deepundergroundpoetry.com
THE SUDDEN STILL
This is how we fall.
This is when we stopped.
The moment feelings melt.
Then the sudden still.
Watch our past in dream.
This is where we lived.
The moment you just knew.
Then the sudden still.
This..
This is it...
on display...
on repeat...
This is when we stopped.
The moment feelings melt.
Then the sudden still.
Watch our past in dream.
This is where we lived.
The moment you just knew.
Then the sudden still.
This..
This is it...
on display...
on repeat...
Published 18th Sep 2015
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 2
reading list entries 0
comments 2
reads 595
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
18th Sep 2015 2:26pm
The Rhthym initiated is remarkable...and then you have absolute feel of the title doll. Eerie some. But different emotions could be inserted, and a different feeling achieved. I like when a piece is malleable like that, intent or not.
Very very nice doll.
💙Jennifer
Very very nice doll.
💙Jennifer
22nd Sep 2015 6:40pm
