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Pati Fanm
playfully
she scampers across
my vertical horizon
a the very heights of R.E.M.
There, she hides......
...Pati Fanm
she stirs me from my slumbers
with the rhythm de samba pati
the serpent dances
one eye, can not see.....
….but he does feel her presence
and his fingertips ruffle her
soft
dark fur.
a distinctive, low pitched moan
calls me over to her
and we dance
pressed against every suggestive undulation
I like the way she moves
flowing like rain from a gray, sable cloud
she soothes my hunger, she makes me high
Pati Fanm
stroking her ruffled mane
doves cry
beneath a purple rain
she calls to me
from my deepest sleep
gentle arousal
sensual thoughts dare creep
O Grimalkin.....
…...she slays the dragon
laying my black serpent to shame
she scampers across
my vertical horizon
breathlessly,
I call her name,
my desire
Pati Fanm
( pronounced " päté fäm " )
Published 1st Oct 2015
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Anonymous
1st Oct 2015 9:56pm
MrM,
That rhythm de samba has ruffled many a fur in the throws of nocturnal emissions. Loved the purple rain!
tornado
That rhythm de samba has ruffled many a fur in the throws of nocturnal emissions. Loved the purple rain!
tornado
1st Oct 2015 10:35pm
2nd Oct 2015 00:55am
Two words echo as I read this, "slow burn". Enjoyed the repeated motif of the "vertical horizon".
2nd Oct 2015 3:56am
Sometimes, my ecclectic taste makes no sense. Even though this poem is decidedly Haitian-Creole, my mind keeps searching back to find the song "Everything You Want" by the group Vertical Horizon......and I can't figure out the correlation at all :-/ Aaaaarrrrrgggghhhh!!!!!
2nd Oct 2015 4:03am
2nd Oct 2015 4:08am
2nd Oct 2015 4:05pm
"She slays the dragon
laying my black serpent to shame
she scampers across
my vertical horizon
breathlessly,
I call her name,
my desire
Pati Fanm"
Sweetheart you are so very versitle. This is absolute dream like lovely. With tastes of wild rhythms and notions.
A true piece romancing lust. Lustful appreciation of woman and sex.
A favorite of mine.
With love
🍁Jennifer
laying my black serpent to shame
she scampers across
my vertical horizon
breathlessly,
I call her name,
my desire
Pati Fanm"
Sweetheart you are so very versitle. This is absolute dream like lovely. With tastes of wild rhythms and notions.
A true piece romancing lust. Lustful appreciation of woman and sex.
A favorite of mine.
With love
🍁Jennifer
2nd Oct 2015 7:16pm
