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Summer Love
This summer, trimmed in your kisses, sewn up in your love
I thought to re-educate myself on the sorrows love can bring
but failing that class, I became a student of love's addictive power
You said I've thrown you off kilter, suffering vertigo each time you pass
an open window and want to call my name, dizzy in the sound of me on
your lips, our nights shine as day and day murders all doubts.
In our rambling, messy home we make love in each room, set standards
that go deep into the earth like kids digging to china in their backyard.
I eat your poppies and you dine on my lovesick mouth, we play on the porch
and let this unending summer of rain and love wash over our hearts and
teach us what school or well-meaning family never could.
I thought to re-educate myself on the sorrows love can bring
but failing that class, I became a student of love's addictive power
You said I've thrown you off kilter, suffering vertigo each time you pass
an open window and want to call my name, dizzy in the sound of me on
your lips, our nights shine as day and day murders all doubts.
In our rambling, messy home we make love in each room, set standards
that go deep into the earth like kids digging to china in their backyard.
I eat your poppies and you dine on my lovesick mouth, we play on the porch
and let this unending summer of rain and love wash over our hearts and
teach us what school or well-meaning family never could.
Published 28th Aug 2015
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28th Aug 2015 6:14pm
I don't like that the summer I'd ending either mamacita. You painted fun, sexy and sad.
Sweet ink
Sweet ink
28th Aug 2015 6:52pm
28th Aug 2015 8:22pm
'set standards
that go deep into the earth like kids digging to china in their backyard. ' This poem is like watching a dance. I really enjoyed this throughout, the soft movements and gentle moments. Thank you for the write.
that go deep into the earth like kids digging to china in their backyard. ' This poem is like watching a dance. I really enjoyed this throughout, the soft movements and gentle moments. Thank you for the write.
28th Aug 2015 8:31pm
Shauna such a gifted writer you are this is full of beautiful poetic gems :)
with love Brenda
with love Brenda
28th Aug 2015 11:50pm
28th Aug 2015 11:59pm
29th Aug 2015 00:08am
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29th Aug 2015 00:10am
Such a wonderful write dear Shauna. Such a beautiful description of love gone right. Enjoyed the
flow. Solid and refreshing tell.
Thanks for these little pieces of
Heaven you write,
Keith
29th Aug 2015 7:33pm
OOoo, must confess.. You have captured my little bitty heart,
extremely loving on this piece!! oh gosh,
what I am .. going to do. for you lend
me speechless swallows all the times.
Your'e voice, is un'ordinary,odd &
beautifully eerie.. & if I were to read you any
where else ..mmh even probably later in
a few years. It would be recognized because
of your genuine signature.
A pleasurous depth of brail you
lend, & my soul is humbled to have
this chance of being within the same
poetic province. How lovely to
actually finally feel & breathe another's
language.
& this whole thing:
""This summer, trimmed in your kisses, sewn up in your love
I thought to re-educate myself on the sorrows love can bring
but failing that class, I became a student of love's addictive power
You said I've thrown you off kilter, suffering vertigo each time you pass
an open window and want to call my name, dizzy in the sound of me on
your lips, our nights shine as day and day murders all doubts.
In our rambling, messy home we make love in each room, set standards
that go deep into the earth like kids digging to china in their backyard.
I eat your poppies and you dine on my lovesick mouth, we play on the porch
and let this unending summer of rain and love wash over our hearts and
teach us what school or well-meaning family never could. ""
Ok, so ramble I do.. but you are killer interesting & that is
what I truly explore in reading others. No words for you,
lol. Keep evolving love.
extremely loving on this piece!! oh gosh,
what I am .. going to do. for you lend
me speechless swallows all the times.
Your'e voice, is un'ordinary,odd &
beautifully eerie.. & if I were to read you any
where else ..mmh even probably later in
a few years. It would be recognized because
of your genuine signature.
A pleasurous depth of brail you
lend, & my soul is humbled to have
this chance of being within the same
poetic province. How lovely to
actually finally feel & breathe another's
language.
& this whole thing:
""This summer, trimmed in your kisses, sewn up in your love
I thought to re-educate myself on the sorrows love can bring
but failing that class, I became a student of love's addictive power
You said I've thrown you off kilter, suffering vertigo each time you pass
an open window and want to call my name, dizzy in the sound of me on
your lips, our nights shine as day and day murders all doubts.
In our rambling, messy home we make love in each room, set standards
that go deep into the earth like kids digging to china in their backyard.
I eat your poppies and you dine on my lovesick mouth, we play on the porch
and let this unending summer of rain and love wash over our hearts and
teach us what school or well-meaning family never could. ""
Ok, so ramble I do.. but you are killer interesting & that is
what I truly explore in reading others. No words for you,
lol. Keep evolving love.
30th Aug 2015 00:31am
30th Aug 2015 00:33am
Thank you Whelms! I am blown away by your generous compliment. With the help of poets like you I hope to evolve. Thanks so very much! And I adore reading your poetry.
