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Under a Tree
I sit lost in fantasy, when my beautiful reality walks in.
Guilty now for endulging in fantasy..
I am blessed by every moment of him.
His haunted face and that shy smile...
Fill my heart with tender longing..
To make long love.
And to make him forget.
I pull my skirt slowly up..
Spread my legs some showing the sweet comfort i have to give.
A wet shine fills his azure eyes.
He falls to his knees before me
Says "You release me from my torment lover."
And leans in.
Breathless until kiss...
My desires reach Mt. Everest heights..
I beg him to climb them.
We spend the afternoon blanketed in each other..
Sun worshiping our naked skin.
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Re. Under a Tree
2nd Oct 2015 4:50pm
lovely Jennifer a very beautiful erotic to wake up to this morning thank you :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
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2nd Oct 2015 4:51pm
Re. Under a Tree
Anonymous
2nd Oct 2015 5:08pm
What an exquisite written poem, Jen. The charming way you went about constructing this is just . . . delightful!
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Re: Re. Under a Tree
2nd Oct 2015 5:14pm
Thanks doll, so much. Really liked this myself. Have came into my own recently. Yours yesterday i think it was, was one of my all times of yours.
Big kiss.
🍁Jennifer
Big kiss.
🍁Jennifer
Re. Under a Tree
2nd Oct 2015 5:52pm
It's a marvel when the reality exceeds the fantasy. You describe this erotic encounter like a sacred moment. "Sun worshipping our naked skin." "His haunted face and that shy smile" is a particularly effective and telling line. He's your lover, not some Adonis from your dreams. Really fine work Jennifer!
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Re: Re. Under a Tree
2nd Oct 2015 6:03pm
Ahh Crow..thank you so. You know my respect for your opinion, thrilled by it.
Your make up poem was so right, and have lines in it like you desribe here. That give such depth in a subtle way.
In adoration
🍁Jennifer
Your make up poem was so right, and have lines in it like you desribe here. That give such depth in a subtle way.
In adoration
🍁Jennifer
Re. Under a Tree
2nd Oct 2015 6:20pm
Jennifer this was an idyllic poem of erotic love in nature. I could feel the country breezes, see the spark of sensual love in your eyes, and feel the wet heat of your lips meeting him. This is a vision which will stay with me. Love's splendor glows in your womanly wonder here. Truly a pastoral erotic work to remember. ;-)
kisses and love,
John
kisses and love,
John
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Re: Re. Under a Tree
2nd Oct 2015 6:29pm
My darlin John certainly your master word use and scribe are present here and in my heart as i wrote it.
Moved by you and your writes, its nature reflects your countenance by large degree.
Thank you so for your presence and influence.
Love and embrace
🍁Jennifer
Moved by you and your writes, its nature reflects your countenance by large degree.
Thank you so for your presence and influence.
Love and embrace
🍁Jennifer
Re. Under a Tree
2nd Oct 2015 6:40pm
My presence is always there for you my darling one. I am honored to know my writing moved you to write this. It gives me great joy to have been a part of this write.
Love as always,
John
Love as always,
John
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Re. Under a Tree
2nd Oct 2015 7:02pm
such soft Eros, my creampuff.. *enchanted, I am..
sensing a fluctuation in your pen.. as if something viciously lovely has crept
into your.. um.. mountain peaks ;)
..musta been a tree of no equal to elicit such moments, yes..!?
"His haunted face and that shy smile... "
~this one gets my zing too.. knee-weakening ways, that haunt..
beauty in these tender moments, Jen darlin.. I find myself in sighs of wistful whimsy..
your hardcore is grand, but your mushy homage? *swoons me!
loves you endless, heart-part of mine..
~d
sensing a fluctuation in your pen.. as if something viciously lovely has crept
into your.. um.. mountain peaks ;)
..musta been a tree of no equal to elicit such moments, yes..!?
"His haunted face and that shy smile... "
~this one gets my zing too.. knee-weakening ways, that haunt..
beauty in these tender moments, Jen darlin.. I find myself in sighs of wistful whimsy..
your hardcore is grand, but your mushy homage? *swoons me!
loves you endless, heart-part of mine..
~d
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Re: Re. Under a Tree
2nd Oct 2015 7:12pm
You sweet thing T. Your ...um....mountain peaks?
Sent me into lovely giggles.
Yes. Something viciously lovely has crept in.
Love you and your wonderfly perseptive mind and ever so kind heart.
So very grateful you "crept" in to my life. You make it full dear one.
Much love, kisses and all my heart.
🍁Jennifer
Sent me into lovely giggles.
Yes. Something viciously lovely has crept in.
Love you and your wonderfly perseptive mind and ever so kind heart.
So very grateful you "crept" in to my life. You make it full dear one.
Much love, kisses and all my heart.
🍁Jennifer
Re. Under a Tree
2nd Oct 2015 7:14pm
This is so richly beautiful, carnal enough to be deeply seductive yet gentle enough to "real love" all over the canvas. You've outdone yourself this time C.G. : )
I applaud you.....
I applaud you.....
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Re: Re. Under a Tree
2nd Oct 2015 7:32pm
Thank you my Sensei. Over the moon by your gracious words.
Thinking of you darlin.
In love with the poem of yours today. Anxious to speak again.
Love n hugs
💋Jennifer
Thinking of you darlin.
In love with the poem of yours today. Anxious to speak again.
Love n hugs
💋Jennifer
Re. Under a Tree
3rd Oct 2015 11:10am
oh my stars & garters, miss jen! this reads like a comforting embrace. simply gorgeous
xoxox
xoxox
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3rd Oct 2015 1:16pm
Re. Under a Tree
3rd Oct 2015 10:17pm
Very nice Jennifer. It's a gorgeous afternoon spent in the sunshine. Fabulous ink.
John
John
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Re: Re. Under a Tree
3rd Oct 2015 10:21pm
Thank you John my sweetness. Appreciate it and hope you are well..thouroughly enjoyed your last write.
Love n hugs
Jennifer
Love n hugs
Jennifer
Re. Under a Tree
3rd Oct 2015 11:57pm
enjoyed the read Jennifer and you're still exciting the masses...
they need a 'something' on the comments section that enables you to get to the last comment first...my finger gets tired scrolling down all the comments to get to the blank box...lol... ;)
they need a 'something' on the comments section that enables you to get to the last comment first...my finger gets tired scrolling down all the comments to get to the blank box...lol... ;)
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Re: Re. Under a Tree
4th Oct 2015 00:14am
Lol sorry Kate, but that is a good idea, sometimes a comment gets lost. Appreciate the read. Adored yours tpday went fast to my RL.
🌹Jennifer
🌹Jennifer
Re. Under a Tree
7th Oct 2015 00:23am
That is one hike I would take with you. This was explicit, yet had some tenderness to it.
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Re: Re. Under a Tree
7th Oct 2015 00:36am
I hope more than some, it was certainly meant to be. Love this person deeply. I like most writing sex mixed with love and tenderness.
Don't always, fun to take a wild pure fuck ride,
Thanks so playwords lol love your screen name. Gives me a giggle every time.
Jennifer
Don't always, fun to take a wild pure fuck ride,
Thanks so playwords lol love your screen name. Gives me a giggle every time.
Jennifer