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some of us are trying to sleep...
it was 3 a.m.
you said you could hear
someone downstairs...
so I got out of bed
and I came across
the intruder in the hall
and I asked him
to be a little quieter...
Published 29th Sep 2015
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29th Sep 2015 2:31am
29th Sep 2015 11:25pm
Anonymous
29th Sep 2015 5:49am
Oh, God!. . .And please, Mr. Burglar, don't forget to lock up on your way out!. . .Excellent. . .xo, Devlin;)
29th Sep 2015 11:27pm
thanks, Dev...
just because someone's
a house breaker doesn't
mean they can't show a
little consideration..:)
just because someone's
a house breaker doesn't
mean they can't show a
little consideration..:)
Anonymous
30th Sep 2015 7:20pm
Agreed!. . .Great minds think alike;)
29th Sep 2015 11:56am
Paul,
This one left me giggling ---long after the read! Really helped to make my early morning more enjoyable!!!
(....And after your reprimand, i hope that you told your rude intruder to place the spare key back where it belongs !!) :p
This one left me giggling ---long after the read! Really helped to make my early morning more enjoyable!!!
(....And after your reprimand, i hope that you told your rude intruder to place the spare key back where it belongs !!) :p
29th Sep 2015 11:29pm
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29th Sep 2015 7:28pm
29th Sep 2015 11:38pm
oh I think you would
have successfully
convinced him
of the era of
his woes...
like hey
this is
a bad
time..!
thanks, Dan...
have successfully
convinced him
of the era of
his woes...
like hey
this is
a bad
time..!
thanks, Dan...
30th Sep 2015 00:09am
brings a smile to my face and a chuckle is expelled into the ether...enjoyed... :)
30th Sep 2015 00:31am
1st Oct 2015 11:35am
I did that once, I also made him a cup of coffee before going back to bed - when I got up the following morning nothing was missing, well apart from the fact that he had eaten a packet and a half of my jaffa cakes - bastard!
1st Oct 2015 2:04pm
yeah and they made me
feel really sick, which
is why I had to go home
before grabbing anything,
so thanks for that..!
feel really sick, which
is why I had to go home
before grabbing anything,
so thanks for that..!
2nd Oct 2015 2:03am
2nd Oct 2015 12:30pm
