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Worldly Words
Pressure
pulverizes
the veins
in the brain
vessel
They count down
to explosion
from ten
Blood
brain
tissue
bone
splattering
explosion
The voices
are at
three
The
body
paused
at
four
[.]
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Re. Worldly Words
9th Oct 2015 3:03pm
This made me feel the
pressure literally
surround my brain,
how vivid & manifique
geesh..
yet, it is all so centre'
stood.. yes the
meanings of them
need to be vital..
ok, am rambling but
I definitely feel yours..
-Howlings
pressure literally
surround my brain,
how vivid & manifique
geesh..
yet, it is all so centre'
stood.. yes the
meanings of them
need to be vital..
ok, am rambling but
I definitely feel yours..
-Howlings
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Re: Re. Worldly Words
13th Oct 2015 9:43am
Thank You for "feeling mine" Howlings.
Never been one to give up on a good feel.
;)
Never been one to give up on a good feel.
;)
Re. Worldly Words
Anonymous
9th Oct 2015 11:28pm
Rev Al. . .a distinct countdown to death ~ from flesh to bone ~. . .Enjoyed. . .xo, Devlin.
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Re: Re. Worldly Words
15th Oct 2015 3:03pm
Re. Worldly Words
14th Oct 2015 9:40am
Nice decent into knowing insanity...those fucking voices too cum...hold there..pause...long as you kin..n then...echos of)))))))
Love
Calamity of Jennifer
Odd you came up, saw your name a few times today, maybe lobos reading list? Anyfuck..doin a log line comp id love to get some twisted in!
Seems like it might suit this kind of power in brevity.
Comp: your lifes log line
Love
Calamity of Jennifer
Odd you came up, saw your name a few times today, maybe lobos reading list? Anyfuck..doin a log line comp id love to get some twisted in!
Seems like it might suit this kind of power in brevity.
Comp: your lifes log line
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Re: Re. Worldly Words
15th Oct 2015 3:05pm
Rather pleased you came up too...
Tnx for the visit and comment and invite.
Al ;)
Tnx for the visit and comment and invite.
Al ;)
Re. Worldly Words
15th Oct 2015 2:48pm
I like this poem and how you capture death with so few words.
Thanks for sharing
Thanks for sharing
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Re: Re. Worldly Words
15th Oct 2015 3:02pm
Thanks for visiting us
I appreciate your comment.
Tip of a bowler hat you!
I appreciate your comment.
Tip of a bowler hat you!
Re. Worldly Words
21st Oct 2015 2:20pm
Interesting ink, I like the drawn-out spacing/formatting--very suitable to the subject. Much enjoyed!
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Re: Re. Worldly Words
21st Oct 2015 2:30pm
Hello Miss Greenwood
Thank you for visiting and leaving your comment,
would you like a cuppa tea?
Yes, I take care in formatting my poetry, I have this rather crazy "self conceived" notion, that some of the poetry in poetry is derived from how piece looks on parchment. I might have it completely wrong, but I do love moving the words, grammar and punctuation around until it looks like I want it to look.
I'm a little crazy like that. I really love that you pointed that out. Thank YOU!
Al -x-
Thank you for visiting and leaving your comment,
would you like a cuppa tea?
Yes, I take care in formatting my poetry, I have this rather crazy "self conceived" notion, that some of the poetry in poetry is derived from how piece looks on parchment. I might have it completely wrong, but I do love moving the words, grammar and punctuation around until it looks like I want it to look.
I'm a little crazy like that. I really love that you pointed that out. Thank YOU!
Al -x-