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We Seduce
I watched and fell by your devlish charms..
Now ache the need for you to part my cherry lips...
Once by toungue then by leaking tip...
Taste first glistening drop then suck to full sip.
Seduction greet masculinity greet the power in my hips..
Baby now look deep into my blue eyes..
They plead the need for you to part my waiting thighs..
Plunge inside then fuck away my cry...
Rock me rough sweetness with your savage lullaby..
I cum i die sweet sleep in lovers arms.
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Re. We Seduce
9th Sep 2015 5:18pm
mmm yummy erotic lovely Jennifer ;)
delicious lines..
"Now ache the need for you to part my cherry lips...
Once by toungue then leaking tip...
Taste first glistening drop then suck to full sip.
Seduction greet masculinity greet the power in my hips.."
need a cigarette now ;)
creamy erotic with love Brenda
delicious lines..
"Now ache the need for you to part my cherry lips...
Once by toungue then leaking tip...
Taste first glistening drop then suck to full sip.
Seduction greet masculinity greet the power in my hips.."
need a cigarette now ;)
creamy erotic with love Brenda
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Re: Re. We Seduce
9th Sep 2015 5:24pm
Lol Thanks Brenda. Im dying to know how all the players were part in yours and Taryns last piece. I could barely handle reading it! Lol i mean.....holy mother of fucks!!
🍒
Jen
🍒
Jen
Re: Re. We Seduce
9th Sep 2015 6:22pm
Taryn started of by waking me with creamy probing delights, from there Vegas was throat fucking me after taking beautiful Taryn in the ass.. closing was me getting fist fucked then Taryn getting throat fucked.. then Vegas closing with showering us with his creamy goodness ;)
thank you for reading us and commenting it's graciously appreciated :)
then seducing my mind this morning with the delicious erotic..
with love Brenda
thank you for reading us and commenting it's graciously appreciated :)
then seducing my mind this morning with the delicious erotic..
with love Brenda
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Re. We Seduce
9th Sep 2015 5:27pm
Mmmmm such yumminess in this it made me hunger for some lol
Very hot 'spill' lol
Very hot 'spill' lol
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Re: Re. We Seduce
9th Sep 2015 5:30pm
Re. We Seduce
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Sep 2015 5:52pm
9th Sep 2015 5:27pm
Oh boy, Jen, when you beckon someone you do it with flair. I visualized every line of this fuck poem and loved it.
"Taste first glistening drop then suck to full sip." Oh yes, and yes again, I can see that first drop upon the lips.
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Re: Re. We Seduce
9th Sep 2015 5:31pm
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Anonymous
9th Sep 2015 5:53pm
Heh.Heh
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Re: Re. We Seduce
9th Sep 2015 6:00pm
Re. We Seduce
9th Sep 2015 6:23pm
ooooo Weeeee!!! This is a devilish, decadent delight. Reads almost like an incantation. These words cast a deep spell upon it's reader. Love your rhyme scheme here. Damn Calamity Gin! You've got me sitting here with one hell of a hard on and the biggest damned grin I can muster. Well done !
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Re: Re. We Seduce
9th Sep 2015 6:53pm
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9th Sep 2015 6:55pm
Re. We Seduce
9th Sep 2015 6:42pm
you definitely flow your grown and sexy magic in this piece Jenn... awesome drop! *hi5* :D
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Re: Re. We Seduce
9th Sep 2015 6:56pm
Re. We Seduce
9th Sep 2015 8:16pm
Oh damn-- creampuff!! you are seducing my heartstrings with this 'savage lullaby'..
the phrase alone has deep impact and rolls smooth in sexy welcome..
"Now ache the need for you to part my cherry lips...
Once by toungue then by leaking tip..."
~cream-squeak-lick... first inclinations.. ;)
"Plunge inside then fuck away my cry...
Rock me rough sweetness with your savage lullaby.."
~this is the best healing, fucks that heal all souls! inside out, y'know?
On a most serious note Jenheart, this is an elegant classy emotional piece & I'm gonna hoard it in my RL.
you have outdone yourself in poetic finesse--
most perfectly luved & licked,
~d
the phrase alone has deep impact and rolls smooth in sexy welcome..
"Now ache the need for you to part my cherry lips...
Once by toungue then by leaking tip..."
~cream-squeak-lick... first inclinations.. ;)
"Plunge inside then fuck away my cry...
Rock me rough sweetness with your savage lullaby.."
~this is the best healing, fucks that heal all souls! inside out, y'know?
On a most serious note Jenheart, this is an elegant classy emotional piece & I'm gonna hoard it in my RL.
you have outdone yourself in poetic finesse--
most perfectly luved & licked,
~d
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Re: Re. We Seduce
9th Sep 2015 8:38pm
Awe you purrrfucked doll you!! Thank you. For the RL entry and the creampuff! Lol tickles me in the pink when you call me that! Teehee
Your pic is now on Unafraid Woman, thank you for lettin it. Jerry worked hard helpin me to get it upright! Strange how much your image wanted to lay on its back teehee💋
Love u princess of sighs
⭐Jennifer
Your pic is now on Unafraid Woman, thank you for lettin it. Jerry worked hard helpin me to get it upright! Strange how much your image wanted to lay on its back teehee💋
Love u princess of sighs
⭐Jennifer
Re. We Seduce
9th Sep 2015 9:09pm
"Plunge inside then fuck away my cry...
Rock me rough sweetness with your savage lullaby.. "
These are my two favorite lines to this wonderful erotic. This is beautifully written, Jennifer, and a true turn on, a very successful seduction...
Rock me rough sweetness with your savage lullaby.. "
These are my two favorite lines to this wonderful erotic. This is beautifully written, Jennifer, and a true turn on, a very successful seduction...
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Re: Re. We Seduce
9th Sep 2015 9:27pm
Thanks kindly Crow! Always eager to know what your electric mind thinks about my works.
Was set off by a comment left on a piece that his piece was not erotica, his was sensual and erotica had a "stigma" that it is not true art.
His was a great piece with the story of original sin woven in. And it was sensual.
Anyway, lit my ass up! Erotica not art? Tell that to Anais Nin! Anne Rice! Erica Jong! To Darksighs and Katja and Whelms and Crimson, Taryn. Then meet us in a dark alley!
Now i forget what triggered this,, OH! I know, your latest inspired by the subs down here.
Anyway, thank you. Lol
🍎🐍Jennifer
Was set off by a comment left on a piece that his piece was not erotica, his was sensual and erotica had a "stigma" that it is not true art.
His was a great piece with the story of original sin woven in. And it was sensual.
Anyway, lit my ass up! Erotica not art? Tell that to Anais Nin! Anne Rice! Erica Jong! To Darksighs and Katja and Whelms and Crimson, Taryn. Then meet us in a dark alley!
Now i forget what triggered this,, OH! I know, your latest inspired by the subs down here.
Anyway, thank you. Lol
🍎🐍Jennifer
Anonymous
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9th Sep 2015 9:46pm
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Re: Re. We Seduce
9th Sep 2015 10:21pm
Lol thank you doll. Appreciated from a poet of ypur great skill.
💋Jennifer
💋Jennifer
Re: Re. We Seduce
9th Sep 2015 10:28pm
Re. We Seduce
9th Sep 2015 11:31pm
Another great and sinful piece! Y'all are all on a roll with the writings!
💕Sissy
💕Sissy
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10th Sep 2015 9:10am
Re. We Seduce
10th Sep 2015 6:53am
Very erotically written poem Mccurry. The closing line is oh so fineI. cum i die sweet sleep in lovers arms.
Thanks for sharing
Thanks for sharing
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Re: Re. We Seduce
10th Sep 2015 9:08am
Re. We Seduce
10th Sep 2015 4:42pm
Excellent!I think it'll bring out the sexual animal in every one of us who reads it Jen. Grrr.
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Re: Re. We Seduce
10th Sep 2015 4:46pm
Re. We Seduce
10th Sep 2015 7:39pm
"Plunge inside then fuck away my cry..."
^^^^^
green with envy i didn't think of that line lol absolute fecking genius there, miss jen!
the entire piece just raw & wickedly sensual
loved!
^^^^^
green with envy i didn't think of that line lol absolute fecking genius there, miss jen!
the entire piece just raw & wickedly sensual
loved!
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Re: Re. We Seduce
21st Sep 2015 10:05am
Re. We Seduce
11th Sep 2015 2:20am
Oh, this one's a beauty Jen. Mercy.
"Baby now look deep into my blue eyes..
They plead the need for you to part my waiting thighs..
Plunge inside then fuck away my cry...
Rock me rough sweetness with your savage lullaby.. "
The draw of that stanza is amazing...a lovely contrast ingrained within it. Fine writing here.
Michael
"Baby now look deep into my blue eyes..
They plead the need for you to part my waiting thighs..
Plunge inside then fuck away my cry...
Rock me rough sweetness with your savage lullaby.. "
The draw of that stanza is amazing...a lovely contrast ingrained within it. Fine writing here.
Michael
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Re. We Seduce
21st Sep 2015 10:05am