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Mack the Stiff (Part One)
This is still another one inspired by
Bobby Darin's hit song "Mack the Knife"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h8iPUK0AGRo
Suki Tawdry and Jenny Diver
Are disinclined to further tolerate Mack
His brutal way with his "pets"
The women still stagnating in his stable
His specific abuse of old Lucy Brown
His "disappearance" of Louis Miller
Ripping off his hard-earned cash
Then spending it like a sailor
His (Mack's) general insistence on being a sexist swine
And hoarder of their gotten gains
And psychotic killer of certain Johns
So they dial up Enigma Rose
(Who gladly accepts Visa, Discover and MasterCard)
And hire her to DESTROY Mack
Not be seduced by his blue velvet words
Or assurances of "seeing the light"
Enigma smiles slightly, chambers another round
She's got a contract to fulfill....
Bobby Darin's hit song "Mack the Knife"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h8iPUK0AGRo
Suki Tawdry and Jenny Diver
Are disinclined to further tolerate Mack
His brutal way with his "pets"
The women still stagnating in his stable
His specific abuse of old Lucy Brown
His "disappearance" of Louis Miller
Ripping off his hard-earned cash
Then spending it like a sailor
His (Mack's) general insistence on being a sexist swine
And hoarder of their gotten gains
And psychotic killer of certain Johns
So they dial up Enigma Rose
(Who gladly accepts Visa, Discover and MasterCard)
And hire her to DESTROY Mack
Not be seduced by his blue velvet words
Or assurances of "seeing the light"
Enigma smiles slightly, chambers another round
She's got a contract to fulfill....
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Re. Mack the Stiff (Part One)
12th Sep 2015 5:51pm
Sir Crow I love the story line in this one really lured me in..
with Enigma Rose on the hunt his days of abusing women and killing of johns are at an end..
excellent inking with love Crim
with Enigma Rose on the hunt his days of abusing women and killing of johns are at an end..
excellent inking with love Crim
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Re: Re. Mack the Stiff (Part One)
12th Sep 2015 6:02pm
Yep, Mack's in trouble. We'll see how this goes, since I'm not sure myself. Thanks Crim!
Re. Mack the Stiff (Part One)
12th Sep 2015 6:43pm
Crowfly, my friend....
yet another fascinating chapter in the Enigma Rose saga! And, after checking out the selection that inspired this intriguing piece, i imagine that Enigma Rose will not only go forth with her gun blazing, but will not hesitate use her own razor-sharp, 'pearly whites' in pursuit of "Mack"
Eagerly anticipating part ll !!
yet another fascinating chapter in the Enigma Rose saga! And, after checking out the selection that inspired this intriguing piece, i imagine that Enigma Rose will not only go forth with her gun blazing, but will not hesitate use her own razor-sharp, 'pearly whites' in pursuit of "Mack"
Eagerly anticipating part ll !!
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Re: Re. Mack the Stiff (Part One)
12th Sep 2015 8:40pm
I didn't think of that Enchantress! Enigma has a dazzling but lethal smile, and Mack has everything to fear. Thank you!
Re. Mack the Stiff (Part One)
12th Sep 2015 6:52pm
So have to keep up with her now,
am hooked! I always feel as if
right there in your pieces, when of
them, so much happening around
me, vividly the smells & feels.
I submit lol,
am hooked! I always feel as if
right there in your pieces, when of
them, so much happening around
me, vividly the smells & feels.
I submit lol,
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Re: Re. Mack the Stiff (Part One)
12th Sep 2015 8:45pm
Thank you HowlingWhelms! I'm glad you feel the immediacy. I'm planning to throw in some gratuitous violence and t and a. We'll see how this plays out...
Re. Mack the Stiff (Part One)
12th Sep 2015 6:59pm
clever title lol ..interesting tale..truly enjoyed this ..Awesome as always crowfly
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Re: Re. Mack the Stiff (Part One)
12th Sep 2015 8:46pm
Re. Mack the Stiff (Part One)
12th Sep 2015 9:43pm
Oh sweet contract, Sirs of Crow! you know I loved your last piece on Mack[Jenny Diver] & now you couple
the sinister tune ideals with his match I do believe-- excited to see your lil wicked Enigma Rose enter.
"So they dial up Enigma Rose
(Who gladly accepts Visa, Discover and MasterCard)"
~my glinted greens giggle madly here.. how convenient too! ..
You keep me in smiles.. ty m'friend.. can't wait for this gruesome sexy contract play-out.
Feel almost bad for the chap... was Jenny/.45 last round..now here cumz E.R & she's chambering..
& great title- Awaiting patiently on your next saga as I heard mention of T&A...? [blink. blink.]
count on my attendance!.. I'm getting popcorn & front row...;)
~d
the sinister tune ideals with his match I do believe-- excited to see your lil wicked Enigma Rose enter.
"So they dial up Enigma Rose
(Who gladly accepts Visa, Discover and MasterCard)"
~my glinted greens giggle madly here.. how convenient too! ..
You keep me in smiles.. ty m'friend.. can't wait for this gruesome sexy contract play-out.
Feel almost bad for the chap... was Jenny/.45 last round..now here cumz E.R & she's chambering..
& great title- Awaiting patiently on your next saga as I heard mention of T&A...? [blink. blink.]
count on my attendance!.. I'm getting popcorn & front row...;)
~d
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Re. Mack the Stiff (Part One)
Anonymous
13th Sep 2015 1:14am
Mac the Knife strikes again, hmm. . .Did you ever get to hear Lyle Lovett's version of it?. . .Looking forward to your next installment, Sir Fly. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
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Re. Mack the Stiff (Part One)
13th Sep 2015 6:39am
Re. Mack the Stiff (Part One)
13th Sep 2015 4:38pm
Since first reading your write on Enigma, a name itself poetic enough for its prise rose or for a cowgirl in a Tom Robins book and yes as someone earlier mentioned a match for Mack himself. And its correlated three penny opera girls.
Crow was Jenny the real life ingenious pickpocket finally captured? Anyway, more please. 🌹Pretty please. I think Miss Blye should go undercover and do a scathing report on it!!
Crow was Jenny the real life ingenious pickpocket finally captured? Anyway, more please. 🌹Pretty please. I think Miss Blye should go undercover and do a scathing report on it!!
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