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Django Undone
Enigma Rose rides in with the rising moon
Eyes blazing, hair adrift in the desert breeze
Dust layered on her perfect skin
Soon dismissed with a bucket of trough water
She's here for Django and the pleasures of a free man...
Enigma catches him at the Appaloosa Saloon
Trying his luck with five card stud
In contemplation of the tired whores
He spots Enigma, Wicked Witch of the Wild West
Her lips parted in amused invitation
But few words are said as shots are poured
Or when they secure an upstairs corner room
Enigma smolders, removing Django's notched Colt
Then strokes his cock hard as that barrel
"I've got just the holster you need," she murmurs
Laying back on the creaking brass bed
Django's a wanted man
But Enigma's thoughts turn from bounty
As he rides her all. night. long..........
Eyes blazing, hair adrift in the desert breeze
Dust layered on her perfect skin
Soon dismissed with a bucket of trough water
She's here for Django and the pleasures of a free man...
Enigma catches him at the Appaloosa Saloon
Trying his luck with five card stud
In contemplation of the tired whores
He spots Enigma, Wicked Witch of the Wild West
Her lips parted in amused invitation
But few words are said as shots are poured
Or when they secure an upstairs corner room
Enigma smolders, removing Django's notched Colt
Then strokes his cock hard as that barrel
"I've got just the holster you need," she murmurs
Laying back on the creaking brass bed
Django's a wanted man
But Enigma's thoughts turn from bounty
As he rides her all. night. long..........
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Re. Django Undone
17th Sep 2015 9:41pm
Sir Crow you never fail to amaze me now this was a delightful and unexpected plot twist..
excellent with love Crim
excellent with love Crim
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17th Sep 2015 9:52pm
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17th Sep 2015 10:06pm
Re. Django Undone
17th Sep 2015 9:56pm
darn crowfly
*fanning myself*
talk about stamina ;)
i'll never watch that movie the same way ltm
xoxox
*fanning myself*
talk about stamina ;)
i'll never watch that movie the same way ltm
xoxox
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Re: Re. Django Undone
17th Sep 2015 10:05pm
Thanks Katja. I took some liberties. There were a ton of Django movies made in Italy as Spaghetti westerns back in the '60s and '70s. You can find some of them on Youtube, if you're interested. They inspired Tarantino, although they have little in common with "Django Unchained."
Re. Django Undone
18th Sep 2015 1:36am
Loved the twist! I always smile at the end of reading your inks. Well. done, Crow. <3
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Re: Re. Django Undone
20th Sep 2015 11:38pm
I'm glad you enjoyed how things turned out Lady. Life was cheap in the old west. Thank you!
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Re: Re. Django Undone
20th Sep 2015 11:42pm
I have to liberate Enigma on a fairly regular basis. Either that or she cuts her way out. Thanks Taryn!
Re. Django Undone
19th Sep 2015 7:17am
You have spectacular taste in movies.. & I must applaud what you teased out of your leading lady in this!
I never check categories-- though shud.. lol. ..got caught off guard with tingly ending. ha & ty ;)
"Her lips parted in amused invitation".. this is perfectly killer sex appeal *captured.. by a [sir]Crow ;)
"She's here for Django and the pleasures of a free man... " & "Django's a wanted man"..
~ two of those lovely doubles.. I enjoy the writes twice through when you throw these in.
Damn sneaky great writing, 3/4 innocent innuendo.. then..bam! ..sexy twist, double entendres..(!!)
very Tarintino-esque on that twist..
everbowing sweetie, gdnte hrs,
~d
I never check categories-- though shud.. lol. ..got caught off guard with tingly ending. ha & ty ;)
"Her lips parted in amused invitation".. this is perfectly killer sex appeal *captured.. by a [sir]Crow ;)
"She's here for Django and the pleasures of a free man... " & "Django's a wanted man"..
~ two of those lovely doubles.. I enjoy the writes twice through when you throw these in.
Damn sneaky great writing, 3/4 innocent innuendo.. then..bam! ..sexy twist, double entendres..(!!)
very Tarintino-esque on that twist..
everbowing sweetie, gdnte hrs,
~d
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Re: Re. Django Undone
20th Sep 2015 11:49pm
Thanks Darksighs. I put Enigma Rose in so many different contexts but I try to keep her dangerous. The least I can do. Maybe I should pitch her to Tarantino and see how far I get, see if she blows him away. Fun to dream about!
Re. Django Undone
20th Sep 2015 9:54pm
Oh sweet mother of Hell's eros!.. .
such a dangerous concoction you've
amixed here my darling..my darling..
Neither could refrain themselves
from that want nor the release of
frustration, so they mounted each
other's.. how freaking mouth
watering...
more.. please lol
such a dangerous concoction you've
amixed here my darling..my darling..
Neither could refrain themselves
from that want nor the release of
frustration, so they mounted each
other's.. how freaking mouth
watering...
more.. please lol
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Re: Re. Django Undone
20th Sep 2015 11:52pm
You just gave me an idea HowlingWhelms. Maybe I'll have them team up in Part 3, erotically and professionally both. Thanks for the provocative comment!