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most po e t r y eye
r e a d
a'round here
elicits
profound feeeeeeeeelings
of
an in'tense,
though most impersonal,
embarassment........aye! speech'less,
moot-point muted
hilarities-of-self.
(no thing other'n
make'a'believe
real pose'ture, 'Me')
no
b o d y recognizes Thee Poot of Poet, nor
Thee Pootery of Poetry, nor
Thee Poom in Thee Poem.........what
thfck is wrong wit
every
no
body?any
way?
I cry eye cry
"O, fuck me dead mother's mythic monkey"
and "wonderwonderwonder''
at
disparaging dispopularities
& general HaHaHooHa moments,
when don't hardly any
body comeround
read my shit..................**
not-to-worry : just formularies soft'mind hardwire dis'nature's
brute-human heart
unto I'maginary Soul
** (truckload gratitudes to thee few Precious Fews)
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