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blow
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...to penetrated by a dark myth and leave it and you empty...*
I try to blow you out of my mind
but my mind keeps replaying the way my skin feels under your punishment
how the pain lingers and turns into something I look forward to
my tongue tied in knots to match the velvet ties capturing my wrists
I try to blow you out of my heart
yet my heart beats full of your obsession and the private school you started in me
i recite "i love you and you only" til my tongue is dry and you are sated,
then i kiss the boots that have tapped against my skin more than once
I try to blow you out of my soul
and still, my soul sighs in couplets, radiant as the sea, in love with your imperfections
tied to the curtain rod, the rain pelts my skin, your mouth leaves redred roses
and your hands test me inside and out
I try to blow you out of my life
A halo of of cries appears above my head and you whisper shameful prayers in
my ears, your fingers and teeth form a hard team upon my breasts that shivers
me into helplessness
I feel myself slipping and see your elation
on the slick marble floor you stand over me and light candles around my body
have me crawl between them, attached to your lead, forced to blow out each candle
hooded. senses deprived. your beloved wooded ruler
striking me at shocking intervals...
*******
...to penetrated by a dark myth and leave it and you empty...*
I try to blow you out of my mind
but my mind keeps replaying the way my skin feels under your punishment
how the pain lingers and turns into something I look forward to
my tongue tied in knots to match the velvet ties capturing my wrists
I try to blow you out of my heart
yet my heart beats full of your obsession and the private school you started in me
i recite "i love you and you only" til my tongue is dry and you are sated,
then i kiss the boots that have tapped against my skin more than once
I try to blow you out of my soul
and still, my soul sighs in couplets, radiant as the sea, in love with your imperfections
tied to the curtain rod, the rain pelts my skin, your mouth leaves redred roses
and your hands test me inside and out
I try to blow you out of my life
A halo of of cries appears above my head and you whisper shameful prayers in
my ears, your fingers and teeth form a hard team upon my breasts that shivers
me into helplessness
I feel myself slipping and see your elation
on the slick marble floor you stand over me and light candles around my body
have me crawl between them, attached to your lead, forced to blow out each candle
hooded. senses deprived. your beloved wooded ruler
striking me at shocking intervals...
*******
Published 27th Sep 2015
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27th Sep 2015 2:58am
27th Sep 2015 3:21am
27th Sep 2015 3:22am
Babydoll, your longing and sometimes hopeless devotion grab me by the base of my female every time.
Always painfully gorgeous writes Shauna, one of the most consistantly g re at inkers here.
In admiration...
💋Jennifer
Always painfully gorgeous writes Shauna, one of the most consistantly g re at inkers here.
In admiration...
💋Jennifer
27th Sep 2015 7:26am
angel w/a tilted halo. sorrow that must be blown away w/the candle flames...
lovely Shauna such a poignant erotic though I can understand the fascination with this Dom man..
pain etched submissive write so beautiful..
love Brenda
pain etched submissive write so beautiful..
love Brenda
27th Sep 2015 10:26pm
My my my Shakka this poem is so good i have goosebumps wow it really is dark!
but my mind keeps replaying the way my skin feels under your punishment
how the pain lingers and turns into something ---> I look forward to
my tongue tied in knots<----> to match the velvet ties capturing my wrists (Holy Hell what imagery Shauna)
This poem of yours grabbed me be by the balls!
Zazzles xoxo
but my mind keeps replaying the way my skin feels under your punishment
how the pain lingers and turns into something ---> I look forward to
my tongue tied in knots<----> to match the velvet ties capturing my wrists (Holy Hell what imagery Shauna)
This poem of yours grabbed me be by the balls!
Zazzles xoxo
29th Sep 2015 3:36am
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29th Sep 2015 6:34pm
9th Oct 2015 3:26pm
Can you say "Raw" because oh my damn it!
..Woosah.. .
I contemplated long, deep ..
in silence on this one love
thus must say that I merely
shriveled & cringed in the
most un'illumed corner I
could find.... This passage
alone stripped my bare:
"yet my heart beats full of your obsession and the private school you started in me
i recite "i love you and you only" til my tongue is dry and you are sated,
then i kiss the boots that have tapped against my skin more than once "
-Was afraid to see & taste the next,
before acursed me with squirms, but
this I know to have died just to be
re-awakened so that my soul may
witness this passage here, I think
you've voyaged my journal now
surely:
"A halo of of cries appears above my head and you whisper shameful prayers in
my ears, your fingers and teeth form a hard team upon my breasts that shivers
me into helplessness
I feel myself slipping and see your elation ""
I can't, I cannot proceed further
or will not make it thru the rest of
this day.. that's what I told myself,
fighting while covering my eyes,
ears & heart for protection but
then I grew a little more weaker
.. a little more fainter with each
blow:
"on the slick marble floor you stand over me and light candles around my body
have me crawl between them, attached to your lead, forced to blow out each candle
hooded. senses deprived. your beloved wooded ruler
striking me at shocking intervals... "
-Am bowing unto because you
truly struck me, then stole my
heart by ripping it from its cavity,
dangling veins & all.. yet it still
beat ..such haunting souvenir...
My gosh.. something I will
never be able to blow out of
my mind.
-Howlings
..Woosah.. .
I contemplated long, deep ..
in silence on this one love
thus must say that I merely
shriveled & cringed in the
most un'illumed corner I
could find.... This passage
alone stripped my bare:
"yet my heart beats full of your obsession and the private school you started in me
i recite "i love you and you only" til my tongue is dry and you are sated,
then i kiss the boots that have tapped against my skin more than once "
-Was afraid to see & taste the next,
before acursed me with squirms, but
this I know to have died just to be
re-awakened so that my soul may
witness this passage here, I think
you've voyaged my journal now
surely:
"A halo of of cries appears above my head and you whisper shameful prayers in
my ears, your fingers and teeth form a hard team upon my breasts that shivers
me into helplessness
I feel myself slipping and see your elation ""
I can't, I cannot proceed further
or will not make it thru the rest of
this day.. that's what I told myself,
fighting while covering my eyes,
ears & heart for protection but
then I grew a little more weaker
.. a little more fainter with each
blow:
"on the slick marble floor you stand over me and light candles around my body
have me crawl between them, attached to your lead, forced to blow out each candle
hooded. senses deprived. your beloved wooded ruler
striking me at shocking intervals... "
-Am bowing unto because you
truly struck me, then stole my
heart by ripping it from its cavity,
dangling veins & all.. yet it still
beat ..such haunting souvenir...
My gosh.. something I will
never be able to blow out of
my mind.
-Howlings
11th Oct 2015 3:30pm
Hello dear Noire, Thank you for this wonderful careful read and critique. Wow, I am blown away - pun intended. It is thrilling when a reader, esp. one that is admired enjoys and feels a poem of mine. TY! tralalalala
11th Oct 2015 3:31pm
