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10th Sep 2015 5:17am
11th Sep 2015 5:54am
10th Sep 2015 8:09am
a tapestry of much color & richness, made continuously more beautiful by a loving, nurturing connection...
"butterflies, fluttering wingless" Hats off on that line.
Again you amaze me vee. Your works are timeless, you are a true poet.
I thank you for sharing this beautiful painting of words with us.
10th Sep 2015 1:11pm
my wife loves tapestries - we were at Warwick Castle once
and I must admit that, although of course it's not allowed,
the colour and texture of the Tudor wall hangings were
crying out to be touched - which sort of brings me back to
your poem..:)
and I must admit that, although of course it's not allowed,
the colour and texture of the Tudor wall hangings were
crying out to be touched - which sort of brings me back to
your poem..:)
10th Sep 2015 1:49pm
Vee, you have woven a beautiful piece with threads of color, romance and sensuality. Brava!
10th Sep 2015 4:40pm
A very beautifully written poem. You can feel the love flow from your words.
I,
blue ruins
of fiery passions
the fine masterpiece of
imaginations dappled with kisses
my blood your wine, my body your shrine
That my favorite part.
I,
blue ruins
of fiery passions
the fine masterpiece of
imaginations dappled with kisses
my blood your wine, my body your shrine
That my favorite part.
10th Sep 2015 5:53pm
"I, blue ruins
of fiery passions
the fine masterpiece of
imaginations dappled with kisses
my blood your wine, my body your shrine" this was my fav. part... But actually I could've recited the entire piece, it was soooooo good! My dear, what a beauty you created here! :)
of fiery passions
the fine masterpiece of
imaginations dappled with kisses
my blood your wine, my body your shrine" this was my fav. part... But actually I could've recited the entire piece, it was soooooo good! My dear, what a beauty you created here! :)
10th Sep 2015 11:15pm
Rina, this is a beautiful, and brilliant write.. really love the imagery.. with love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
12th Sep 2015 00:05am
12th Sep 2015 3:15am
"my blood your wine, my body your shrine"
That is such a breathtaking beautiful line. This whole poem is gorgeous, a tapestry of life and chance laid out before us... in an almost voyeuristic view. The ending can be read different ways... though there is no mistaking it for the pinnacle it is. Truly loved this one, Rina.
That is such a breathtaking beautiful line. This whole poem is gorgeous, a tapestry of life and chance laid out before us... in an almost voyeuristic view. The ending can be read different ways... though there is no mistaking it for the pinnacle it is. Truly loved this one, Rina.
14th Sep 2015 7:27pm
