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Hollow
Pictures
On your phone
That you weren't looking for
Remain
The recently departed
Happier times
In stunning digital memory
Taking you to what once was
Bittersweet
Delicate medium blue
Leaves me hollow
The way it catches me from behind
Sadness
Joy
Life
Death
On your phone
That you weren't looking for
Remain
The recently departed
Happier times
In stunning digital memory
Taking you to what once was
Bittersweet
Delicate medium blue
Leaves me hollow
The way it catches me from behind
Sadness
Joy
Life
Death
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Re. Hollow
20th Oct 2015 3:27am
there is always sadness in reflection - for me anyway
Liked this such a lot :-)
Liked this such a lot :-)
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Re. Hollow
20th Oct 2015 3:49am
Thanks
Came across some pix today of my Mom
Lost her almost a year ago
Still difficult
Came across some pix today of my Mom
Lost her almost a year ago
Still difficult
Re. Hollow
20th Oct 2015 3:59am
this puts a lump in my throat Poets.. I believe that makes it excellent!
heart hugs to you sir.. poignant capture,
~d
heart hugs to you sir.. poignant capture,
~d
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Re. Hollow
20th Oct 2015 4:06am
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Re: Re. Hollow
Touched by your words S
Been almost a year, Better now but some moments test my mettle ....
With love
Poe xx
Been almost a year, Better now but some moments test my mettle ....
With love
Poe xx
Re. Hollow
20th Oct 2015 7:23am
Your words drew me to the passing of your Mum, Poet...scrolling down it appears I was right...they, the dearly departed, are always with us...take care... :) xoxo
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Re: Re. Hollow
20th Oct 2015 1:00pm
Re. Hollow
20th Oct 2015 9:03am
Re: Re. Hollow
20th Oct 2015 1:01pm
Thanks Lo
A reality we can't escape, finding comfort where I can, sometimes here ....
A reality we can't escape, finding comfort where I can, sometimes here ....
Re. Hollow
20th Oct 2015 3:11pm
GMorn...before I even scrolled down to see any comments, I knew this was a remembrance of your mom who died about a year ago next month...I"m sure the pictures gave you that bittersweet feeling of remembering a happy moment and then feeling so sad she is gone....sending a hug your way....
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Re. Hollow
20th Oct 2015 3:24pm
Thanks Scorp.
Your timeline is right on. Thank you for your kind comments and for your remembrance
xx
Your timeline is right on. Thank you for your kind comments and for your remembrance
xx
Re. Hollow
Anonymous
20th Oct 2015 4:05pm
. . .Sir Speak. . .why so sad?. . .
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Re: Re. Hollow
20th Oct 2015 5:57pm
Just remembering my Mom who passed away in November of last year ....
Every time I write about her I feel both happy and sad and that's what this poem is about
Every time I write about her I feel both happy and sad and that's what this poem is about
Re. Hollow
20th Oct 2015 4:11pm
Poet I feel for your sadness though like lovely Taryn I know your mom is watching out for you..
sending love and understanding your way..
love Brenda
sending love and understanding your way..
love Brenda
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Re. Hollow
20th Oct 2015 6:00pm
She"s watching out for me and I'm doing the same for her, if that's possible.
In time I've processed her passing as she was not herself at the end, still this time of year is difficult and always will be ....
Thank you Brenda, you have alway sent your compassion my way, it is so appreciated .... xx
In time I've processed her passing as she was not herself at the end, still this time of year is difficult and always will be ....
Thank you Brenda, you have alway sent your compassion my way, it is so appreciated .... xx
Re. Hollow
20th Oct 2015 6:20pm
This is a genuine and beautiful write. I loved reading it. It seems to fill that 'hollow'. My heart Mr.P. Loves.
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Re. Hollow
20th Oct 2015 6:22pm
Re. Hollow
24th Oct 2015 3:26am
Your poem touched me deeply poet. Having lost my mom 2 years ago September I still feel a sharp pain that seems to engulf me from out of the blue sometimes. I still haven't been able to write of her. Hopefully I will be able to one day. I feel for you as this time of the year can prove most difficult.
A beautiful write.
A beautiful write.
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Re. Hollow
24th Oct 2015 1:41pm
Thx cute
It is difficult indeed, trying to process it in different ways. I wrote about her leading up to the end and then a bunch afterwards, it does help to put it out there. Keeps me close to her memory ......
Thank you for your compassionate comment, I hope you find peace as well as time goes on ....
It is difficult indeed, trying to process it in different ways. I wrote about her leading up to the end and then a bunch afterwards, it does help to put it out there. Keeps me close to her memory ......
Thank you for your compassionate comment, I hope you find peace as well as time goes on ....
Re. Hollow
5th Nov 2015 2:42am
Whoa, this poem speaks to our lives now in all the succinctness of some relationships...how they linger on in inside tiny boxes.
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Re. Hollow
5th Nov 2015 2:22pm