Sirs Venus

lovely Jennifer I love this..
Our sex made etchings on my body.
Left ligiture marks to be tucked away,
I did not want to.
I Wore them proud but private brands.
Hard to hide what i had becum."

a submissive work of art :)

with love Brenda

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Thank you Brenda. He cums back to me so often. You cant undo yourself once you submit truely. Not that i want to.

Love you doll.
🌹Jennifer

you are is work of art jen  

Awe, so sweet Glen. I find you so endearing. Thank you.

🌷J

that's me ha ha

Yep, you and your bunny pic! Ha ha

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J

i try not to delve into twuism, but this really speaks of old guard D/s [a lost art imho] ...
"He easily molded me into to shapes i'd never wanted to
bend.
But my God how i did!"
^^^^^
... you paint with beautiful words, miss jen
xoxox

Oh thank you Shadoe. Very much appreciated.  Its not something i take lightly. Or have even ever done again, that way at least. But there were empowering effects both our parts,  true respect, love and care.   🌷Jennifer

Loving this piece! That 'giving' in and 'giving' over of ones self. Truly freeing. I also really enjoy your bending of words, the wrapping so to speak. Loves.

Yes, agreed Miss lookie. That is a trait i carry with me, and when experienced fully, found intensely liberating. Thanks for your read and words.

🍎J

You are sub-incarnate here, wif beautiful embracing. Amazing poetry today luvluv.. my RL is a'purrrr
& hoarding this one. I share your obvs delight at the hands of the right Sir.

"After capture Sir began sculpting me.  
There is power in becumming mans Art.   <~~agrees.
It went straight to my head,  
and i would have lived and died in his bed." <~~ swoon*
~you are making a gal crave and fukin crave, Jen-doll of pen!

This is all perfect.. *squeaks me. You've showed the sub- side as lovely and beautiful- as it damn well shud be!  
mwahs from a doting ~T

T, you complete my thrill of writing with your comments. I look forward to them so.
Many thank yous on your faithfull support and "luvs" on my poems.

You know how much of a guiding inspiration yours are to me.

The doting feels cozy warm from such a woman as you.

Luv kisses and doting back
🍎Jen

I'd say he's made you a masterpiece, but you have your own beauty.  Think of all the great works of art that still exist, having their own life after Michelangelo, Picasso or other maestros are long gone.  Yours is clearly a different story (involving romance and eroticism) but I like to think of you as being independent to some degree.  I really know very little concerning the dynamics between dominants and submissives, but at least this got me thinking.  Really enjoyed this Jennifer!

Good, and thank you. I am independent and comfy in my own Sexuality, talent, and self worth to full degree. This was a look back. He sculpted me into submission, not as a woman. Its not an easy thing to understand. It was a sexual awakening, i think everyone has one. As to Katja's point earlier, about the lost art of d s relations, its redefined these days by bad players, acting in pure sadism and masochism. Not a partnership based on both players with though not obvious, equal power in the relationship. There is a very deep reason i was set free by never having to use the word "no" with him.  Its power and meaning had been taken from me.
Thank you for your honest remarks, and fine compliment. And for being open and willing to enjoy something that leaves maybe a bad taste in your mouth. I understand why, and that endears you to me Crow.

🌷J

I see the brands as marks of beauty, not to be hidden, but displayed as reflections of fulfillment. it's a fine meld of hardcore sex & art...

Thank you John. As said. Not something i wanted to hide. But had to. Your words give validation. Appreciated.

Theres white stripe around my left ankle i no longer cover.

🍎J

I enjoyed the read Jen and in particular your reply to Crow...

Thank you Kate, and crow and i talked. He is a great guy, a great talent, i love his poems and always his comments.

I would be proud to call him friend.
And you.

🌷Jen

becum

Noted. Nice work, Jen.

Thank you. Your divine was needed. Namaste

🍎J

Oh freaking goodness! I am adorning you whole & fully, have lost my words.. do forgive me, my mind is filled up, overly flowing .. I must not have it any other way.. Muwah muwah loving on this my jen.. very much deeply

My goddess!! Forgiven! Lol thanks. Tickle me...💌

🚬💋J

Wow just wow the word of your poem flow so effortlessly off the page and in to my mind as if I living in your world myself
I favorite line is this one. He easily molded me into to shapes i'd never wanted to bend.    Who doesn't like a bendy women heeheh.

Lol a bendy woman. Thanks DP for your thoughts and praise...

😈
J

Adore your poem...a woman fully committed to being molded by her Sir and finding herself and joy.

Thank you Shauna, appreciated from a
Chick like you!

  🎻J

After capture Sir began sculpting me.
I wonder who's capture this really was. You are so proud of your new etchings that I  believe that if was you who captured Sir and you used him to your heart's content. I wonder what etchings he has that you've left in his mind? Beautiful ink as usual Jen.
John

Lol thank you John. And im quite sure we captured each other in ways.. Always. For reading and your thoughtful comments.

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J

"Our sex made etchings on my body.  
Left ligiture marks to be tucked away,  
I did not want to.  
I Wore them proud but private brands.  
Hard to hide what i had becum.  
 
His bit of perfection,  
Sirs creation."

wow he definitely left something to remember for days... very smokin' hot ink Jenn :D

Thanks MV. Sumthin in the water.  Yours was...fifth cigarette since reading i think lol. Magic dreams doll. ⭐⭐

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Jen

submissive...;)...good girl,lol ;)

The two words er bad grrrl wanna hear.

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Jen

This is an interesting piece. There is more emotion here than just erotic play by play. The etchings and shaping show an allowance to be moved in a way that may be pleasant despite its newness. Well written Calam.

Thanks mih darlin DpW. There was a deep well of emotion and care between us. Yes i was compliant and obeyed him. My want too. I loved it all!

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Jennifer

Passion on fire my friend. Beautiful. You are the clay he is the potter. The depth of this one is amazing. To have his mark imprinted indelibly into your very soul is profound indeed. The emotional power is takes me deep into your sexuality and spirit. Absolutely wonderful.  ;-)

Love and kisses,
John

Oh thank you so. Hadnt seen you read when i messaged ypu so obviously disreguard certain comments.
Im so overjoyed for you to be able to see into my deep sexual nature.
Submission isnt necessary for me in a relationship, but always a way i bend in certain ways even if my lover isnt of dominate nsture. By fully giving him heart and soul.

Love and swats darlin

J