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पसन्द करना {pasand karana}
I have been resurrected
Fleshly Restored
My new fountainhead jongleur paramour
No dilitante my darlins skills seduce
His raconteur enchants my raconteuse
His carnal speils filled with bawdy stings
Writes His moon festooned in rose fingerprints
Bares manly derriere for sensual !whop!
Animalistic alegories drive me to a bestial she bop
A furious finger fuck to calm aching dee dee
My philosopher stone rubbed thought of my new deity
My buddha nature man devours my every thought
Caused pell_mell decent into love lionized worship of him
Like Asenath Pharoh's daughter for Joseph i purified scent of other men
I bathed for renewal not in waters but suffused in ash
Caused a swarm of bees to take wing out of my gash
Besieged by them breathless in furious swarm
They veiled my lips with purging honeycomb
Honeyed nectar purified as if no other mans name has ever been moaned
Now my troubadour i belong and lie with you alone
Fleshly Restored
My new fountainhead jongleur paramour
No dilitante my darlins skills seduce
His raconteur enchants my raconteuse
His carnal speils filled with bawdy stings
Writes His moon festooned in rose fingerprints
Bares manly derriere for sensual !whop!
Animalistic alegories drive me to a bestial she bop
A furious finger fuck to calm aching dee dee
My philosopher stone rubbed thought of my new deity
My buddha nature man devours my every thought
Caused pell_mell decent into love lionized worship of him
Like Asenath Pharoh's daughter for Joseph i purified scent of other men
I bathed for renewal not in waters but suffused in ash
Caused a swarm of bees to take wing out of my gash
Besieged by them breathless in furious swarm
They veiled my lips with purging honeycomb
Honeyed nectar purified as if no other mans name has ever been moaned
Now my troubadour i belong and lie with you alone
Written by
calamitygin
(Jennifer Michael McCurry)
Published 4th Oct 2015
| Edited 5th Oct 2015
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Re. पसन्द करन&a
beautiful Jennifer you really are a very talented writer..
love these lines brilliantly sexy..
"Caused a swarm of bees to take wing out of my gash
Besieged by them breathless in furious swarm
They veiled my lips with purging honeycomb'
in awe of you lovely lady :)
with love Brenda
love these lines brilliantly sexy..
"Caused a swarm of bees to take wing out of my gash
Besieged by them breathless in furious swarm
They veiled my lips with purging honeycomb'
in awe of you lovely lady :)
with love Brenda
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4th Oct 2015 11:35pm
Awe thank you sweetness. Loved you and Daves roam into thrill kill. Great stuff. If you havent read American Psycho you gotta. Thank you for the RL spot and your awesome comment!
Luvs ya
🔥Jennifer
Luvs ya
🔥Jennifer
Re. पसन्द करन&a
Oh my God I think I've gone to heaven! This is rapturous and lyrically on fire. Oh how I'd love the laying on of hands. This took me on a voyage into ancient legends woven brilliantly into the sensual world of total ecstasy. You played me like a piano. Each note you elicited from my heart of manhood sent symphonies of pleasure deep into my staff of life. Oh how I feel the hunger rising like Ezekiel's fiery chariot. This is your ultimate gift to me your acolyte in love and sensuality.
Deep hungry kisses and love,
John
Deep hungry kisses and love,
John
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4th Oct 2015 11:38pm
Flowed easily from adoration and my renewal through you. To have read you and met you a gift i cherrrish and carry in my heart the rest of my days and beyond.
Love kisses and worship sugar tush
🍁Jennifer
Love kisses and worship sugar tush
🍁Jennifer
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Anonymous
- Edited 5th Oct 2015 00:39am
4th Oct 2015 11:55pm
Liked this very much.
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4th Oct 2015 11:59pm
Hehehe, bestial not bestiality no literal animal fuck here. Lol Jerry you kill me i love it.
Great big squeeze d oll
🌛Jennifer
Great big squeeze d oll
🌛Jennifer
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5th Oct 2015 2:53am
Awe wish ypu hadnt changed it Jerry! Loved the comment and play on words. You take me too literally and seriously darlin.
Re. पसन्द करन&a
5th Oct 2015 1:12am
Jennifer, what a superb adventure! Ahhhhh. Upon reading your prose the second time out loud, the words made love to my tongue...dilitante darlins, animalistic alegories, trobadour...to name my bra size full of these bon mots. One can tell you really put care and thought into this prose.
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5th Oct 2015 1:14am
Yes, the words werent used just to be fancy. They have true purpose and very deep meaning. Thank you Shauna for recognizing this.
🌹Jennifer
🌹Jennifer
Re. पसन्द करन
5th Oct 2015 10:41am
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5th Oct 2015 12:02pm
Hello doll nice to see you cimmenting on a poem! Thabk you sweeet!
🌹Jennifer
🌹Jennifer
Re. पसन्द करन
5th Oct 2015 4:34pm
....I love the spiritual, metaphysical touches in this ink. Exquisite craftsmanship you demonstrate here. Feeling the battle between Moses and Pharaoh to garner Nefertiti's hand ( and her *crown jewels*)
Sensei approve : )
Sensei approve : )
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Ah! Thank you. The honeycomb reference was to a story not included in the cannon but widely a known piece of scripture in early AD.
I said pharohs daughter to be quick, but was a high priests coveted daughter Asenath promised to Joseph. His first wife. She was apalled at first, she was royalty and worshiped plural deity. But fell in love with Joseph at first sight. It was Joseph who rejected her, for her religion.
She then did the ritual i described. Scrubbing her skin with ash and a swarm of bees surrounded her and laid honeycomb on her lips purifying her from uttering worship to false idols. Making her pure and she marries Joseph.
Thats pretty much all thats said anout her. Joseph managed to get hold of divinely "touched" women didnt he?
Thank you my King for your reference. So attracted to and enjoy your knowlage and deep wisdom.
Yours in bow
Jennifer
I said pharohs daughter to be quick, but was a high priests coveted daughter Asenath promised to Joseph. His first wife. She was apalled at first, she was royalty and worshiped plural deity. But fell in love with Joseph at first sight. It was Joseph who rejected her, for her religion.
She then did the ritual i described. Scrubbing her skin with ash and a swarm of bees surrounded her and laid honeycomb on her lips purifying her from uttering worship to false idols. Making her pure and she marries Joseph.
Thats pretty much all thats said anout her. Joseph managed to get hold of divinely "touched" women didnt he?
Thank you my King for your reference. So attracted to and enjoy your knowlage and deep wisdom.
Yours in bow
Jennifer
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5th Oct 2015 8:35pm
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7th Oct 2015 5:18am
mmm,great expression here.was like I pictured you writing this without pause...sexy Jen...very sexy
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7th Oct 2015 6:04am