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not so fast...
I was on the train
looking out of the window
thinking how quickly
everything passes
when it suddenly
slowed down
and I thought there goes
another poem...
Published 28th Sep 2015
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28th Sep 2015 2:28am
observation of time flying by with a witty ending..
clever inking Paul
with love Crim
clever inking Paul
with love Crim
28th Sep 2015 8:50am
28th Sep 2015 8:18am
That's how it goes. Achieving your goals by going slowly ...
Makes me think. Thanks, Paul :-).
Will go by bike today. Which means ... fasssssssssssssssssst ...
Makes me think. Thanks, Paul :-).
Will go by bike today. Which means ... fasssssssssssssssssst ...
28th Sep 2015 8:14pm
Hmmmm ... Slowing down to enjoy the journey not just where you've stopped.
So rare in this world
So rare in this world
28th Sep 2015 10:44pm
commuter trains to and from the city
are notoriously erratic in their stoppings
and startings -you often hear a murmur
of disapproval going round, sometimes
faster than the wheels...
are notoriously erratic in their stoppings
and startings -you often hear a murmur
of disapproval going round, sometimes
faster than the wheels...
Anonymous
28th Sep 2015 9:39pm
I think I need to get on your train. . .my brain's been running slow lately. . .many poems lost in oblivion. . .Excellent write, Sir Paul. . .xo, Devlin;)
28th Sep 2015 10:46pm
28th Sep 2015 10:39pm
A thought can come just as quick as it goes.
An inspiration that slip your grip.
It's all good tho...
^_^
Great inking, as usual Dart.
An inspiration that slip your grip.
It's all good tho...
^_^
Great inking, as usual Dart.
28th Sep 2015 10:49pm
it's a strange thing,
from whence they
come
to where they
go...
thoughts and trains
both leave me befuddled..:)
from whence they
come
to where they
go...
thoughts and trains
both leave me befuddled..:)
29th Sep 2015 7:30pm
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5th May 2016 4:10pm
Get out of my head
it's only Thursday
I can't swim
and I'm afraid of heights
it's only Thursday
I can't swim
and I'm afraid of heights
