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...Is
She....
So sexy,
She....
So lovely,
She
Endowed
With inner
Beauty.
She
With heart
So steady.
She
Who loves
So truly.
She
Who
Owns me;
Heart, mind
And body,
She
Who saved
Me.
So sexy,
She....
So lovely,
She
Endowed
With inner
Beauty.
She
With heart
So steady.
She
Who loves
So truly.
She
Who
Owns me;
Heart, mind
And body,
She
Who saved
Me.
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Re: Re. Is
Re. Is
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Sep 2015 3:27am
15th Sep 2015 1:14am
Nice and Is . . .Wish I could comment like darksighs . ..
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Re: Re. Is
15th Sep 2015 3:20am
Re: Re. Is
Anonymous
15th Sep 2015 3:28am
Wish I could comment like darksighs . . .
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Re. Is
15th Sep 2015 1:27am
"She
Who
Owns me
Heart, mind
And body,
She
Who saved
Me."
~Oh & damn, you've created poetry-sigh evoking lines.. you do know, yes?
...Yes here, with this poignantly sharp set. Emotion tugging- *present ;)
[.. now...*this is intent or maaybe you just can't help it..-I'm still deciding which..] ~dark lil smirk.
Very much enjoyed, misters Keith. format was a soothing rhythm of words.
If the "Is" ..IS? ..she sounds lovely! can be read as proclamation or romantic rhetorical.
take care & gdntes,
~d
Who
Owns me
Heart, mind
And body,
She
Who saved
Me."
~Oh & damn, you've created poetry-sigh evoking lines.. you do know, yes?
...Yes here, with this poignantly sharp set. Emotion tugging- *present ;)
[.. now...*this is intent or maaybe you just can't help it..-I'm still deciding which..] ~dark lil smirk.
Very much enjoyed, misters Keith. format was a soothing rhythm of words.
If the "Is" ..IS? ..she sounds lovely! can be read as proclamation or romantic rhetorical.
take care & gdntes,
~d
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Re: Re. Is
15th Sep 2015 3:28am
Thank you so much for your very thoughtful comment. I am so
Appreciative of your kind words>
She is lovely> my sweet friend.
Nite Ms Darksighs
Keith
Appreciative of your kind words>
She is lovely> my sweet friend.
Nite Ms Darksighs
Keith
Re. ...Is
Anonymous
15th Sep 2015 2:43am
Writing from deep in the soul. Love is.
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Re: Re. ...Is
15th Sep 2015 3:31am
Thank you Mister Derrick,
for once again for giving
me a read. Always appreciated
Keith
for once again for giving
me a read. Always appreciated
Keith
Re: Re. ...Is
15th Sep 2015 4:44am
I am glad you think so;
I hope she does too.
Thanks for the comment
Shauna.
Keith
I hope she does too.
Thanks for the comment
Shauna.
Keith
Re. ...Is
15th Sep 2015 4:11pm
Re: Re. ...Is
16th Sep 2015 5:20am
Thank you so much for giving me a read Ms Crimsin.
Appreciate the kind comment.
Keith
Appreciate the kind comment.
Keith
Re: Re. ...Is
16th Sep 2015 5:22am
Re. ...Is
15th Sep 2015 4:50pm
A nice ode to your love... "She" has a style that flows in rhythm. Good work knot.
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Re: Re. ...Is
16th Sep 2015 5:25am
Thank you DPW, for you kind words.
Appreciate you stopping by a dropping
a line.
k2m
Appreciate you stopping by a dropping
a line.
k2m
Re. ...Is
15th Sep 2015 6:09pm
Ah, this makes me very happy in reading, Keith. Being save is a wonderful thing... cherish it. :)
Michael
Michael
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Re: Re. ...Is
17th Sep 2015 1:58am
Thank you Michael for your kind comment. I am so glad to hear
from you.
Keith
from you.
Keith
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Sep 2020 3:45am
16th Sep 2015 00:06am
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Re: Re. ...Is
17th Sep 2015 2:00am
Miss Taryn , you know that there is nothing that makes me happier than
hearing that I made you smile.
Thanks for your kind comment.
Keith
hearing that I made you smile.
Thanks for your kind comment.
Keith