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Divorce
you hang on
you let go
you push forward
with all your might
for a better life
you laugh through tears
you cry your heart out
you look at what you lost
what you gained
you just hope to god
it was worth it
you let go
you push forward
with all your might
for a better life
you laugh through tears
you cry your heart out
you look at what you lost
what you gained
you just hope to god
it was worth it
Published 30th Sep 2015
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30th Sep 2015 2:52am
good stuff, lady
sad times, good times, uncertain times ..but your times now nonetheless, so here's to the future
poem reads well and oozes honesty
fair play
sad times, good times, uncertain times ..but your times now nonetheless, so here's to the future
poem reads well and oozes honesty
fair play
2nd Oct 2015 4:54am
30th Sep 2015 3:25am
2nd Oct 2015 4:56am
Anonymous
1st Oct 2015 4:05am
Trying so survive, to cope, to just float, breathing shallow breaths.
There is no other way Jeje..your poem is pure and primal as it can be.
There is no other way Jeje..your poem is pure and primal as it can be.
2nd Oct 2015 4:57am
12th Oct 2015 10:29pm
In every destruction, a rebirth. Your lines are a highly distilled version of the first part.
12th Oct 2015 11:08pm
so true Atakti … thank you for the read and thoughtful comments, always appreciated
