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Choke
You wrap your fingers
Around my throat
Just hard enough
To make me burn
Red and hot. I want
To feel you harder
Ocean deep
Inside my cunt
Sweat and anger
Rip me
Cut me
Pull my hair
Make me hurt
On the outside
For once
And tear apart the inside
Like you always do.
Once the ecstasy swells
Explodes
Into my core
Maybe then
I can try
To soothe the invisible
Raw bruises all over
My soul
The ones you can’t,
No matter how hard you try,
Choke out.
Around my throat
Just hard enough
To make me burn
Red and hot. I want
To feel you harder
Ocean deep
Inside my cunt
Sweat and anger
Rip me
Cut me
Pull my hair
Make me hurt
On the outside
For once
And tear apart the inside
Like you always do.
Once the ecstasy swells
Explodes
Into my core
Maybe then
I can try
To soothe the invisible
Raw bruises all over
My soul
The ones you can’t,
No matter how hard you try,
Choke out.
Published 15th Oct 2015
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15th Oct 2015 7:20pm
Those passionate licked anger fucks can go deep..n ways n ways...
Raw bruises all over my soul..
Dig d fuck outta dat!!
Love
Jennifer
Raw bruises all over my soul..
Dig d fuck outta dat!!
Love
Jennifer
15th Oct 2015 7:53pm
The bruises might be up to you Virginia. It's a rare man who goes soul deep. Both violent and erotic, this one burns. Beautiful job!
15th Oct 2015 8:45pm
15th Oct 2015 10:43pm
All women want to be possessed by passion and
Love, without the cage of possession and fear.
I'm uncertain why I felt led to say that, nonetheless
some things, even by force, can never be erased.
So glad to see you back.
Love, without the cage of possession and fear.
I'm uncertain why I felt led to say that, nonetheless
some things, even by force, can never be erased.
So glad to see you back.
16th Oct 2015 8:06am
16th Oct 2015 5:12pm
19th Oct 2015 2:15pm
You vasilate between literal and metaphorical so well in this piece. This raw and erotic and yet dark. Such a great piece that needs to be read many times to unravel with any precision. Excellent VP.
20th Oct 2015 2:46am
it's strange but I only seem to be able to enjoy this kind of poetry when it is written by a woman - not sure why but i really enjoyed this one a lot :-)
27th Oct 2017 5:04am
Red and hot. I want
To feel you harder
Ocean deep
Inside my cunt
Sweat and anger
Rip me
Cut me
Pull my hair
Make me hurt
Well Damn, now I wanna rip somebodys cunt to shreds lol
Love this piece the honesty for brutality and the acceptance of desired punishment. Call me #ThePunisher
To feel you harder
Ocean deep
Inside my cunt
Sweat and anger
Rip me
Cut me
Pull my hair
Make me hurt
Well Damn, now I wanna rip somebodys cunt to shreds lol
Love this piece the honesty for brutality and the acceptance of desired punishment. Call me #ThePunisher
6th Apr 2018 3:41pm
