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Mack the Stiff (Part Two)
Mack, Mackie or MacHeath
His names not inspiring the fear of days past
But "Mack the Knife" should do the job
He reflects, sharpening his blade
Suki Tawdry has betrayed him
She, and his other "pets," seeking freedom
"A union of whores," he seethes
And Jenny Diver has acquired a hired gun
Some vicious bitch known as "Enigma Rose"
Not much better than an urban legend
Far from qualified to bring him down
"You see," Mack chuckles, "sluts never triumph
And it's time mine learned some respect."
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Enigma Rose hones the edge of her own blade
The katana once wielded by a samurai
Mack's words are carried on the hot air
The refrain of "sluts never triumph" reaching her ears
And Enigma smiles, knowing the truth...
His names not inspiring the fear of days past
But "Mack the Knife" should do the job
He reflects, sharpening his blade
Suki Tawdry has betrayed him
She, and his other "pets," seeking freedom
"A union of whores," he seethes
And Jenny Diver has acquired a hired gun
Some vicious bitch known as "Enigma Rose"
Not much better than an urban legend
Far from qualified to bring him down
"You see," Mack chuckles, "sluts never triumph
And it's time mine learned some respect."
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Enigma Rose hones the edge of her own blade
The katana once wielded by a samurai
Mack's words are carried on the hot air
The refrain of "sluts never triumph" reaching her ears
And Enigma smiles, knowing the truth...
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Re. Mack the Stiff (Part Two)
13th Sep 2015 8:20pm
Sir Crow love this lady Enigma Rose she sounds like one bad bitch..
excellent inking..
with love Crim
excellent inking..
with love Crim
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Re: Re. Mack the Stiff (Part Two)
20th Sep 2015 11:26pm
Enigma's tough as nails but can be rewarding. I try to stay on her good side. Thanks Crim!
Re. Mack the Stiff (Part Two)
13th Sep 2015 9:16pm
"one, two...Rosie's commin' for you...." and it's sounds like a hack-attack, 'Mackie-Mack'....!!!!
That Enigma Rose....wellll......she's she's definitely on e rough, tough lady to be reckoned with! I can just picture 'Mack' thinking he's still the "master".....
This piece has me craving more of your remarkable creativity! Please do NOT keep me--and all your faithful fans of Egnima Rose--waiting foo long for Part Three....alright?? :)).
That Enigma Rose....wellll......she's she's definitely on e rough, tough lady to be reckoned with! I can just picture 'Mack' thinking he's still the "master".....
This piece has me craving more of your remarkable creativity! Please do NOT keep me--and all your faithful fans of Egnima Rose--waiting foo long for Part Three....alright?? :)).
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20th Sep 2015 11:27pm
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Re: Re. Mack the Stiff (Part Two)
20th Sep 2015 11:29pm
Enigma's next move? She'll probably put me in check. Thanks Taryn! Love you too!
Re. Mack the Stiff (Part Two)
14th Sep 2015 10:54pm
Sexy foreshadows & plot thickening.. You definitely gotts the knack fer story tellings & these are
great established characters from past reads, which I luv. like books w/sequels.
I swear I won't rush you, once waited yrs for a fave sequel.. so sits your patient fan..;)
"Mack's words are carried on the hot air
The refrain of "sluts never triumph" reaching her ears "
~patient but oh-so-curious! lol. So she's CLOSE enough to hear him? or just listening? ..or..
oh-dammit--hushing now.. ha! fergot to mention it's virgo patience. rofl..
Will just say I love the suspense! you are very gifted at this Sir Crow..
good eve to you,
~d
great established characters from past reads, which I luv. like books w/sequels.
I swear I won't rush you, once waited yrs for a fave sequel.. so sits your patient fan..;)
"Mack's words are carried on the hot air
The refrain of "sluts never triumph" reaching her ears "
~patient but oh-so-curious! lol. So she's CLOSE enough to hear him? or just listening? ..or..
oh-dammit--hushing now.. ha! fergot to mention it's virgo patience. rofl..
Will just say I love the suspense! you are very gifted at this Sir Crow..
good eve to you,
~d
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Re: Re. Mack the Stiff (Part Two)
20th Sep 2015 11:31pm
I'm glad you enjoyed Darksighs. I'll try to come up with a sequel before I lose the story line and Enigma gets fed up. Thanks!
Re. Mack the Stiff (Part Two)
15th Sep 2015 6:21pm
Been getting a kick out of your storyline here , Sir Crow.
Michael
Michael
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Re: Re. Mack the Stiff (Part Two)
20th Sep 2015 11:32pm
Re. Mack the Stiff (Part Two)
20th Sep 2015 9:43pm
"Enigma Rose hones the edge of her own blade "
I can see that beautiful deadly glare in her
eyes rising as fires on black canvas,
& that smile ,..no man could ever suspect
to be a venomous thorn in anyone's
side, if ever to cross her path wrongly.
Ouw! lol loving this lady..
I can see that beautiful deadly glare in her
eyes rising as fires on black canvas,
& that smile ,..no man could ever suspect
to be a venomous thorn in anyone's
side, if ever to cross her path wrongly.
Ouw! lol loving this lady..
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Re: Re. Mack the Stiff (Part Two)
20th Sep 2015 11:36pm
She's fun to play with unless crossed. Then she's cutting edge. Thanks HowlingWhelms!