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- - - METAL - - -
Look into my eyes
Where the danger lies
Tragedy and agony
Laced with hate and misery
A deity three times scorned
My dissection gave birth
To a beast of chrome and horns
In the chaos rain
Fires burn at graves
Harbingers and pallbearers
Celebrate the doomsayers
The melancholy and hate
Surely rusted like mesh
Drowning in an acid rage
This beloved dominion
In my apocalyptic heart
The flesh is burning
The screws are turning
In the end, we do part
In the grip of the culling
In a wave of death
With a bated breath
Basically the agony
Have come at last, finally
This beloved dominion
In my apocalyptic heart
The flesh is burning
The screws are turning
In the end, we do part
In the grip of the culling
"When the dust settles,
the only thing living in this world,
will be metal."
This moral compass spinning
Out of control
This rusted skull is grinning
With anticipation
Of annihilation
A deity three times forged
Remembered with thorns
Atomic, cataclysmic
Molten iron phantasmic
Waves of wrought iron figures
With fiber optic eyes
They are the takers
I am the giver
Beating a dead horse
Man to death, of course
Tragedy and agony
Laced with hate and misery
This beloved dominion
In my apocalyptic heart
The flesh is burning
The screws are turning
In the end, we do part
In the grip of the culling
(c) 2015 Frank Green
Quotations are from Avengers: Age of Ultron
Published 16th Oct 2015
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16th Oct 2015 5:16am
Lord Hades always in awe of your mighty wicked pen..
with lines like these..
"This moral compass spinning
Out of control
This rusted skull is grinning
With anticipation
Of annihilation
A deity three times forged
Remembered with thorns
Atomic, cataclysmic
Molten iron phantasmic"
in love with your darkness it's bad ass Metal..
love Crimsin
with lines like these..
"This moral compass spinning
Out of control
This rusted skull is grinning
With anticipation
Of annihilation
A deity three times forged
Remembered with thorns
Atomic, cataclysmic
Molten iron phantasmic"
in love with your darkness it's bad ass Metal..
love Crimsin
16th Oct 2015 5:42am
The repitition in this is so very perfect rizin..the triad aspect of this intrigues me..all major religion includes it..wish i knew more refence
Have a distinct feelin there is more to this than what i know.
This is the shit that sends me flyin to Google gawd damn ya! Looks like i got some heavy sack of wicked to deal with now brother..
I loved it.
is moral compass spinning
Out of control
This rusted skull is grinning
With anticipation
Of annihilation
A deity three times forged
Remembered with thorns
Atomic, cataclysmic
Molten iron phantasm
My favs..
Lol just cherry read crims..its official.
Phantas mic piece darlin rizin
Mojo revved..red ta go!
Calamity of jennifer
Have a distinct feelin there is more to this than what i know.
This is the shit that sends me flyin to Google gawd damn ya! Looks like i got some heavy sack of wicked to deal with now brother..
I loved it.
is moral compass spinning
Out of control
This rusted skull is grinning
With anticipation
Of annihilation
A deity three times forged
Remembered with thorns
Atomic, cataclysmic
Molten iron phantasm
My favs..
Lol just cherry read crims..its official.
Phantas mic piece darlin rizin
Mojo revved..red ta go!
Calamity of jennifer
17th Oct 2015 00:43am
"A deity three times scorned
My dissection gave birth
To a beast of chrome and horns"
~reminded me of the Fay lords of old Lore turned Slaugh.. twisted sweetly!
"This beloved dominion
In my apocalyptic heart".. *most favored lines of dark and awwwes. ;)
the metal images did grasp strongly. & enjoyed..
ever in curtsied appreciations, SirHades,
~d
My dissection gave birth
To a beast of chrome and horns"
~reminded me of the Fay lords of old Lore turned Slaugh.. twisted sweetly!
"This beloved dominion
In my apocalyptic heart".. *most favored lines of dark and awwwes. ;)
the metal images did grasp strongly. & enjoyed..
ever in curtsied appreciations, SirHades,
~d
Anonymous
17th Oct 2015 6:56am
...Movies bring such inspiration to craft such poetry...your brilliance becomes you...
18th Oct 2015 1:25am
Alas, superhero movies are one of my guilty pleasures. I also love Star Wars, Star Trek and Godzilla. So, I'm just a big nerd, lol.
But that line from the film was just begging to be used.
Thank you
Infernally,
Hades
But that line from the film was just begging to be used.
Thank you
Infernally,
Hades
Anonymous
17th Oct 2015 6:56am
...my King.
19th Oct 2015 3:16am
Shit Hades, color me impressed,.... because I 'am. I've always read your work from afar- here and there.... put its nice to take a closer look. So many incredible lines in this opaque ink. Enjoyed!
off topic: nice profile pic.....
off topic: nice profile pic.....
19th Oct 2015 6:58am
23rd Oct 2015 00:47am
Fukin A man, dug this one immensley, and I could have sworn that this read lyricly at some points, and novelist in others far as narrative goes... It kept my mind busy and curious, very well done man,,, hows it being goin my friend, and good weekend plans, your friend: wolf
23rd Oct 2015 2:48am
It's going for better or worse. Hope all's well with you and thanks, glad you liked it.
