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Midnight Hour
you slowly crawl thru my soul
I gasp for my next breath
seeking a way to rid you from my dreams
clock chimes warning of the midnight hour
my scared soul shivers of fright
can feel deaths shadow cross over me
rain keeping rhythm with ticking of time
echoing thru my mind like thunder
destiny flashing faraway in darkness
your muzzled creepy deep voice
makes me cringe as you chant commands
to your dark demonic lord of hell
with fire shooting from your lips
you scream cursing my name
then poof you're gone with my next breath
lay in bed watching shadows my mind creates
silence is now upon death ears
eyes focus to seeing nothing that exist
now I slumber with eyes wide open
close my mind of more tricks played
lay me down to sleep hoping I don't
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
I gasp for my next breath
seeking a way to rid you from my dreams
clock chimes warning of the midnight hour
my scared soul shivers of fright
can feel deaths shadow cross over me
rain keeping rhythm with ticking of time
echoing thru my mind like thunder
destiny flashing faraway in darkness
your muzzled creepy deep voice
makes me cringe as you chant commands
to your dark demonic lord of hell
with fire shooting from your lips
you scream cursing my name
then poof you're gone with my next breath
lay in bed watching shadows my mind creates
silence is now upon death ears
eyes focus to seeing nothing that exist
now I slumber with eyes wide open
close my mind of more tricks played
lay me down to sleep hoping I don't
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
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Re. Midnight Hour
20th Aug 2015 7:00am
Sounds like you need dream therapy... hopefully one day soon you will have sweet dreams again. I can't imagine trying to hide from my dreams, it's the only place I ever get laid... jj
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21st Aug 2015 2:07am
LMAO!!!!! Oh JJ...you so made me laugh out loud.....thank you!! I will check into dream therapy cause I need to get laid.....LOL!!! Xo :)
Re. Midnight Hour
20th Aug 2015 7:20am
dark write lovely Flower may your dreams be of far off places and love..
love Crim
love Crim
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Re: Re. Midnight Hour
21st Aug 2015 2:08am
I wish you the same beautiful Crim......thank you for sharing the luv.....sending luv and hugs your way....xo :)
Re. Midnight Hour
Anonymous
20th Aug 2015 7:46am
Miss Flower, Miss Flower, treading over toward the dark side becomes you. . .and it always begins with a beautiful nightmare. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
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21st Aug 2015 2:25am
Oh Dev....your words always please me...so encouraging.....think I luv the dark side once in a while.....thank you sweet friend.....xo :)
Re. Midnight Hour
Anonymous
20th Aug 2015 2:18pm
Ahhh . . . Super dark dream, although this particular dream it seems is happening with your eyes wide open. You chose your words well in this dark, nightmarish poem.
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Re: Re. Midnight Hour
21st Aug 2015 2:27am
Thank you Scooter for visiting my nightmare......sometimes I have them while awake......darkness creeps thru the mind....thank you for taking the time to share your view.....xo :)
Re. Midnight Hour
20th Aug 2015 2:41pm
stop these bad dreams flower they are not good for you because it interferes with your sleep
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Re: Re. Midnight Hour
21st Aug 2015 2:30am
Hey Glen...I will try...but the mind does what it does in the darkness......thank my friend.....xo :)
Re. Midnight Hour
20th Aug 2015 4:48pm
I pray the Lord your soul to keep, when the time comes. This demon you describe would keep anyone awake. I'd sleep with a gun under my pillow for some subconscious security. but I doubt that's a measure you'd consider. You've never struck me as the violent type. Far from it. You're a kind soul at any hour, seems to me. Excellent work Flower! Maybe some deadly nightshade....
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Re: Re. Midnight Hour
21st Aug 2015 2:35am
Awe Crow.....your comments always make my heart shiver with warmness.....I have a few guns around.....staying awake and watching funny movies helps a lot or read awesome poems like yours on DU.....thank you for your kinds words and thoughts of me......you always make me smile.....xo :)
Re. Midnight Hour
20th Aug 2015 6:33pm
Whoa flowergirl, these are some ominous
dream-sequences that You are having.
Maybe try a Relaxing bath and some tea
or a humorous program on tv before laying
down for the night.
I'm sorry that Your nocturnal visions are
being so troubling to You... Hopefully the
Kindness of Your Good soul will kick their
asses and give You Peace.
Great write... Pan
dream-sequences that You are having.
Maybe try a Relaxing bath and some tea
or a humorous program on tv before laying
down for the night.
I'm sorry that Your nocturnal visions are
being so troubling to You... Hopefully the
Kindness of Your Good soul will kick their
asses and give You Peace.
Great write... Pan
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Re: Re. Midnight Hour
21st Aug 2015 3:05am
Hi ya Pan....so thrilled to see you again......thank you for your wonderful ideas.....I will try them......I so appreciate your kind words......I'm very happy to see back my way.....luv and hugs xo :)
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21st Aug 2015 00:53am
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Re: Re. Midnight Hour
21st Aug 2015 3:07am
Hey Mr. PM.....I'm really happy to see you...thank you for your powerful prescience on my page.....always appreciate you.......luv and hugs xo :)
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21st Aug 2015 4:51am
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22nd Aug 2015 4:29am
Hey there.....yes now and then......I know you have them all the time......luv and hugs my friend.....sending wishes for more settled dreams.....xo :)
Re. Midnight Hour
23rd Aug 2015 1:55am
EVil lurks in the shadows of your existence. ;)
He is always there, waiting for you to beg His name. Muahhahhahahahah!
Uhh-ehm. Pardon me, ES. I was distracted for a moment. What I meant was, I love your backside, uh, well, uh, that is, your dark side. ;)
xo
EV
He is always there, waiting for you to beg His name. Muahhahhahahahah!
Uhh-ehm. Pardon me, ES. I was distracted for a moment. What I meant was, I love your backside, uh, well, uh, that is, your dark side. ;)
xo
EV
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Re: Re. Midnight Hour
26th Aug 2015 3:48am
Look EV.....I'm aware where evil lurks.....that's why I always look for you there.....in the shadows standing there so sexy......MAUHAHAHAHA!!!! Well now.....thanks for noticing.......your backside and dark side aren't so bad either......LOL!!! Luv and hugs xo :)
Re. Midnight Hour
24th Aug 2015 1:59pm
i always enjoy your ink when you have a bit a darkness and mystery to it as much as I love your tender writes.
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Re: Re. Midnight Hour
26th Aug 2015 3:52am
Sexy Lena......you always being a smile upon my heart......thank you for your touching words.....luv ya xo :)
Re. Midnight Hour
25th Aug 2015 3:31pm
Damn this is good, different from your mpre tendering poems but..
... I like it dark, kept my interest great wright
... I like it dark, kept my interest great wright
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Re: Re. Midnight Hour
26th Aug 2015 3:57am
Hi JW.....thrilled to see you......I'm glad that you like this one.....I've done a few dark ones now.....kind of liking them......LOL!!! Thank you for leaving me words.....xo :)
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9th Feb 2016 10:02am
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10th Feb 2016 1:14am
Hey GS.....welcome to DU!! Thank you for stopping by my page and leaving words.....purple hugs xo :)