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A Similitic Metapho' Like Pathos of Thee Hard Cell

what's it like? �How's all thee
� � � � � � botheration
� � what's shaking this tree?

� � � � � �
� � � �this Po'Tree, indeed.....

shivering sapling � � � � or
� � � is thee Earth Moving
� � � � � �Underfoot
� � � �just for me,(?), like as-if
dancin thee Paradigm Slide.....

justhink � of � allsouls �get �trapped
� � � � �in thee
outhouse (even a 2seater)....old
� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � shit
� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � �shifting
� � � � � � � � �like hell like heaven like
� � � � � � � � �all-points eternal be tween -

hey. �aye never spoke to mother that way, even
� � when she damnwell deserved it. �Now,
the ol'girl is too dead
� � � � � � � � � � � � �to know
� � � � � � � � � �thee difference.......&, shit,
� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � �maybe me too,(yknow?) ///////

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Written by dkzksaxxas_DanielX

(DadaDoggyDannyKozakSaxfn)

Published 3rd Sep 2015

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Re. A Similitic Metapho' Like Pathos of Thee Hard Cell

darksighs

3rd Sep 2015 6:47am

"justhink of allsouls get trapped
in thee
outhouse (even a 2seater)" <~~!! ;)
~you must have a least cracked a wry grin writing this 'un.. cuz my smirk is proudly luvin this wording..
reminds also of an old Saturday Night Live skit "love toilet".. a couple bk to bk- I shit you not!! *giggles

" like hell like heaven like
all-points eternal be tween "
~poignantly dark, true & still beautiful.. closed my eyes & felt this one..

Wud call this a work not pity'd moreso damn witty!
hughug Sirz o D
~d