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Darkly Inclined
Token gem given of heart in love.
A ninth finger-grace.. appraised above
much brighter stones, craved shinier ones.
Mine[d] unbreakable, his forever bond.
Hand's luminescence equating All,
Fate's cherished soulstar ..[destined to fall]..
As bearer and wearer disagree,
on shadow-cast imperfection seen..
Hexed wonder mars authenticity.
[Small fist shakes to imaginary score]..
Cutting into glass 'til teardrops form.
Scratching truism.. leaking life's blood,
once cleanly sucked.. now fending forked tongue.
Shattered raw knuckles.. dripping and torn,
sling fleshy pink jewels.. trust to scorn.
Roughly-rubbed dull.. platinum adorned,
ding'ed up resentment, carats long worn.
Thrown myriad hurts.. luster hard-tried,
told of worth dwindle, eyes wetly opine..
This diamond shrine has lost its shine.
[preferring onyx.. is that a sign-
unloveable or darkly inclined?]
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Re. Darkly Inclined
28th Aug 2015 7:22pm
Famous last lines, indeed!
Prefering onyx, is that a sign of loveable or darkly inclined?
Jeez D! This is exquisitely dark AND you are loveable in the extreme.
We rage! Dont we sometimes, and sometimes its a need.
So rage on my lady of sighs, right into my heart.💛
🌹J
Prefering onyx, is that a sign of loveable or darkly inclined?
Jeez D! This is exquisitely dark AND you are loveable in the extreme.
We rage! Dont we sometimes, and sometimes its a need.
So rage on my lady of sighs, right into my heart.💛
🌹J
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Re: Re. Darkly Inclined
28th Aug 2015 10:54pm
sweet hellz yes on rage & need darlin, Jen.. need fer what tho? wickedly dark healing has
commenced & we shall damn well see!! winx. seems to last forever, the shrouded.*sigh
ty fer the dark n luvable.. Duz get u kisses too ;)
hot weekend wishes to you lady-luv,
~d
commenced & we shall damn well see!! winx. seems to last forever, the shrouded.*sigh
ty fer the dark n luvable.. Duz get u kisses too ;)
hot weekend wishes to you lady-luv,
~d
Re. Darkly Inclined
28th Aug 2015 8:38pm
lovely d~ I prefer onyx to anything that shines it's false light are our beautiful darkness any day ;)
masterful writing with love Crim
masterful writing with love Crim
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Re: Re. Darkly Inclined
28th Aug 2015 11:09pm
Crim de la crème.. you nail me[sweetly too] on this. I loves fits outta the
false light summation. applies to every damn mood I'm in at moment. ty
*onyx & silver til I'm outtie- fer sure ;) raw & dark as possible..Adores you on my page everly!
much luvstuffs,
~d
false light summation. applies to every damn mood I'm in at moment. ty
*onyx & silver til I'm outtie- fer sure ;) raw & dark as possible..Adores you on my page everly!
much luvstuffs,
~d
Re. Darkly Inclined
28th Aug 2015 10:20pm
I like this poem you can feel the emotion etched in the word as you read them.
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Re: Re. Darkly Inclined
28th Aug 2015 11:17pm
Gracious welcomes to my page sweetie.. appreciate you takin time on me..
& fer feeling the inkings...I do humble curtsy my dark sighing thanx.
will be catching up this wknd & you are on my list..;)
~d
& fer feeling the inkings...I do humble curtsy my dark sighing thanx.
will be catching up this wknd & you are on my list..;)
~d
Re. Darkly Inclined
28th Aug 2015 11:21pm
A ninth finger grace ...appraised above. Wonderful line, simply wonderful. You do have a way with words to be sure. Best wishes miss darkness:)
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Re: Re. Darkly Inclined
29th Aug 2015 9:09pm
I've sedditt before[grin] n sayin' it again.. soo happy every time
I see you 'round these pages sweetie, ty!
hoped that line would not throw anyone cuz my virgo ocd-ness keeps
its own count. lol
appreciate your voice here.. shiny wishes back atcha hun!
~d
I see you 'round these pages sweetie, ty!
hoped that line would not throw anyone cuz my virgo ocd-ness keeps
its own count. lol
appreciate your voice here.. shiny wishes back atcha hun!
~d
Re. Darkly Inclined
29th Aug 2015 7:27am
Onyx is quite beautful and so too is this poem! Nice rhyme scheme and meter my dear!!! JJ
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Re: Re. Darkly Inclined
29th Aug 2015 9:16pm
Big f-ing hugs JJ.. been hellish muse days til lately. hate those. but then she brings her
stubborn self back fer healing writes, so I'm grateful there- as I am fer your presence, tyty!
May ur wknd not suck.. *giggles.. cuz it sounded darkly put so- adding *sparkles to that.. lmsao*
hope you are all-good sweetie!
~d/T
stubborn self back fer healing writes, so I'm grateful there- as I am fer your presence, tyty!
May ur wknd not suck.. *giggles.. cuz it sounded darkly put so- adding *sparkles to that.. lmsao*
hope you are all-good sweetie!
~d/T
Re. Darkly Inclined
29th Aug 2015 2:52pm
Re: Re. Darkly Inclined
29th Aug 2015 9:19pm
Always the charm to my dull dayz, you are.. if tears paid bills, y'know? ;)
thanx fer the visit dear one.. *cali huggins
~d
thanx fer the visit dear one.. *cali huggins
~d
Re. Darkly Inclined
29th Aug 2015 7:27pm
You seem inclined to shine as well Darksighs, always a pleasure to read. "Hand's luminescence, equating All." Your use of imagery and symbolism is superb, as always. You typically have a rich, and seductive, fantasy voice. And a sense of humor! "(Small fist shakes to imaginary score)". I'll take onyx anytime. Diamonds are over-rated!
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Re: Re. Darkly Inclined
29th Aug 2015 9:29pm
Aww..dammit dear Crow.. you bring shiny eyes of appreciation wif your comment..
ty so much fer such thoughts. humbled, I am, muchly. hard times need good friends
& you are awesome!
...and I'm tickled to almost-death that you caught the fist shake.. it's typically
what I do before I start throwin shit.. lmsao but truth.
Onyx vote is racking up.. lifts my spirits to know so... take care sweetie!
~d
ty so much fer such thoughts. humbled, I am, muchly. hard times need good friends
& you are awesome!
...and I'm tickled to almost-death that you caught the fist shake.. it's typically
what I do before I start throwin shit.. lmsao but truth.
Onyx vote is racking up.. lifts my spirits to know so... take care sweetie!
~d
Re. Darkly Inclined
29th Aug 2015 7:52pm
Beautiful lovely lady, with wicked pen. So much emotion
In these beautifully worded lines. Even I have no trouble
deciphering this. I am glad to see you back.
Keith
In these beautifully worded lines. Even I have no trouble
deciphering this. I am glad to see you back.
Keith
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Re: Re. Darkly Inclined
29th Aug 2015 9:35pm
Your "even I" comment has me in smirk.. as if you miss a damn thing. [never]. ;)
Blaming all absence on my cunty muse.. spread the word, she's been ban from the bar.. lol
I'm glad to see you here misters.. ever sweet thanx Keith!
~d
Blaming all absence on my cunty muse.. spread the word, she's been ban from the bar.. lol
I'm glad to see you here misters.. ever sweet thanx Keith!
~d
Re. Darkly Inclined
31st Aug 2015 1:11pm
i'm an emotional clusterfuck after this; dunno whether to weep or hug you first...
"[Small fist shakes to imaginary score]..
Cutting into glass 'til teardrops form.
Scratching truism.. leaking life's blood,
once cleanly sucked.. now fending forked tongue."
^^^^^
stirring my psyche with silver spoon & tongue
... to hell with blood diamonds
xoxox
"[Small fist shakes to imaginary score]..
Cutting into glass 'til teardrops form.
Scratching truism.. leaking life's blood,
once cleanly sucked.. now fending forked tongue."
^^^^^
stirring my psyche with silver spoon & tongue
... to hell with blood diamonds
xoxox
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Re: Re. Darkly Inclined
4th Sep 2015 1:47am
maybe weep wif and then maul after? ..she says in sniffles.
sweet fuks, duznt the heart blow! [notice it's no question. fact]
I am awed by your mind wander.. as I even thot on the blood diamond angle here.
cruel panning, slave labored hands.. def my kind of story. brilliant you..
much seester luvins, lain hard & clinging,
~d
sweet fuks, duznt the heart blow! [notice it's no question. fact]
I am awed by your mind wander.. as I even thot on the blood diamond angle here.
cruel panning, slave labored hands.. def my kind of story. brilliant you..
much seester luvins, lain hard & clinging,
~d
Re. Darkly Inclined
31st Aug 2015 1:53pm
this is so intensely dark D...[preferring onyx.. is that a sign-
unloveable or darkly inclined?]...heavy vibe right there..some deep musings with this...so powerfully and creatively conveyed. ..diggin your artistry lady...oh yes
unloveable or darkly inclined?]...heavy vibe right there..some deep musings with this...so powerfully and creatively conveyed. ..diggin your artistry lady...oh yes
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Re: Re. Darkly Inclined
4th Sep 2015 1:51am
Hello's dear man! good to have you on my dark heart journey.
I am ever n always appreciating your support. nuftin but respect for your insight and pen!
humble curtsies, surely.. w/well wishes abounding ;)
~d
I am ever n always appreciating your support. nuftin but respect for your insight and pen!
humble curtsies, surely.. w/well wishes abounding ;)
~d
Re. Darkly Inclined
3rd Sep 2015 00:13am
The onyx absorbs the glitter and holds the light captive in its chamber. One can only see by the reflections of its surroundings. Like this poem is a dark reflection of the experiences surrounding it.
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Re: Re. Darkly Inclined
4th Sep 2015 1:58am
Interesting view on onyx.. so spot-on at moment, tippin my coffee your way sweetie!
I must practice the handling of such dark absorption & might clear the mind.. now where
in hell did I put my focus object ;)
ty fer seeing the deepdeep into this one, has been a brain frazzle of a week.. ready fer wknd. bad!
shiny nites by curtsy, ur way,
~d
I must practice the handling of such dark absorption & might clear the mind.. now where
in hell did I put my focus object ;)
ty fer seeing the deepdeep into this one, has been a brain frazzle of a week.. ready fer wknd. bad!
shiny nites by curtsy, ur way,
~d
Re. Darkly Inclined
3rd Sep 2015 1:23am
Re: Re. Darkly Inclined
4th Sep 2015 2:00am
Oh you give me grin SirJ.. my mind *has embraced sinister pains it seems.
only option? wear 'em proudly 'til I can quell all, methinks..
adore your time, much respects sweetie!
~d
only option? wear 'em proudly 'til I can quell all, methinks..
adore your time, much respects sweetie!
~d