When Night Shines

Oh my love..breathless from this!
"lowers soft .. to arch and rise..
matched in each liquid slide--slip--grind,
..warm pools of tightness wrapping Night..
Jewels cascade slow ..as gentle song,
orbed gazes tangled, shades of long"

My gawd when you do it, you do it soooo f ing well.
You are just perfection in dark ink sighs..yes. Sighs all over the place.

Love you dear n tight
Jennifer

All my sweet loves Creampuff.. muse peeked in and woke me a moment.. was o'so gratefull!
you are a darlin of comment, Jen.. huggins, wicked to you! mwahs..
~T

lovely d~ so in love with you and your pen..

you shine beautiful with lines like these..

"A sacred kiss by shadowed lips,
raises impaled flesh on fingertips..
high blooming brightness merging hard,
drips heated moon-sounds in wet fall..
from core to heaving chest near pain,
smoldering deep in silken stain.."

in awe of you lovely lady..

love Brenda

lil kisses of thanx for taking time, sweet Brenda..
I feel so blessed to have you here and sit in ditto'd awes as we share
lines 'tween pages.. mwahs
~d

A beautiful ode to the fluidic night.

"A sacred kiss by shadowed lips,
raises impaled flesh on fingertips.. "

Your rhyming here as is everywhere else is excellent! But I also love the images aroused through these lines.

"thighs hold thick stroke and fingered tips,
sighing dark loves in silvered bliss.
..Weakened.. they blaze and burn the sky..
when the full Night decides to shine. "

More finger tips...but I am not sure I can get enough of them! And the silver bliss...just amazing!

This is both erotic and beautiful darksighs!

An ode indeed.. the night does solace when of a mood to shine.. a steady truth.

I'm not surprised that your fave lines are of my most wicked cupboard..lol & ty..
ever sweet to have your thoughts, major darlins.. shiny eve to you..
low curtsied respects. ;)
~d

You grace my page in shine Sweet Sissy OFK..loves your accelerated brain, yknw--[very]..
as tingles and awes are being bounced 'tween us, the appreciation is always mine, mwah.
from low witch bow to hard pounce.. evercherish you..
~d..in SultryCS's. ;)

you definitely shine beautifully in this piece darksighs... what a sexy 5 star ink this is

my sweetest thankins Mistah Magic.. in honest aww at your thoughts on stars. tyty!
grateful for your time and presence everly, misters,
~d

"Infinite, the striking ..colors blend,
"pale cream skin on midnight's sin."

Telling it like it is, and telling it magnificently, which is no surprise to me, dark.

You never fail to deliver and deliver first rate when your Muse calls.

Yep.  This is a keeper.

Always humbled to hear from you, Jerrydears..
trying to pin down aggravated muse, most assuredly. lol

your thoughts keep me warmly smiling and I'm ever grateful to you.. tyty!
we 'just tell it' writers must stick together, yknw.. ;)
hugs to your eve misters,
~d

Pure sorcery T!  It's erotic, visionary and deeply mysterious.

"high blooming brightness merging hard,
drips heated moon-sounds in wet fall..
from core to heaving chest near pain,
smoldering deep in silken stain.."

I almost swoon reading lines like those.  I'd never wash out that stain.

" Infinite, the striking ..colors blend,
pale cream skin on midnight's sin..
thighs hold thick stroke and fingered tips,
sighing dark loves in silvered bliss."

Magic and a little psychedelic, with the eroticism ending in the purest, shining bliss.  This is wonderful T, morning, noon or night.  

aww, ty, your comments are pure magick misters.. so uplifting as I tiptoe around my muse..
and sweetest thanx fer the 'any hour read'.. my muse is in bow fer taking time here. ;)
appreciate you T2 and hope you have great shiny hours tonight!
heart hugs,
~T

Lush

Like

smiles & dark giggle to see you here Poets.. lovely and appreciated!
hope you are spoiling yourself misters, always ;)
hughugs
~d

this a beautiful ode to the night. excellent.

Pardon my tardies... x sweet thankins SirHades..
most appreciate your taking time and hope you raise some solid hells this weekend!
[then write about it, o'course!] ;)
laters, my Sir friend.. much respect,
~d

*sighing* w/ an enchanted *darkness*. . .xo, Devlin.

enthralled to have you LadyDev.. you dab my page in lovely dark yknow! ;)
sweetest thanx & huggins for your time,
~d

MY GOD SIGHS...genius ...."pale cream skin on midnights sin"...your eyes absorb a magnificent energy,turned into pure beauty by an extraordinary poetic mind ;)

omf JS.. dark giggles & thankins sweetly fer your most amazing thoughts!
Adore your work and must curtsy for your presence here m'dears..
wishin dark shine on your day,
~d

Wow beautifully hot poem painted with all the colors of a lustful night full of satisfaction.

hihi's Sir Devils OP..[<~that one maybe..dubb? hmm] ;).. eg
Appreciate you greatly misters! warmest tys for your time.
have been in lag mode but catching up from past days.. &
shall be sighing/stalking on your pages shortly m'friend..
shiny hours to you,
~d

'beyond'
trite commentary, so
eye'll put lid on mine.......o'bother! neva'mynde!

you know I don't consider my page to be rockin til I see you Sirz o D..
will always say so too.. *wif the lil footstampin 'hmpft'..;)
much lovin thx dear one!
~d

beautifully written lovely lady, enjoyed immensely. very hot and visually stimulating through the use of language.
I am glad  to see that u are back. thank u much for such a treat.i have fallen behind on my reading.
life sometimes happens. go away a little while and all my fav seem to have had a writing explosion.

keith

So good to see you sweet man.. had some tardy days that felt like forever so
I know exactly..  but we gravitate back yes..;)
appreciate hells outta your friendship & taking time Keith, and do hope life is
spoiling you misters!
huggins n best wishes,
~d

the night still glows beyond the gloaming.
it's a very sensual piece...

Most humble thankins for your presence SirJ..
my dainty muse is stubborn of late & I appreciate your taking time!
sweet hours to you m'dear,
~d

Wow! I have not checked in lately with any regularity but I am excited to read this;)
You have such a velvety flow, while keeping a sensual rhythm throughout,in your moment!
 I am totally seduced with your erotic 'piece'.

This is gorgeous poetry, love.  Seduction at its finest.