~Yen~

Lady T, I chuckled when I saw your 'speechless face'! lol.... Elated by your humbling response!
Thank you so much doll! You are too kind! Appreciated you listing me.... Xo
Pen Love~

lovely Rain so beautifully written is this erotic has my mouth agape in awe heating up the room with this masterfully seductive ink..

love Crim

....if I left the mistress of erotic ink in awe....I've done my job well!    :)
Thrilled by your review Crim!  Thankya sexy one! Appreciate the listing....

How wonderful is that, Rain. Hot and tender, full of passion. I love it!

...yeah, I was somewhat hot and tingly writing it... ;)
So good to see you Chi! Thanks for taking in the view....

Beautiful work, Rain, filled with erotic longing.  

"It’s the yen on my skin that’s got me spent
got me twisted and bent,
to the point I could easily tip over....
by a singular lick"

With waiting comes a bigger payoff, well worth it.  Loved this!

* filled with erotic longing* <-- yup! That's about the size of it crowfly!
I wanted yearning to be potent in this ink. Happy you felt it! Thankya kind sir.....

This is reaally a gorgeous write of longing and your lean towards anothers desire and desired parts of him.
Agreed with the other fine ladies and T crow the gintlmind..
Awe struck n blown way..
Love
Jennifer

Exactly Jen, and I also wanted readers to feel and witness the depth of my desire for him.  Beyond the physical realm. Your poetic love is greatly appreciate! Thanks doll.....

All I can say is..
Delivered..
Im sitting here like daaaammmmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn ..
lost for words.  Youre just that good💜

You've got me blushing , Mocha! No seriously, I'm blushing! :)
Thank you beautiful! So happy my ink silenced you in such a special way!  Thankya for the listing.

"I crave to ride his harden promise
slow grinding his massive pride,
downshift my hips into overdrive
so I can feel the full throttle of thick "

I love the whole poem Rain but this stanza blew me away! So erotic, so expressive. What a write!

Had a feeling you would fancy that stanza Tony! ;)
I was smiling while creating those lines. Thank you my funnyman! You know your ink support brings me joy...

Exemplifies a sense of being that goes beyond male/female constructs

"Exemplifies a sense of being that goes beyond male/female constructs"<-- if I needed a quote that epitomized this poem, this what be it. Wow Ted, wonderful! Thankya~
 

Exquisitely done as only you can do it.  Had all but forgotten the depth of your erotic words.

#abeatnevermissed

.....well I'm pleased that my depth has stimulated forgotten memories Sheldon!  
Thanks for inhaling my words....and listing it..

Beautifully written rain. Every stanzas just perfect love it.(not even distance can deny a body on fire when it’s draped in…… Yen )
My favorite part because it speaks volumes of truth.
Thanks for sharing

....you get me and my ink, and I appreciate that about you, D!
Thank you for the ink respect hun! Pen love....

RainC...I agree this is just an exquisite ink!
full of aching sensuality. This is just simply amazing
Thank u for sharing -- miss barrie

Barrie, you are just a ball of poetic joy dearheart! :) So sweet and positive!
I'm so happy to have you in my writing family! Thanks so much sweety!
Appreciate the listing....

Exquisite, sensual...elegant.
As erotica should be.  
No one can do it like you do Rain, its more than physical joy.

....coming from a woman that writes with a pen that drips elegance, I'm touched by such a compliment Rina!
Thank you beautiful....

the depths of desire personified....your manner of conveyance has a gravitational pull like none other Ms Rain..exquisite ink indeed!!!

.....you do know how to stroke a girl's ego pretty darn well Naajir! :) So happy to have someone with your creative talent checking in on me from time to time. Thanks so much.....

Miss Rain, Miss Rain. . .Damn, how I miss your erotic poetry. . .You are a Diva in every sense of the word. . .I tip my pen to you. . .xo, Devlin.

I'm just trying to follow your lead sexy lyn! ;)
Tippin' my pen backatcha'.... Xo
Thanks suga...

I told you long ago ... I'm not far from the Pulitzer offices.  Historically they don't recognize erotica but this would be a worthy exception.

Bravo!

Yeah, I was like, "yikes!" when you mentioned this over a year or so ago, and I'm still like, "yikes!"! lmbo
I don't know why I'm so down on my ink when it comes to Pulitzer prizes, but I'm so honored, humbled and stoked to know you think that highly of my talent. Thank you Lobo! Pen Love~

Oh Rain, you tip me over like a domino in an earthquake... you blow me away like a feather in a tornado... you make the shortest distance between two lovers a straight line of poetry from the tip of your tongue... damn you are sexy!!!
JJ

"you make the shortest distance between two lovers a straight line of poetry from the tip of your tongue..."
.....I'm delighted with the thought, and I adore the notion jj. Your words have always motivated my pen to put on her sexy black dress and add a little lipstick. :) Thanks luv~
 

I am so envious of you Rain. Not only are you an amazing poet, but just look at all the freekin comments you get!!! Lol, I can only dream of having such a following...

....sweety, if I had one follower, and it was you, I'd be overjoyed. :)
You might not remember a poem I wrote back in 2012 about DU/comments. I stated then, it's the quality for me, not the quantity. Make no mistake though, I love the respect my ink receives. #IStayHumble... Xo

p.s., sex reign on DU, it's easy to see poems like these getting attention, but gosh I'm thankful my followers don't discriminate against anything I write... lol

Smoking hot Rain...
Your talent it is limitless babes..
Love
Zazzles xoxoxox

Hey Zazzles, thanks chica! :)
You know how I feel about you and your work! Appreciate the ink nod, and thanks for the listing! Xo

Wow! This stirs things deep inside me. You write so beautifully and passionately. I feel inspired by your words. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of desire.

.....stirring something within, is a poet's dream. :) Glad to move you a wee bit!
Thank you Sammy! Pen love~

"I want to hear the madness of his fragmented moans" - love this line.  Sigh

.... hearing his moans is such an erotic high for me. Fond of that line myself, Feen! :)
Thanks beautiful!

What I love so much is how your erotica is not just about sex, there lies something more, something human to it all, that's hard to capture, which is why when we read you words, it's not like we will get a cheap thrill, we will get an angle represented in humanity within passion and human contact. Stunning. Always a pleasure my friend.

SW

...cheap thrills are good, but not my thang' Spen! Happy to know you see that. I hate to cheapin' love making with my ink, and I grow bored with people 'fuckin'  with pens.  
Your words truly moved me! Thanks suga!  Ink Respect~

"I crave to ride his harden promise" you just reduced my computer to ash with that volcanic write... who knew Rain could be so incinerating?... must be nice...

....I didn't know something so 'wet' could be so hot neither Dean.....*pops my collar*
my condolences to your computer...:)

A Beautiful Smoldering Ink !! So happy to see you back at it lovely lady .. xx

Thank you my beautiful friend! Happy to be back writing once more....
 Great seeing you at my front door, Je...

First stanza taunt my attention
Grasping my gaze full and hard
Pulling me as I willingly thrust deep
Thirsting for more
Leaving yen incomplete

Clever you are young lady

Thank you handsome! That was sexy as hell!
Appeciate the love G! Waiting on new ink from you.....

OMFG!!! Pure, erotic, poetic, perfection!!! This YEN left me YEARNING for This kinda passion!! lol...

lol... You always make my pen smile with your excitement, Rich! Thanks darlin'!

wonderful write hot and sexy

Thank you so much for stopping through with kind words, Wiccan...Xo