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Paradise
That's what lovers do
Taste the stars and drink the moon
Scent of paradise
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Collaboration with applepie77
Taste the stars and drink the moon
Scent of paradise
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Collaboration with applepie77
Published 23rd Sep 2015
| Edited 26th Sep 2015
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Anonymous
23rd Sep 2015 8:39pm
Miss Chi.
I do like the way you mix a drink! ;-)
enjoyed!
tornado
I do like the way you mix a drink! ;-)
enjoyed!
tornado
23rd Sep 2015 9:16pm
23rd Sep 2015 8:46pm
I really enjoyed this whimsical. romantic piece. Brava to both of you!
23rd Sep 2015 9:21pm
Thank you so much, Gahddess_Worship.
Glad you like our little collab :-). Was fun to write.
Glad you like our little collab :-). Was fun to write.
24th Sep 2015 00:33am
Dear Paul, witty as ever, I love that!
Enough space for us all and enough
stars to share :-).
Thanks to you from applepie77 and me!
Enough space for us all and enough
stars to share :-).
Thanks to you from applepie77 and me!
Anonymous
24th Sep 2015 6:27am
Lady Chi. . .it is poetic trinkets such as these do I humbly enjoy. . .Excellent collab!. . .Impressed. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
24th Sep 2015 9:11pm
Devlin, thank you so much! I feel honored and glad that you found so many kind things to say about our little poem! xoxo
24th Sep 2015 8:19am
Having a moon-scented drink or two ... that would be nice. Thank you, John, for your kind words!
Anonymous
24th Sep 2015 8:40am
How how lovely and how true!
24th Sep 2015 9:21pm
Anonymous
25th Sep 2015 5:45pm
I always love a good haiku. So many said, in so few words and syllables.
25th Sep 2015 7:46pm
If you want to read wonderful haiku you have to visit LobodeSanPedro's page. He's the haiku master on DU! You'll surely enjoy his gems :-). Thanks again, DesnaMona!
Anonymous
25th Sep 2015 8:50pm
I will nost defnitly go have a look. Thank you!
24th Sep 2015 9:53am
24th Sep 2015 9:26pm
Lovely words, Lobo! Thank you so much!
By the way, I loved your S&M haiku! Steamy stuff :-)!
By the way, I loved your S&M haiku! Steamy stuff :-)!
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