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Painted City
They say Summer has come to an end but some things keep on lingering with an acute reminder that time is a linear notion.
Naked, painted women were everywhere in Times Square, displaying their bodies in the name of “Art” and “Female Empowerment”, shedding clothes and with it, inhibitions.
The crowds were entertained as well as bemused with the idea of freedom of speech. More importantly, the abuse of it by some who clearly were not there for a good cause or raising awareness for well intended non-profit organizations. From prostitutes joining for solicitation of ‘tips’ to others dragging their children along and stripping them topless for attention, pestering the crowds for photographs.
Should we start worrying who’s rights are more compromised, the women or the minors?
Celebration of women’s rights should never be condemned or censored but one should take caution to not hinder on anyone else’s rights at the same time. Taking allowance to respect families, cultures and religions who are subjected to view on daily basis. a predicament right in the center of the city, along numerous other places where crowds are at peak.
Consideration for appropriate places are important. When we need to get a tan, we drive to the beach and seek areas for nude sunbathing. If one needs to strip for money, there are strip clubs and not take it on the streets where they are ‘protected’ by law in the name of freedom of speech by abusing and contorting the definition of law.
Innocence is already short lived as we progress in this digital age and to take proactive role in protecting their minds from impressionable images should be something all women need to do for each other and for future generations to maintain the power and integrity by cherishing their bodies, not as objects or entertainment but as extension of their mind and soul.
This has been a summer of shedding many things, for some it was clothes and for others, memories.
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Re. Painted City
Anonymous
19th Sep 2015 1:15am
Lena, this is beautiful and brilliant.. spilling the truth.. love it, into my list it goes.. with love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
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21st Sep 2015 1:49pm
Absolutely Dave. I should be able to go to a conference or a meeting or a play freely without the environmental harrassment.
Thanks for the comment and RL add ; )
Thanks for the comment and RL add ; )
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19th Sep 2015 3:30am
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21st Sep 2015 1:52pm
Thank you sweetheart.
There's no victory in sisterhood when women are paid to take their clothes off in public.
There's no victory in sisterhood when women are paid to take their clothes off in public.
Re. Painted City
19th Sep 2015 3:36am
it's a splendid composition, full of wisdom. I'll do my empowering on the nude beach...
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21st Sep 2015 1:54pm
You know I hate tan lines John. That's where you will find me on my blanket ; )
Thank you
Thank you
Re. Painted City
19th Sep 2015 9:31am
Too many hide behind that "it's my RIGHT to..." Shit n' it further illustrates the degradation of civilization as a whole when formerally, common decency n morality held far more meaning...
Outstanding stuff my friend :)
Outstanding stuff my friend :)
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Re: Re. Painted City
21st Sep 2015 2:10pm
When a woman is taking off her clothes for cash, that's a stripper. Doesn't sound like a woman crusader.
There are places for it and strippers do it for the money to pay their bills. ...... I doubt she will stick around if there isn't money in it for her after dancing......wait, is that why men change a $50 bill for singles, so she can stay dancing for him?
Thank you so much for your visit and excellent comment sweetheart ; )
There are places for it and strippers do it for the money to pay their bills. ...... I doubt she will stick around if there isn't money in it for her after dancing......wait, is that why men change a $50 bill for singles, so she can stay dancing for him?
Thank you so much for your visit and excellent comment sweetheart ; )
Re: Re. Painted City
22nd Sep 2015 1:59pm
Hey if she's a Stripper tryin to make a livin... I support that, but only in the club, where it's a lil more comfy lol ;)
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Re: Re. Painted City
22nd Sep 2015 3:39pm
That's exactly what I'm saying and there's nothing wrong with it........but let me decide if I want to go to the club and watch.......on the street is grimmy......the club is more comfy as you say.....lol
Re. Painted City
19th Sep 2015 2:10pm
First of all, Times Square is a disease ....
Secondly, painted bodies for tips is pathetic
Awesome commentary on our soiled world
NYC STREET CRED LIKE
Secondly, painted bodies for tips is pathetic
Awesome commentary on our soiled world
NYC STREET CRED LIKE
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Re: Re. Painted City
21st Sep 2015 2:21pm
I'm so embarrassed Poe......We've come a long way, look at what they've done to our city.
Those women would make more money being strippers in a club and stop exposing ALL of us to things we should have a free choice to look at......but what upset me most was that woman who brought her 2 year old topless daughter to the bullshit. Imagine the man that would "tip" or "donate" to take a picture with that little girl.....ugh!
Thank you papi for your fantastic comment ; )
Those women would make more money being strippers in a club and stop exposing ALL of us to things we should have a free choice to look at......but what upset me most was that woman who brought her 2 year old topless daughter to the bullshit. Imagine the man that would "tip" or "donate" to take a picture with that little girl.....ugh!
Thank you papi for your fantastic comment ; )
Re. Painted City
19th Sep 2015 9:29pm
Amen to the three penultimate paragraphs. Have been hearing about Times Square on the news lately.
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21st Sep 2015 2:25pm
Of course that's the part that will be in the news all over the world.....what a joke.
Thank you so much for the visit and comment Solomon ; )
Thank you so much for the visit and comment Solomon ; )
Re. Painted City
20th Sep 2015 5:46am
outstanding ink Lena... insightful message you laid out... a pleasure to read :)
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21st Sep 2015 2:31pm
What a beautiful comment Magic, thank you ; )
We have to be careful not to send messages to little girls that nudity means power.
We have to be careful not to send messages to little girls that nudity means power.
Re. Painted City
21st Sep 2015 6:33am
Do you feel it?
Sending heaps of love for this exemplary work, lovely lady.
The practical views shared herein are a refreshing reminder, keen common sense is alive and well.
I applaud you!
C.
Sending heaps of love for this exemplary work, lovely lady.
The practical views shared herein are a refreshing reminder, keen common sense is alive and well.
I applaud you!
C.
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Re: Re. Painted City
21st Sep 2015 2:37pm
Love it when you stop by sir. You've been missed.
Even I go to a certain section of the beach where my tan lines are uh- minimal......there's no point in above a relaxing day at the beach, for me to set off a marathon of "why" questions from another woman's child ; )
Even I go to a certain section of the beach where my tan lines are uh- minimal......there's no point in above a relaxing day at the beach, for me to set off a marathon of "why" questions from another woman's child ; )
Re. Painted City
22nd Sep 2015 8:42pm
....sometimes the effect, deflates the actual cause.
Disgusted with the behavior observed, but you exposed it wonderfully Lena. Very vivid moment, seen through your ink.
Thank you! Xo
Disgusted with the behavior observed, but you exposed it wonderfully Lena. Very vivid moment, seen through your ink.
Thank you! Xo
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Re: Re. Painted City
23rd Sep 2015 2:30pm
Thank you for the honor of gracing my page sweet lady with your feedback sweet lady ; )
Feminist warriors, they are not......
......and when they brought that littte girl to the area topless, I lost it.
Feminist warriors, they are not......
......and when they brought that littte girl to the area topless, I lost it.
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23rd Sep 2015 3:28am
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23rd Sep 2015 2:37pm
Thank you so much Shauna
I came to the conclusion that some just don't realize what they're truly supporting.
I came to the conclusion that some just don't realize what they're truly supporting.
Re. Painted City
2nd Oct 2015 4:05pm
You deal with tradition and stereotypes in a way that allows the reader to confront her/his own assumptions without pointing a finger. This is a good read for any female and a must for any man.
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4th Oct 2015 4:24pm
It's an honor to have you visit and comment on my page. A greater honor that you added this to your RL.
Gracias Jazz!
Gracias Jazz!
Re. Painted City
Anonymous
4th Oct 2015 1:34am
Lena, i read a lot on here and not too often i come across a subject matter like this with a powerful conviction, balanced with justifiable reasoning.
Thank you for entering it in the comp. It knocked it out of the ball park, well deserving win and huge congratulations to you, for always speaking up when others wouldn't dare. Bravo girl!!
Thank you for entering it in the comp. It knocked it out of the ball park, well deserving win and huge congratulations to you, for always speaking up when others wouldn't dare. Bravo girl!!
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4th Oct 2015 4:35pm
Rina, thank you so much for an incredible comment. It was an honor to join your creative comps and to be among the greats ;)
Re. Painted City
15th Oct 2015 4:01pm
A resolute assessment... I, myself, never considered the subject a conundrum. Personal "rights" extend only as far as the point where they compromise the rights of others.
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Re: Re. Painted City
16th Oct 2015 3:01pm
Well said Mr. Neo.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. It's quite an honor to have you visit ; )
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. It's quite an honor to have you visit ; )
Re. Painted City
1st Oct 2017 9:01pm
well spoken Luna..
being a born and bred Brooklynite myself
i definitely can relate to and appreciate this vibe
on a profound level..
"Should we start worrying who’s rights are more compromised, the women or the minors? "
exactly!!!
being a born and bred Brooklynite myself
i definitely can relate to and appreciate this vibe
on a profound level..
"Should we start worrying who’s rights are more compromised, the women or the minors? "
exactly!!!
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Re: Re. Painted City
3rd Oct 2017 3:31pm
Absolutely and thank you papi! A New Yawka like me, YEY! Howdy neighbor