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I love such short poems..the spatial meanings loaded,  n the profound insights,  esp. When it comes not in heavyworded terms. ( juz culdnt stop myself mentioning,  tat am somehw reminded of one of my adored  yung n profound dup poets, kameron, by this read)  
 
this construct gave me a rush of recollected memories n emotions,  almost mostly dark n bitter n blues n monotonies. , also adds up to my strong anti-corp sentiments.. n  you indirectly n equally had built up nostalgia n unending  love twrds wat is home n nature n freedom...something that is v.organic
Agn, Simple yet  amazing.. when u put me thinking..how the same way gains a growing yearn when taken  back..Also hints me,  paths traversed are destined,  critical n unavoidable, in our search  

I felt i talked too much..but tats wat ur words inspired. Kudos dear..keep writing n venting out..xx

(ahh srry, am reposting same comments after deleting original comments..the spacing  are getting lost in them if i modified .lol, tats an issue to be for admin help perhaps)

Not a worry, lovely Uma. I always appreciate your comments and I am glad that the short work inspired and encouraged thought. Thank you for your time and effort.

I don't know anyone who can't relate to this. The fact that you're biking into a world that's lost its footing with all that seems natural says all I need to know. Well brevity of the piece reflects the spirit of less is more while having everything.

do you mean

as soon

as you get
there..?

I feel like
that all
the time..:)

This poem reminds me of the following Bukowski quote:

“Sometimes you climb out of bed in the morning and you think, I'm not going to make it, but you laugh inside — remembering all the times you've felt that way"

.... I'm still waiting for the laughter when I leave the house...

Thank you for the read.

I love the simplicity of this. The observation of being called back to where we came from, and the unfortunate obligation we have to be somewhere. Great little write!