Baptized In Jizz

beautiful Taryn I am speechless thank you gracious lady..

for receiving this write with so much love..

I love you Brenda

Nobody writes smut like you Crim!
Ffs!! This was sinnister, provocative and RAW!!!
Loved this!!!!!
Zazzles xoxoxox

thank you so much beautiful Jackie..

with love Crim

holy mama!....you are the master of strong erotic poetry!   the woman in the poem sounds like a pushy sub.  knows what and how she likes it...yet wants to be dominated by a much stronger lover strong in body and mind.   enjoyed!  your poems have a beautiful energy.

thank you so much lovely one for the insightful comment..

with love Crim

i love you. seriously. ohh my stars & garters, beautiful one, you are something else indeed, getting this pain slut absolutely riled up...
"my protests go unheard
a you fuck my throat
squeezing your cock
as I convulse, gasping for air
as you pump in and out of my mouth
pissing down my throat"
^^^^
fuck fuck fuckity fuck! you make me want to come undone
loved this!!!!!!

thank you beautiful Katja I am blushing and smiling widely from your awesome comment :)

I love you lovely one Brenda

This Poet is HARD

CUM SPLATTER LIKE

thank you Poet ;)

with love Brenda

Such a lovely image, lol. But an excellent read.

thank you Sir Hades reveling in your darkness ;)

with love Crim

christened hardcore. there's no smoke bc the fire never ends...

thank you John for a blazing comment ;)

with love Crim

Oh shit!  I'm involved in a project at work for two weeks and I read this before I start......oh my word....lol

Fantastic second to last stanza!

thank you lovely Lena I hope your project is influenced in a sexy manner ;)

with love Crim

"Baptized in Jizz.." That really said it all right so to go further n indulge
all horny toads worldwide could be considered 'excessive overspill' but hey I'm hardly complaining!! lmao...
Whew, cigarette anyone?? lol

thank you Poe I cherish your visits :)

with love Crim

"I've never felt more clean / than with cum running down my legs / dripping from my hair."  Always a pleasure to drench you Crim.  Baptized in jizz and porn again.  Great job baby!  

thank you Sir Crow for a sexy comment ;)

with love Crim

wow each stanza is absolutely hot crimsin... amazing with the pen... keep spilling that fire

thank you kindly Magic for the hot comment ;)

with love Crim

wow! - just wow! :-) you are simply a master of this genre - As I have said before this is not my genre and find it extremely difficult to write - If it was my genre I would want to be able to write it like you. I read you erotic stuff, I enjoy it and i'm awe struck - keep it cumming (lol)

David you are always so gracious to me..

making me blush thank you kind soul :)

with love Crim

Jeezus! I dig this. Im a sub. Write in a different way. But this is fucking hot as hell my doll. Would love for you to check out some of mine. Not all my pieces are on submission. Try lesson one first. Just a different look at it. You my dear are f ing awesome. Raw. Unapologetic. Thank ypu! 💋

thank you lovely one for such an awesome comment..

I read Lesson One and loved it you are truly talented :)

with love Crim

Brazzers on broadway i must say....
An orgasmic lecture my friend!!!!!

thank you Cesar for making me smile :)

with love Crim

Heart poundingly exciting Crim!

thank you kindly Xmar :)

with love Crim

Ahhh, crimsin, luv ~ :-*

Mmm...

Ohhh. Myyy. Yessss. Indeed.

Mm-hmm, well, luv, you've done it, I'm afraid: I just....

Thank you for that very, very, very much! ;-*
Truly, you are an erotic virtuoso, luv.

beautiful Savaja thank you for such a luscious comment making me giggle like a school girl :)

with love Crim

Is this all you've got, slutty little lass?
I know you are capable of much more. ;)

This is hardcore extraordinaire. I fucking love it!

you know,
Chad

thank you Chad smiling wickedly ;)

with love Brenda

Love, love, love

Raw in sexuality
Tender in serenity
Masterfully carved
Laced with grace

thank you Soul for such a beautiful comment :)

with love Crim

// I've never felt more clean    than with cum running down my legs     dripping from my hair // The paradoxical statement you used really struck me. Love that line! Thank you for this sinfully satisfying scribe. I also really like the subtle religious words used like baptized, devil, defiled and the reference to being born again in the last stanza. The undertones pair well with the overall impression that this whore worships cum. The ending is really satisfying as we get to share in the ecstasy of this cum slut while jizz leaks out of all her holes. For me I especially fixate on the visual of pearly globs running over her balloon-tie. Bravo!

I'm really struck by your intelligence and look forward to reading more of you..   thank you for your take on my whorish baptism in jizz ;)   a better reaction I couldn't hope for you made this girl's day..   with respect Crimisn

Damn! That’s some raw shit! And it turned me on! I decided to look through some of your older work back before I joined and came across this gem! And I’m wondering why you haven’t been published yet?

thank you dearest Lyrical One I'm so happy you found this pleasing...honestly I haven't tried submitting to any publishing houses... I deeply appreciate you looking deeper in my library...

love Brenda 💕