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Frowny Face
Quiet tide passing
Calm and alright
Forever in an echo-wind
I sleep in ties
When this dawn dies
I come with a loaded gun
I keep it quiet
Keep the faith
While you wait
I'll keep you safe
As the sun fades
Under angel-shade
Listless life lived
Its alright
How I long for embrace
This color to taste
In seasons review
Its going through
Changes out of view
Conversation amongst the crows
In the perfectly straight rows
This road not traveled though
Its all its troubles that grow
Knock, knock door-locked heart beat
After they've all gone, may I?
Be let in, may I? Or just have a seat
Bitter frown on this place
It has all gone crazy
Goodbye dear lacey
Goodbye dear watery eye's
You came with a loaded gun
I kept it quiet
Left well enough alone
But its not alright
No self control.
Calm and alright
Forever in an echo-wind
I sleep in ties
When this dawn dies
I come with a loaded gun
I keep it quiet
Keep the faith
While you wait
I'll keep you safe
As the sun fades
Under angel-shade
Listless life lived
Its alright
How I long for embrace
This color to taste
In seasons review
Its going through
Changes out of view
Conversation amongst the crows
In the perfectly straight rows
This road not traveled though
Its all its troubles that grow
Knock, knock door-locked heart beat
After they've all gone, may I?
Be let in, may I? Or just have a seat
Bitter frown on this place
It has all gone crazy
Goodbye dear lacey
Goodbye dear watery eye's
You came with a loaded gun
I kept it quiet
Left well enough alone
But its not alright
No self control.
Published 2nd Oct 2015
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2nd Oct 2015 1:59am
You, mdear.. are becoming quite the master'weaver of metaphored tale..
"Forever in an echo-wind"... lovely line, just had to say ;)
"Knock, knock door-locked heart beat <~~adore this!
After they've all gone, may I?
Be let in, may I? Or just have a seat "
~loved all, but this resounds in silent echo.. as fragile footsteps but in wry grrs, almost.
emotions laced throughout, of solace given plus yearn, add just enuf to justify this tone from the waiting.
the depth of detail is well woven..& "loaded gun" in two forms really sets pace. enjoyed this Sir poet..
curtsies & hug,
~d
"Forever in an echo-wind"... lovely line, just had to say ;)
"Knock, knock door-locked heart beat <~~adore this!
After they've all gone, may I?
Be let in, may I? Or just have a seat "
~loved all, but this resounds in silent echo.. as fragile footsteps but in wry grrs, almost.
emotions laced throughout, of solace given plus yearn, add just enuf to justify this tone from the waiting.
the depth of detail is well woven..& "loaded gun" in two forms really sets pace. enjoyed this Sir poet..
curtsies & hug,
~d
2nd Oct 2015 2:16am
You're so awesome:) Your words always do my work justice! I am so glad you liked it!
I always appreciate you reading my work and telling me what you think, it is truly motivating.
Best wishes miss.
I always appreciate you reading my work and telling me what you think, it is truly motivating.
Best wishes miss.
3rd Oct 2015 9:14am
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