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SKINNY DIP FOR TWO
The water's lovely - so are you! -
Let's have a skinny dip for two.
The days of summer are dying
But we're still in mood for trying.
There's none else on this beach around,
We can make the splashiest sound.
It's like when earth was new with life
In days of Adam and his wife.
When we come back out of the sea,
We'll make love on the beach, sandy.
If you're aspiring mum-to-be,
Beach babe shall have her "beach baby"!
Let's have a skinny dip for two.
The days of summer are dying
But we're still in mood for trying.
There's none else on this beach around,
We can make the splashiest sound.
It's like when earth was new with life
In days of Adam and his wife.
When we come back out of the sea,
We'll make love on the beach, sandy.
If you're aspiring mum-to-be,
Beach babe shall have her "beach baby"!
Published 28th Sep 2015
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28th Sep 2015 9:00pm
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29th Sep 2015 2:35pm
love this!! it is fun to see another poet who writes in a similar fashion as me.....I usually always write poems where every two verses rhyme...it is fun cuz sometimes I find new words that rhyme with each other. plus, as i write...I am never sure how the poem will turn out. If you look at most of my poems they are like this...but sometimes I go off onto random thought too! I'll put you as one of my poets to keep reading!!
3rd Oct 2015 10:10pm
Oh Soloman this tickled me in my pink. Nothing like a skinny dip, seeems we both had nude water dips on our minds tiday.
And that last line,,,beach baby Ha! Inspired.
Instant fan
Grinnin big
Calamity Jen
And that last line,,,beach baby Ha! Inspired.
Instant fan
Grinnin big
Calamity Jen
4th Oct 2015 9:48am
That was another literally overnight composition. Next day I learned there was an early morning mass North Eastern Skinny Dip taking place on the opposite coast from where I live in England, coinciding with the recent lunar eclipse.
17th Jan 2016 4:12pm
Fun and simple, yet...well..."fun" poem haha fond times remembered with this poem. Thanks for sharing.
