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Feed Me Dark One
my demons are quiet
barely a whisper
heard through
the cracks in my psyche
left with a broken heart
from which to speak from
I want to suffocate it
stuff it under my bed
summoning the devil in me
free me from this state
of suspended animation
tantalize my mind
with visions of hell
I've ridden your demonic elevator
down, down to all the dimensions in Hades
felt the weight of the place
as the Great Dragon breathes fire
licking the flesh of the weak
with a razor tongue
pulling back skin and muscle
revealing the soul within
squirming like a maggot on a hook
anguish and torture your forte
let me feast with you oh Dark Lord
let me taste the gore
of the corrupt
blood lusting whore
eating from your charred table
free the diseased depravity
of a darkened mind
I am here for your amusement
your toy to pose and play with
hell hounds need meat
alcohol, porn, my pussy splayed
creaming only for you
should you bless me with your Presence
in the shadows I reside
inside the depths I am alive
growling out my hunger for you
let my demons ride
Published 20th Oct 2015
| Edited 21st Oct 2015
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20th Oct 2015 7:44pm
You've got an amazing imagination Crim, and it might be your salvation in a sense. This devil's in you and not in Hell.
"summoning the devil in me
free me from this state
of suspended animation
tantalize my mind"
You're not evil, just plenty talented and a wicked turn on. Beautifully done, Crim!
"summoning the devil in me
free me from this state
of suspended animation
tantalize my mind"
You're not evil, just plenty talented and a wicked turn on. Beautifully done, Crim!
20th Oct 2015 8:07pm
20th Oct 2015 7:56pm
You paint the darkness with a Stygian brush. I kneel to you, O Mistress of the Black Arts.
20th Oct 2015 8:09pm
thank you Lord Hades I am ever in awe of you.. you've touched my infernal heart greatly with your comment.. bows to you in respect..
love Crim
love Crim
20th Oct 2015 8:20pm
20th Oct 2015 10:02pm
20th Oct 2015 9:45pm
Love the last line
You are a modern day Grace Slick
Blast everything in your path
Righteous ink Brenda
You are a modern day Grace Slick
Blast everything in your path
Righteous ink Brenda
20th Oct 2015 10:03pm
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20th Oct 2015 10:08pm
thank you beautiful one for making my day with your add and showing this ink so much love that touches my dark heart..
I love you :)
xoxoxo Brenda
I love you :)
xoxoxo Brenda
20th Oct 2015 10:15pm
20th Oct 2015 10:52pm
20th Oct 2015 11:27pm
Brenda, this is a brilliant piece.. really loved the flow.. very nicely done.. into the list it goes.. with love..
Dave
Dave
20th Oct 2015 11:50pm
thank you Dave for digging my flow and making me smile wide with your add :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
21st Oct 2015 1:33am
The pleas of pure sinful temptation by my fave naughty vixen of dark..
luckee me.. I love this Brenda!
"with visions of hell
I've ridden your demonic elevator
down, down to all the dimensions in Hades
felt the weight of the place"
~sweetly nailed it.. the 'been there & wanna-gotta go back'..yessss..
"free the diseased depravity
of a darkened mind
I am here for your amusement
your toy to pose and play with "
~such the sexy offering of an open mind seeking dark solace..*beauty is all yours here!
"growling out my hunger for you
let my demons ride"
~gave me warm tingles at your last lines CrimCrim.. f-ing perfect & sign me up, darlin..;)
adores you sweetie!
~d
luckee me.. I love this Brenda!
"with visions of hell
I've ridden your demonic elevator
down, down to all the dimensions in Hades
felt the weight of the place"
~sweetly nailed it.. the 'been there & wanna-gotta go back'..yessss..
"free the diseased depravity
of a darkened mind
I am here for your amusement
your toy to pose and play with "
~such the sexy offering of an open mind seeking dark solace..*beauty is all yours here!
"growling out my hunger for you
let my demons ride"
~gave me warm tingles at your last lines CrimCrim.. f-ing perfect & sign me up, darlin..;)
adores you sweetie!
~d
lovely d~ thank you I cherish your thoughts beautiful..
the dimensions in Hades are certainly a wonder to behold..
thank you for enjoying my dark offering :)
love Brenda
the dimensions in Hades are certainly a wonder to behold..
thank you for enjoying my dark offering :)
love Brenda
21st Oct 2015 2:12am
21st Oct 2015 2:23am
21st Oct 2015 2:56pm
wow! this was a real journey and i followed every step - gripping stuff :-)
21st Oct 2015 4:38pm
22nd Oct 2015 3:47pm
"licking the flesh of the weak
with a razor tongue
pulling back skin and muscle
revealing the soul within" . . . - deliciously dark imagery! Wow, seeing hell through your ink is enchanting! Brilliantly penned, Crim! - blue angel
with a razor tongue
pulling back skin and muscle
revealing the soul within" . . . - deliciously dark imagery! Wow, seeing hell through your ink is enchanting! Brilliantly penned, Crim! - blue angel
22nd Oct 2015 4:04pm
thank you beautiful Angel for finding my vision of hell enchanting :)
love Crim
love Crim
