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Riding On The Top Bunk
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They call it a sleeper
though I can't fathom why that be so
what with every bump and vibration right
down within my bones felt
Then there's the bump and vibration of the train to contend with too
When asked to attend a meeting in the top bunk with you
They call it a sleeper
though I can't fathom why that be so
what with every bump and vibration right
down within my bones felt
Then there's the bump and vibration of the train to contend with too
When asked to attend a meeting in the top bunk with you
Published 17th Sep 2015
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17th Sep 2015 7:26am
18th Sep 2015 2:15pm
18th Sep 2015 2:01pm
The set up was terrific. I was seeing this as a basic complaint about where the beds are positioned...then I read the ending.
18th Sep 2015 2:16pm
