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Fake
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Sometimes your
saccharine
susurrations
scream at me
like nails
lacerating chalkboards.
Loud laudations
lyophilize in my veins.
I will not
intone false
idolatry -
idealizations
that fall
thickly from my
tongue to
tickle your fancy.
I will be the
iconoclast who shatters the
idyllic idiocy of those
inured to false flattery.
Adulations of
ass kissers grind
abhorrent in my bones;
aberration, I may be,
but I'll never be a
boot-licking lickspittle
bowing down to jump onto the
bandwagon.
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Sometimes your
saccharine
susurrations
scream at me
like nails
lacerating chalkboards.
Loud laudations
lyophilize in my veins.
I will not
intone false
idolatry -
idealizations
that fall
thickly from my
tongue to
tickle your fancy.
I will be the
iconoclast who shatters the
idyllic idiocy of those
inured to false flattery.
Adulations of
ass kissers grind
abhorrent in my bones;
aberration, I may be,
but I'll never be a
boot-licking lickspittle
bowing down to jump onto the
bandwagon.
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Re. Fake
12th Oct 2015 5:25pm
not blowing smoke up your ass but this is a skillfully written poem Harlie..
one that packs a punch :)
with love Crim
one that packs a punch :)
with love Crim
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Re: Re. Fake
12th Oct 2015 10:48pm
~_^ Heheh thank you for prefacing your comment with "not blowing smoke up your ass" <snickers> And thanks for reading!
Re. Fake
12th Oct 2015 10:00pm
A very well put together poem. I had to read it a couple of times just to make sure I reading it right. I'm with you on the fake thing it piss me off too
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12th Oct 2015 10:48pm
Re. Fake
13th Oct 2015 12:23pm
love the alliteration!!!!! really rolls of the tongue, making it a treat to read aloud ^.^
"I will be the
iconoclast who shatters the
idyllic idiocy of those
inured to false flattery."
.... it's a bit early for throat punch thursday lulz buuuuut dang lady, there's some prize fighting weight behind this blow
bloody brilliant
xoxox
"I will be the
iconoclast who shatters the
idyllic idiocy of those
inured to false flattery."
.... it's a bit early for throat punch thursday lulz buuuuut dang lady, there's some prize fighting weight behind this blow
bloody brilliant
xoxox
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Re: Re. Fake
13th Oct 2015 4:27pm
Hahah Throat Punch Thursday...I like that! Much better than Throwback Thursday, for sure. Let's make it a thing!
Thanks for reading, doll.
<3
Thanks for reading, doll.
<3
Re. Fake
13th Oct 2015 8:01pm
lol, im a little a love with alliteration... dont let the brown-nosers make you blow a gasket
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13th Oct 2015 9:06pm
Re. Fake
14th Oct 2015 7:17am
Omg loved your good sense of vocab . I see someone very talented here . Write more and more and more :)
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Re. Fake
15th Oct 2015 3:32am
Hell yeah! Fuck anyone who uses Preparation H for lip gloss! Alliteration draws the ear towards openings and the many starts to each verse and sentence, good for steady rhythm and hypnotic hooks.
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15th Oct 2015 3:55am