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Top Critiquer X28

 
most    po e t r y        eye
                             r e a d
               a'round           here
elicits
profound feeeeeeeeelings
                                of
  an in'tense,
                       though most impersonal,
                       embarassment........aye! speech'less,
                                                         moot-point muted
                                                            hilarities-of-self.
                                                       (no thing other'n
                                                                   make'a'believe
                                                           real pose'ture, 'Me')


no
b o d y        recognizes     Thee Poot of Poet, nor
                                         Thee Pootery of Poetry, nor
                                         Thee
Poom in Thee Poem.........what
                 thfck is wrong wit
every
no
body?any
          way?
                         I cry eye cry
                               "O, fuck me dead mother's mythic monkey"



and "wonderwonderwonder''
                                                 at
                           disparaging dispopularities
                      & general HaHaHooHa moments,
                              when don't hardly any
                                   body co
meround
                                      read my shit..................**

not-to-worry  :      just formularies     soft'mind   hardwire     dis'nature's
                                                                                        brute-human heart
                                          unto                                I'maginary Soul


** (truckload gratitudes to thee few Precious Fews)


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