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I Want
I want someone to ask me how was my day,
Always listening to how and what I have to say.
I want someone to rub my feet when they are sore,
Not worrying about if he pampers me he might score.
I want someone to ask why I'm down,
Do whatever it takes to make me smile instead of frown.
I want someone to just talk about anything and everything,
Is it a bad thing that I want communication instead of a fling?
I want someone to be there just for me,
No matter what I'm doing or where I'll be.
Always listening to how and what I have to say.
I want someone to rub my feet when they are sore,
Not worrying about if he pampers me he might score.
I want someone to ask why I'm down,
Do whatever it takes to make me smile instead of frown.
I want someone to just talk about anything and everything,
Is it a bad thing that I want communication instead of a fling?
I want someone to be there just for me,
No matter what I'm doing or where I'll be.
Published 27th Aug 2015
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27th Aug 2015 3:12am
Ms Sissy, I think that these things you want
are the basics that anyone in a relationship should want and expect. I deal with much the same thing and at times it can be very frustrating. We all need that caring and sympathetic ear. We all just need to be loved.
Very thought provoking
Keith
are the basics that anyone in a relationship should want and expect. I deal with much the same thing and at times it can be very frustrating. We all need that caring and sympathetic ear. We all just need to be loved.
Very thought provoking
Keith
27th Aug 2015 3:15am
Thanks Keith for the comment. I'm just saying alil compassion never hurt anyone. 💕Sissy
27th Aug 2015 3:20am
"I want someone to ask why I'm down,
Do whatever it takes to make me smile instead of frown."
~in agreement here, this luvin humor & desire to make each other laugh is a *must.
A gentle flow of deep yearnings, sweetly put. ..hugs dearies ;)
~d
Do whatever it takes to make me smile instead of frown."
~in agreement here, this luvin humor & desire to make each other laugh is a *must.
A gentle flow of deep yearnings, sweetly put. ..hugs dearies ;)
~d
27th Aug 2015 3:29am
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27th Aug 2015 12:38pm
Taryn conversation is always important. We actually talk but not actually talk. Does that make sense? Thanks for the comment. Always great to hear from you! 💕Sissy
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27th Aug 2015 6:36am
keep your head up, this is beautiful as it is powerful. I relate very closely.
27th Aug 2015 12:39pm
27th Aug 2015 11:37am
Really great, really moving. Listening is an art form that's been lost. Most of us hear one another but never listens, never truly understanding the other, but there exist some diamonds in the rough! 😀
27th Aug 2015 12:42pm
I gotta admit I hear but don't listen a lot of times. Not just at home, everywhere I go lol. Thanks for the comment Jesukritki. 💕Sissy
27th Aug 2015 12:51pm
Hugs and kisses mih darlin. You want, need what we all do in our hearts.
Cherrish you
🌹J
Cherrish you
🌹J
27th Aug 2015 2:03pm
28th Aug 2015 00:16am
sissy, you have poemed exactly what I seek...it's out there...now all we have to do is wait and receive.
28th Aug 2015 00:45am
Shauna we may have to train our men to be like this. Lol! Thanks for the comment. 💕Sissy
14th Aug 2016 2:54am
Hi Sissy......this is a wonderful write that I'm sure many including me relate to......simple acts of luv that many take for granted.......I luv sharing them......purple luv & hugs xo :)
26th Oct 2021 2:00am
Thanks for the comment. Hadn’t been on in awhile so sorry I’m just seeing this 💜💜
24th Oct 2021 4:39pm
How was your Day? By the way, you look nice.
* Which type of pants do ghosts wear to trick or treat? Boo jeans.
* How do you fix a broken pumpkin? A pumpkin patch.
Very poignant words in your poem. We all need that confidante to unburden and for advice. Excellent poem.
* Which type of pants do ghosts wear to trick or treat? Boo jeans.
* How do you fix a broken pumpkin? A pumpkin patch.
Very poignant words in your poem. We all need that confidante to unburden and for advice. Excellent poem.
25th Oct 2021 10:37pm
16th Nov 2021 12:07pm
read that your feet are sore if lie on your back and lift your left eg first i shall massage your foot then the right and any other part of you that is sore or hurst just tell where t hurts
16th Nov 2021 5:58pm
