Ivy

You have superb powers of description, Jennifer.

"Rounded lower tummy that swayed
Into her belly button
That arched over rib cage
That landed in secluded
Rest in the shady underneath
Of her tits "

You portray her in playful but mouthwatering terms, almost like a geographical exploration of her body.

Then:

" Eyes yellow green
Full of questions "

And:

"And when that girl smiled
The whole world
Sighed"

You give us a look at Ivy's personality and she sounds like a real charmer..  This is fine work Jennifer, and a really cool picture.  You've got quite a talent.  Is that charcoal?

Yeah, charcoal and mine.  Thats her. Didnt use her first name.  Thank you so much Crow. Like this piece.  
 
Kiss n hug  
💋Jennifer

This is gorgeous! The sensual resplendence in your description of this woman arouses my mind and body. This is erotic word art at its finest. I truly enjoyed this. :)

John

Ah, thank you so much. Was concerned people would not see ir as erotica, it is to me, sex and sensuality in every inch of her.
Nice to meet ypu, hope to see you'gain.

💋Jennifer

so breathtakingly beautiful is your description and passion of this woman..

in awe lovely Jennifer..

brava ..

love Brenda

Awe, thanks so much Brenda, meabs a lot.

💋Jennifer

Your description was wonderful, Jen, you brought out all of her features and gave them to us to read like we were standing beside that lush,tempting body. Righteous write.

Thanks Jerry you sweetheart. Luv ya.

💋Jennifer

I can't get over the ending it was so strong. It gave a whole new meaning to the loving description of Ivy that you gave us and showed her in all her glory. A gorgeous showing of your talents Jen. I'm jealous of them. The whole world sighed when you posted this piece. Incredible ink.
John

Oh John, thanks so much, what perfect things to say. Thought you would enjoy this.

💋Jennifer

Oh John, thanks so much, what perfect things to say. Thought you would enjoy this.

💋Jennifer

Perfect poetic descriptions...dripping with sensuality..."nourished by the sight and feel of her body"just awesome;)Love it,and the pic.

Thank you sweetheart, one of my favorites ive done. Muah!

💋Jennifer

Amazing poem.  And amazing how we can fall in love or lust with parts and bits of a person's looks.  ***

Awe thanks and yes, she was beautiful, but i hope this catches some of her as well. Because thats wgere the true depth of her beauty lies.
💋J

beautiful, full-figured description going on here.

"And when that girl smiled    
The whole world      
Sighed"

and a beautiful last few lines to conclude. i think all women could use a poem like this written about themselves.

Id ove one! The last man that wrote me a poem, got sweet reward indeed!

Thanks S

💋J

Aaahhh that woman sounds like a
woman of many men's dreams :) so damn yummy those anatomical
visuals n that amazing artwork! :)

Why thank you my darlin Po!

💋Jennifer

.....your words are so vivid.  Reading this literally brings Ivy to life right before my very eyes.  I like the way you shape her to be a very *real and natural*  beauty.  Not an artificially induced runway wannabe.  She is sexual, sensual but approachable, desirable and alluring.....attractive to either sex no doubt.  Changing the shade of hair, perhaps "Ivy" just might be your alter Id.  : )

I need you to help create some characters for a seasonal production I'm working on right now........

Can't say it enough, you talent is phenominal

Oh Sensei, i cant believe this day is real. Think i might wake and die if its a dream.  
I write iin clues and understand it might not be understood.  
 
I described her with kittens and ketchup for the exact reason you said, to capture her personality an everyday princess.  
So special to me. .  
 
She probobly doesn't realize how completely anazing, sexy, perfect fantastic she seems to me  
And the world.  
 
Yes, not everyone understands my pieces, call them little and fun.  
 
But then there are moments like this that life completes itself in one fell swoooop!! Of your wide ever luvin  
arms  
That i would lay satisfied and. Comfortable in. My King.  
 
Would be honor and privelege to create anything with you Sir
💋👑  
Jennifer. Enslaved

By cutting it?    
Sacrilege    
     
She wore it like a curtain    
To keep out the sun    
     
Her hair the only thing      
That could hide the woman      
In her curves    

--I can relate to this particular stanza. How one's perception of beauty, the gorgeous hair, is used as a mask to hide another's perception of beauty- the curves. Is she insecure about her body, her boobs and her ass? Or is she proud of it? Why is she hiding her assets? So many things to think about.  

Yes, she is shy. Doesn't have any idea just how beautiful she is. Though she is aware because its fact, no ego.  Her giggles are hard to draw out, but makes them all the more precious when she does.

You are the only one to ask about that. Lovely thought put into reading this, I like that and am the same way. Ivy ii ss her middle name. Keeping hers to myself.

She is an every day princess. Yes, she is pretty but like the Mona Lisa, a quality in her countenance that makes her a true unique beauty.

Humble, modest, no hint of contrivition. Just her. that's why I used every day things to describe her. Ketchup and kittens, windchime tinkle of giggle. The only thing she is the least bit braggadocio about, her long deep red hair. Kept such care of it. Was a site to see her brush it, braid it, twirl it up into a bun on rare occasions when it was just us.

That is why the rare birds crest is
The only part of the tribute where something exotic is used in this character study. Which is what it is. Tried to capture personality with description of her outside appearance. Good way to improve yourself as a writer set goals, and limit the words and tools you can use to achieve them. Choose every word like picking good fruit. Try very hard not to use big fancy purely because its big n fancy. Have never noticed you doing that though! Thats very good my dear. Their are some styles where it is the right thing to do, but your style is more like mine in that you use words that i would think you use in every day vernacular. My pasaand piece was a little different because i was capturing him, and wanted to use words in his vernacular. Discipline like these things I'm describing help you learn how to focus thought. Once you master some of these technical skills, you may then allow yourself abandon. The same in art and theater.
As to your first question... Lol sorry.
 She suffered trauma to her body, part of the reason she covers up. Her beauty and womanly body can seem almost painful to her.  Did not go into it because it hurts her so. The shroud of her hair the only hint and you picked up on it Darlin.

Could tell you were a smart cookie.

Thanks dear heart for your questions! Made my day.

Jennifer