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Pallbearers
Ready to march past the assembled rows
Seried ranks of friends and family
Tugging at collars and ties
Buffing shoes, cleaning shirts
All is ready all is calm
Now where's the damn body?
Seried ranks of friends and family
Tugging at collars and ties
Buffing shoes, cleaning shirts
All is ready all is calm
Now where's the damn body?
Published 13th Jun 2011
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16th Jun 2011 6:13pm
16th Jun 2011 11:05pm
I think this was for a challenge requiring so many lines. I wanted to convey seriousness and end with something purely idiotic. I envisioned a dark morbid crowd puntured by a slight case of 'lost luggage'.
17th Jun 2011 7:09pm
ah. more noble than mine at least. to me it was just pondering on 'how could i be more like criss angel (i.e a douchebag)'
20th Jun 2011 00:15am
20th Jun 2011 00:37am
