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[font=Tahoma,Geneva]My lips slowly trek
down your sexy,
slender neck.
Following your
spine, to your
well rounded behind.
Slowly turning you
over to expose,
your sweet fragrant
rose.
Lovely petals unfold,
to beauty untold.
Unfurling each
pink fold, treasure
of flesh more
precious than gold.
Tongue and lips
anticipate,
hungry mouth
unwilling to wait,
The taste of
you so sweet,
tongue probes
so deep; swirls
and licks...
flick.. flick.
Smooth thighs clamping
round my head;
hands pushing down,
no words said.
your body's actions
easily read.
Ass raises to meet,
passion so complete.
Raise my eyes to see
your face....so lovely.
Mouth half opened....
pant..pant..
Moans and groans
no stopping....
just can't.
You look at me,
Your eyes roll.....
Rest of story untold.
down your sexy,
slender neck.
Following your
spine, to your
well rounded behind.
Slowly turning you
over to expose,
your sweet fragrant
rose.
Lovely petals unfold,
to beauty untold.
Unfurling each
pink fold, treasure
of flesh more
precious than gold.
Tongue and lips
anticipate,
hungry mouth
unwilling to wait,
The taste of
you so sweet,
tongue probes
so deep; swirls
and licks...
flick.. flick.
Smooth thighs clamping
round my head;
hands pushing down,
no words said.
your body's actions
easily read.
Ass raises to meet,
passion so complete.
Raise my eyes to see
your face....so lovely.
Mouth half opened....
pant..pant..
Moans and groans
no stopping....
just can't.
You look at me,
Your eyes roll.....
Rest of story untold.
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Re. Top to Bottom
23rd Sep 2015 8:15pm
Keith a man who knows how to truly enjoy a woman and give pleasure is rare sexy erotic love the rose metaphor..
with love Brenda
with love Brenda
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Re: Re. Top to Bottom
24th Sep 2015 2:19am
Brenda, thank you for for so ever
kind comments. What is the use
of being with some one if you do not
enjoy them fully. When a woman gives of herself it is a very special gift;
something that can never be taken for
granted.
Keith
kind comments. What is the use
of being with some one if you do not
enjoy them fully. When a woman gives of herself it is a very special gift;
something that can never be taken for
granted.
Keith
Re. Top to Bottom
23rd Sep 2015 8:21pm
Re: Re. Top to Bottom
24th Sep 2015 2:22am
Sweetheart I just wish I was having
a smoke with you. Lol thanks for gracing my page with your sweet
self again.
Keith
a smoke with you. Lol thanks for gracing my page with your sweet
self again.
Keith
Re. Top to Bottom
Anonymous
23rd Sep 2015 9:02pm
Oh, the rest of the story has been told and retold, I think we all understand and know . . . the rest of the story.
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Re: Re. Top to Bottom
24th Sep 2015 3:07am
Jerry we know where we want the rest of the story, to go. Turns out better sometimes than others.
Keith
Keith
Re. Top to Bottom
Anonymous
23rd Sep 2015 9:05pm
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Re: Re. Top to Bottom
24th Sep 2015 3:09am
Thanks Gabriel for visiting and leaving
leaving a comment. Always good to hear from you.
Keith
leaving a comment. Always good to hear from you.
Keith
Anonymous
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23rd Sep 2015 9:51pm
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Re: Re. Top to Bottom
24th Sep 2015 3:03am
Sweet Taryn, I am so glad that
I was finally able to return the favor.
That means a lot coming from a women who's pen spews nothing
but heart pounding. sensual erotica.
Thanks so much for the encouraging
words.
Keith
I was finally able to return the favor.
That means a lot coming from a women who's pen spews nothing
but heart pounding. sensual erotica.
Thanks so much for the encouraging
words.
Keith
Re. Top to Bottom
23rd Sep 2015 11:34pm
....yum
Sexy as hell! This is that skin blush type of ink...... :)
Enjoyed immensely...
Sexy as hell! This is that skin blush type of ink...... :)
Enjoyed immensely...
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Re: Re. Top to Bottom
24th Sep 2015 3:37am
Such a sweet compliment, I thank you
So much for taking the time to stop
and leave a comment.
Keith
So much for taking the time to stop
and leave a comment.
Keith
Re: Re. Top to Bottom
24th Sep 2015 3:41am
Thank you looloolookie, How did you know that's the way it ended?
Who told you the last line? Lol
Thanks sweetie
Keith
Who told you the last line? Lol
Thanks sweetie
Keith
Re. Top to Bottom
24th Sep 2015 3:04am
Re: Re. Top to Bottom
24th Sep 2015 3:43am
Thank you Shauna, I am glad that
You Enjoyed> the only way to
get a second try.
Thanks
Keith
You Enjoyed> the only way to
get a second try.
Thanks
Keith
Re. Top to Bottom
24th Sep 2015 9:56am
Re: Re. Top to Bottom
24th Sep 2015 10:43am
Thank you Ryan , I am very pleased
that you thought enough of the piece
to give it a place on your reading list.
Keith
that you thought enough of the piece
to give it a place on your reading list.
Keith
Re. Top to Bottom
24th Sep 2015 6:17pm
Re: Re. Top to Bottom
24th Sep 2015 6:46pm
Thank you Dean, I am so glad
you liked. I really appreciate
your comments sir.
Keith
you liked. I really appreciate
your comments sir.
Keith
Re. Top to Bottom
25th Sep 2015 3:40am
Very intimate and sweetly tongued poem, Keith. The format and flow is about as smooth as that Top to Bottom you described so well. I enjoyed this.
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Re: Re. Top to Bottom
25th Sep 2015 4:32am
Thank you DPW, for I know that
you are a man that enjoys the subject.
So I am so glad that it meets
your high standards. Thank you
So much for your
More than kind comments.
Keith
you are a man that enjoys the subject.
So I am so glad that it meets
your high standards. Thank you
So much for your
More than kind comments.
Keith
Re. Top to Bottom
26th Sep 2015 11:51pm
A very intimate and sexy poem.
this really inspires me to write a erotic poem just as great as this one.
Well done :)
this really inspires me to write a erotic poem just as great as this one.
Well done :)
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Re: Re. Top to Bottom
27th Sep 2015 1:19am
Ms. Jackson, thank you so much for your kind comments and I look
forward to reading that poem.
Keith
forward to reading that poem.
Keith