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Beside Me
Early morning
sunshine,
filters through
broken blinds.
Softly kissing
her lovely face.
My hands touch,
fingers trace;
her beautiful lips,
on my fingertips.
Just watching
her sleep,
My thoughts
drift deep.
Why does she
love me?
Why do I deserve
someone so lovely?
While these thoughts
race, a smile spreads
on her face.
It brings me back,
to this place.
Where I love
to be,
watching her sleeping
next to me.
When she awakes,
my breath she takes.
I often lose myself
in her eyes,
Heart thumps
and sighs...
As I lose,
My browns
in her blues.
She sees me
like no one else,
Knows me better
than myself.
From her nothing
can I hide,
and in her all
things I confide.
This woman
sleeping by my side....
sunshine,
filters through
broken blinds.
Softly kissing
her lovely face.
My hands touch,
fingers trace;
her beautiful lips,
on my fingertips.
Just watching
her sleep,
My thoughts
drift deep.
Why does she
love me?
Why do I deserve
someone so lovely?
While these thoughts
race, a smile spreads
on her face.
It brings me back,
to this place.
Where I love
to be,
watching her sleeping
next to me.
When she awakes,
my breath she takes.
I often lose myself
in her eyes,
Heart thumps
and sighs...
As I lose,
My browns
in her blues.
She sees me
like no one else,
Knows me better
than myself.
From her nothing
can I hide,
and in her all
things I confide.
This woman
sleeping by my side....
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Re. Beside Me
1st Oct 2015 00:28am
Re: Re. Beside Me
Thank you so much Brenda.
for your kind comment.
Sweet dreams to you
Lovely Brenda.
Keith :)
for your kind comment.
Sweet dreams to you
Lovely Brenda.
Keith :)
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Re: Re. Beside Me
1st Oct 2015 3:59am
I am sure that you have awakened
and have had the same intimate
moment. Adoring eyes, holding you
warmly in a gaze. Good nite, beautiful
Taryn.
Keith
and have had the same intimate
moment. Adoring eyes, holding you
warmly in a gaze. Good nite, beautiful
Taryn.
Keith
Re. Beside Me
1st Oct 2015 3:21am
What beautiful sentiment, Keith. Here I try to be all grumpy and stuff and then you have to ruin it for me with this. Serious, this is absolutely precious. I can think of no one who deserves to experience something like this more. Happy to see it rolling off your pen. :)
Michael
Michael
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Re: Re. Beside Me
1st Oct 2015 4:04am
Michael, I am so happy to hear
from you my friend. Thank you
so much for stopping for a minute.
It has been a while.
Thanks so much,
Keith
from you my friend. Thank you
so much for stopping for a minute.
It has been a while.
Thanks so much,
Keith
Re: Re. Beside Me
3rd Oct 2015 9:38pm
Still read as much as I can Keith... tween work and the drive to it I'm donating 13 hours a day, 6 days a week right now. Not much free time being granted for me. Could not "not reply" to this one though, my friend.
Michael
Michael
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Re. Beside Me
1st Oct 2015 4:17am
The softer side of this place makes me smile and feel all giddy inside. Loved it. <3
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Re: Re. Beside Me
1st Oct 2015 4:35am
Thank you so much for your
kind comment: so glad to
give you a smile, Mysteriouslady
Keith
kind comment: so glad to
give you a smile, Mysteriouslady
Keith
Re. Beside Me
Such a beautiful love poem,
makes me long for a tender a moment with someone special like that
I loved it very much :)
makes me long for a tender a moment with someone special like that
I loved it very much :)
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Re: Re. Beside Me
4th Oct 2015 1:52pm
Ms Jackson, I am so glad that
you liked this. I am very appreciative
of you stopping by. I can tell that you
have a warm and loving heart and that
you deserve these types of moments
yourself.
Thanks again
Keith
you liked this. I am very appreciative
of you stopping by. I can tell that you
have a warm and loving heart and that
you deserve these types of moments
yourself.
Thanks again
Keith
Re. Beside Me
1st Oct 2015 7:07am
Scene sweetly set w/ sun thru broken blinds sweetie.. the reality begins, line 1..;)
"She sees me
like no one else,
Knows me better <~~favored line..
than myself. ...and most important.
From her nothing
can I hide,
and in her all
things I confide.
This woman
sleeping by my side...."
This last part brings your satisfied lovey homage to full summation.. awes & hugs..
you know well I am smilin' to see this misters.. soft heart-thumping adorables you've made!!
moon blessings Keith..
~d
"She sees me
like no one else,
Knows me better <~~favored line..
than myself. ...and most important.
From her nothing
can I hide,
and in her all
things I confide.
This woman
sleeping by my side...."
This last part brings your satisfied lovey homage to full summation.. awes & hugs..
you know well I am smilin' to see this misters.. soft heart-thumping adorables you've made!!
moon blessings Keith..
~d
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Re: Re. Beside Me
4th Oct 2015 2:03pm
Hello dear one, I am so glad that
liked. Your opinion is held so high.
I feel like a little kindergarten student
receiving a smiley face. Glad the hear
from you as always.
Keith
liked. Your opinion is held so high.
I feel like a little kindergarten student
receiving a smiley face. Glad the hear
from you as always.
Keith
Re. Beside Me
1st Oct 2015 12:43pm
This has to be one of your greatest heartfelt poem your pen has puked!! Shows so much emotion. Absolutely enjoyed! 💕Sissy
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Re: Re. Beside Me
4th Oct 2015 2:09pm
Hello Miss Sissy, it is always a pleasure to hear from you. My
muse spoke so loudly to me on this
write that I can barely take credit
for it. I still long to read something new from you hun.
Keith
muse spoke so loudly to me on this
write that I can barely take credit
for it. I still long to read something new from you hun.
Keith
Re. Beside Me
2nd Oct 2015 2:42am
Really lovely Keith. I loved the ease of flow in this, like a beautiful train of thought. Keep swing'n that pen and we will keep on adoring you!
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Re: Re. Beside Me
4th Oct 2015 2:14pm
Such a flattering comment, sweet looloolookie. I am so glad you enjoyed
this one. It should have felt like a train
of thought because sometimes the pen seems to write for itself. This one such occasion. Thanks again
Keith
this one. It should have felt like a train
of thought because sometimes the pen seems to write for itself. This one such occasion. Thanks again
Keith
Re. Beside Me
5th Oct 2015 6:14pm
Graceful words touch more than lips. Those questions you ask; I have been there before. It makes women a marvel among men. Reverence that we cannot answer the why's. But just happy you are chosen. Great piece Knot!
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Re: Re. Beside Me
7th Oct 2015 4:05am
I am so grateful for you very
thoughtful comments. So
much appreciated. Women truly are a marvel to be approached and cherished,
K2m
thoughtful comments. So
much appreciated. Women truly are a marvel to be approached and cherished,
K2m