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My Day Has Begun
early morning desire
fragmented nights
spiritual blackout
unable to taste
stale perfume
overcast with
alcohol and sex
naked bodies spent
head still spinning
half loaded
she gets on top
until we cum again
cigarette lit
inhale and cough
find the fridge
open a beer
guzzle it down
shot of vodka
anti-depressants
this personal hell
hit the shower
hot water clarifies
holy shit
my day has begun..
fragmented nights
spiritual blackout
unable to taste
stale perfume
overcast with
alcohol and sex
naked bodies spent
head still spinning
half loaded
she gets on top
until we cum again
cigarette lit
inhale and cough
find the fridge
open a beer
guzzle it down
shot of vodka
anti-depressants
this personal hell
hit the shower
hot water clarifies
holy shit
my day has begun..
Published 17th Aug 2015
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17th Aug 2015 8:55pm
17th Aug 2015 9:02pm
17th Aug 2015 11:57pm
DAVE!!! I so get this and I have to say i Love the edge too! I was able to read this so fast i'm still smiling Brovo!
This is what i'm talking about and what i like most about you, U are always growing in ways to express yourself
Your words painted a vivid picture that allows the reader inside the full spectrum of what you're saying...
Well done !!
In the list...
Keep going!
Zazzles ")
This is what i'm talking about and what i like most about you, U are always growing in ways to express yourself
Your words painted a vivid picture that allows the reader inside the full spectrum of what you're saying...
Well done !!
In the list...
Keep going!
Zazzles ")
18th Aug 2015 1:45pm
Thanks, Ms. Z. So glad you dug it.. I appreciate the kind words of encouragement.. And I'll keep writing, and searching for different ways of expression.. Most of all thanks for the add.. Much love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
Anonymous
18th Aug 2015 1:54pm
There's great deal of sadness in this, I can almost taste the unspoken words drowned in the alcohol trying to stop time from sliding into morning to harsh reality of the light.
Beautiful and vulnerable at the same time. Excellent write Dave.
Beautiful and vulnerable at the same time. Excellent write Dave.
18th Aug 2015 2:04pm
Rina, as always you hit the nail on the head.. You always seem to find the hidden emotions, or meaning in what I write.. Glad you thought it was a great write.. Always appreciate your commentary.. Much love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
