Done Taking...

Alil pissed Hun? Let it all out you'll feel better! 💕Sissy

You know me so well sweetheart
I just needed to get something
off my chest. Feel better now. :)

Ahhh, knot2much, luv ~ :-*

This poem is so full of stultifying pain, unrelenting agony, the desolation of such long-held despair. It hurts to read it, deep inside, wrenches at one's core. I can only imagine what you're feeling here and none of it has been surcease.

Such a surfeit of torment, luv...

However, there is somewhat else here, somewhat that lends itself to hope, mayhap, for there is deep rage, a roaring furnace of it reclaiming yourself from this place. Silent you may be and bleeding out; indeed there is this plea for mercy, to be set free.

Yet, what you end with, most powerfully, is a manifesto, the wall finally not to be breached. You're rebuilding your castle, re-arming your garrison, and in this very decisiveness, painful as it may be (and I believe tis excruciating), you begin, ironically enough, to find the surcease you seek, sweet relief. Making your decision, whatever it was, definitively, well mayhap that's what you've required in this, ultimately, rather than endeavoring to live based on another's decisions, luv... :-*

And, here I am again, reading additional thoughts of mine that may not exist into your work. Please let me know if you'd like me to cease this, luv. I can only say I read this and felt my way here.

I am wishing you the best in this. I believe you're on a path of great healing. :-* Anger can be productive and beneficial, as can determination.

I really appreciate your thoughts and advice. I know that I have some underlying issues that need to be dealt with. Sometimes I have problems
Identifying  them. As for ceasing your
comments, never luv; we write to make each other think and feel and
sometimes help each other heal.
Your  thoughts and well wishes truly appreciated
Keith

"Love no longer 
gets to fuck 
with me."

Damn if that don't just say it all right there.  Love is the underlying reason beneath the surface of damn near everything ain't it?  A healthy sigh here.  Nicely said, Keith.

Michael

Thanks Michael for taking the time
to give a read always appreciate
your comments .
Keith

Looking only at the poem: It cries despair and defeat.  The end of a struggle and and abandonment the only option.  What will be abandoned is unclear and concerning to the reader.

Derrick I really did not mean
for it to be so grim, I was just
going for overkill in thumbing
the trials of love. Also just venting
some frustrations. Appreciate your
comments as always,

Keith

Very nice

Very nice

"My tormented soul seeks peace,
I search for some release. "
&
"Show me mercy,
set me free, "
~sums up that fierce heart-twisting that love can put u thru.
Thinking there was a sayin.. [?].."when love troubles trouble.. trouble troubles love? *giggles, cuz I think
I hacked it- but y'know rite? ;)  Lots of takes on this. All ..speak of realization that you jus'
don't wanna be f-ed with.. small or large capacity! lol/yes's  ..makes this a soulful/good purge[maybe/hopefully?] ;)
solid write, misters Keith. be well!
~d

I can truly relate to this piece,
I am going through stuff kind of like this which makes me appreciate this poem and think it's so relateable and heartbreaking.
Amazing write, keep up the good work

Ms Jackson I appreciate your heartfelt
comments. I am truly saddened that you are going through a similar situation. Be strong sweetheart, I
know you will weather it.
Best to you

Keith