st Oct 2015 8:48pm
Keith,
The familiarity here tugged at me as soon as I started in ( I sighed that all to well knowing one)
You can pull those sheets back, and assess accordingly ... whenever you're ready.. and I pray you then have a piece and peace of mind, body and soul ..
The familiarity here tugged at me as soon as I started in ( I sighed that all to well knowing one)
You can pull those sheets back, and assess accordingly ... whenever you're ready.. and I pray you then have a piece and peace of mind, body and soul ..
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Re: Re. Longing for.........
22nd Oct 2015 3:06am
Winter, I am sorry that you too know these feelings. I remember that from one of your poems( Please Me)
I feel much love for you dear.
Because I want so much to have
what I had before, I know you understand.
Love and best
Wishes to you
Keith
I feel much love for you dear.
Because I want so much to have
what I had before, I know you understand.
Love and best
Wishes to you
Keith
Re. Longing for.........
22nd Oct 2015 1:51am
The entire poem was perfect. Nicely done and I really could feel what was going on here. <3
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Re: Re. Longing for.........
22nd Oct 2015 3:08am
Thank you for leaving a comment
Sweet Lady. It is always nice
to hear from you.
Keith
Sweet Lady. It is always nice
to hear from you.
Keith