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Re. Les Feuilles Mortes (Autumn Leaves)
1st Sep 2015 2:54pm
such a breathtaking beautiful collaboration so in love with this ink :)
with love Brenda
with love Brenda
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Re: Re. Les Feuilles Mortes (Autumn Leaves)
2nd Sep 2015 7:11am
Thank you so much Brenda, I've always been a huge fan of his voice and songs and when i saw your comp, i knew i had to find a song that was special to me. Besame' mucho of course has always been my favorite but this one held a special place in my heart. So I thank you for the opportunity to work with Dave who has always been an awesome collaborator with me in the past, making things so easy and comfortable.
I'm rather proud of this work and to share it with him is something i will always remember. Much love to you, always :)
I'm rather proud of this work and to share it with him is something i will always remember. Much love to you, always :)
Re. Les Feuilles Mortes (Autumn Leaves)
1st Sep 2015 3:50pm
"kindler of my winter years..."
I love that image...
must be quite a match..:)
I love that image...
must be quite a match..:)
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Re: Re. Les Feuilles Mortes (Autumn Leaves)
3rd Sep 2015 3:30am
Thank you Dartford on behalf of Dave and myself for liking the imagery..i kinda like that line also :)
The collaboration was rather smooth and we are good friends.
He is happily married to a wonderful writer here on Du.
The collaboration was rather smooth and we are good friends.
He is happily married to a wonderful writer here on Du.
Re. Les Feuilles Mortes (Autumn Leaves)
1st Sep 2015 4:42pm
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3rd Sep 2015 3:49am
Re. Les Feuilles Mortes (Autumn Leaves)
1st Sep 2015 8:11pm
That's a true romantic piece. Love your elegant wording, Vee, it's so amazing!
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Re: Re. Les Feuilles Mortes (Autumn Leaves)
4th Sep 2015 6:04am
This genre has always come easy for me, i'm not sure its because i'm a hopeless romantic or i just love beauty of words.
Thank you Ms. Chi for your wonderful feedback.
Thank you Ms. Chi for your wonderful feedback.
Re. Les Feuilles Mortes (Autumn Leaves)
1st Sep 2015 11:18pm
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4th Sep 2015 6:16am
Re. Les Feuilles Mortes (Autumn Leaves)
2nd Sep 2015 00:38am
Ah, the sentiment to this is beautiful, Rina. Elegance on display. Feelings like this are to be treasured, always... and so nice to see them recognized as sacred, for they truly are.
Michael
Michael
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Re: Re. Les Feuilles Mortes (Autumn Leaves)
4th Sep 2015 6:19am
The song was a great inspiration and writing with Dave has always come smooth and easy, i'm glad it translated well with the words and form.
Thank you Michael for the great compliment.
Thank you Michael for the great compliment.
Re. Les Feuilles Mortes (Autumn Leaves)
2nd Sep 2015 5:02am
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4th Sep 2015 4:47pm
it sure does Ahavati, it all comes back to circle, thank you for reading and for your comment.
Re. Les Feuilles Mortes (Autumn Leaves)
2nd Sep 2015 7:54am
poetry that traverses beyond storms & winters. colors of sky & earth...
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Re: Re. Les Feuilles Mortes (Autumn Leaves)
4th Sep 2015 4:48pm
Re. Les Feuilles Mortes (Autumn Leaves)
I love autumn imagery in poetry. The opening lines paint such a magical mental image, reminds me of raking leaves when I was younger, such found memories. And after that the emotion and metaphors and blend together so perfectly, I enjoyed this immensely. Thank you very much for writing and sharing this.
Best wishes miss vee:)
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Re: Re. Les Feuilles Mortes (Autumn Leaves)
4th Sep 2015 4:54pm
My favorite season is autumn also but unfortunately i don't get to experience it anymore where i live. There is beauty, mystery, loss, reflection all in that one season that in my opinion the other seasons don't bear. Just my subjective take on it :)
Thank you anon for liking it so much, i truly appreciate it.
Thank you anon for liking it so much, i truly appreciate it.
Re. Les Feuilles Mortes (Autumn Leaves)
4th Sep 2015 8:59pm
I like this version of the song. French is such a sensual language. I'm still partial to the Nat king Cole rendering. Your collaboration is steeped in romance. Well done. The last line is awesome.
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Re: Re. Les Feuilles Mortes (Autumn Leaves)
5th Sep 2015 00:28am
I'm listening to Nat King Cole's version right now and its my first time.
It's equally gorgeous as the french version, but then again his voice is just amazing.
Thanks for the tip GW for pointing me to his direction, the lyrics in english most certainly give it depth and I'm so glad this poem turned out worthy of both artists.
It's equally gorgeous as the french version, but then again his voice is just amazing.
Thanks for the tip GW for pointing me to his direction, the lyrics in english most certainly give it depth and I'm so glad this poem turned out worthy of both artists.
Re: Re. Les Feuilles Mortes (Autumn Leaves)
5th Sep 2015 00:58am
I am glad you're listening to NKC. I think he has one of the most romantic voices ever. Romance est merveilleux n'est pas?
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Re. Les Feuilles Mortes (Autumn Leaves)
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Re: Re. Les Feuilles Mortes (Autumn Leaves)
6th Sep 2015 1:17am
Re. Les Feuilles Mortes (Autumn Leaves)
19th Sep 2015 8:02am
Autumn Leaves
Kindler of my winter years
Beautiful Vee - Here is a beautiful dance in the open air
Kindler of my winter years
Beautiful Vee - Here is a beautiful dance in the open air
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