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Similar Paths

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I was once told to just breathe
let it in like I couldn't get enough,
till the possibilities became limited
by my capacity to take more on
board, meaning  its release iminent
and welcoming, to just let it out slow
and even at it's own pace, though to
just breathe, not always so easy when
thoughts of you do sharpen my vision
not so blurred when my thoughts and
my breathing do find us on similar paths.

So I'll do as requested and breathe,
but my thoughts of you to remain clear
and focused as each breath taken in
with you breathing too.
Written by Lookawaynow (Rose)
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