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Mardi Gras Pearls
holding your cards tight to your chest
with no tell I can decipher
I wonder if I'm at least a macabre curiosity
someone who makes you say what the fuck?
or am I just a blip on your radar
a lonely dancer
pirouetting on the wind
with my clumsy ballet
no refined class
with which to sip from
I'm beer you're bourbon
so callous from life's grappling
at my curvaceous form
still there is an underlying beauty
in my raw, savage nature
I was taught at a young age to face life head on
no storm can shipwreck me
I'm the whore who rides the Earth's cock
calling forth the elements
fire nymph lingering on your periphery
just out of reach
though in your arms in a minute
should you give the command
waiting in the shadows in my garish costume
Mardi Gras pearls adorn me
high class call girls
have nothing on me
i'll get down and dirty
fulfilling your darkest desires
I see your cards now
I'm playing my hand
put me in check
I'm a wild gypsy mount
needing to be tempered
with a commanding
presence like yours
my illusive love
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Re. Mardi Gras Pearls
12th Aug 2015 9:12pm
"still there is an underlying beauty
in my raw, savage nature
I was taught at a young age to face life head on"
&
no storm can shipwreck me
I'm the whore who rides the Earth's cock" <~~ perfect poetry!
~F-ing gorgeous Crim-of-my-cream-dreams. Your strong, sexy 'self' proclamation-- is a turn-on all its own!
*squeaks n drips, lady.. all I'm gonna say..
"high class call girls
have nothing on me
i'll get down and dirty" <~ yesyes!
~
"put me in check
I'm a wild gypsy mount <~ wild gypsy says all, u lil vixen ;)
needing to be tempered"
~wishin' for your needs be handled, hard & promptly, my luvz. This is smoking.. [smoke *provoking, even]
*mwahs & *puffs
~d
in my raw, savage nature
I was taught at a young age to face life head on"
&
no storm can shipwreck me
I'm the whore who rides the Earth's cock" <~~ perfect poetry!
~F-ing gorgeous Crim-of-my-cream-dreams. Your strong, sexy 'self' proclamation-- is a turn-on all its own!
*squeaks n drips, lady.. all I'm gonna say..
"high class call girls
have nothing on me
i'll get down and dirty" <~ yesyes!
~
"put me in check
I'm a wild gypsy mount <~ wild gypsy says all, u lil vixen ;)
needing to be tempered"
~wishin' for your needs be handled, hard & promptly, my luvz. This is smoking.. [smoke *provoking, even]
*mwahs & *puffs
~d
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Re: Re. Mardi Gras Pearls
15th Aug 2015 2:42am
lovely d~ I'm blown away by your gorgeous comments..
making me all dreamy lovely one..
thank you from my heart..
with love Crim
making me all dreamy lovely one..
thank you from my heart..
with love Crim
Re. Mardi Gras Pearls
12th Aug 2015 9:45pm
Wild thing, you make my heart sing! Your wording here is flat out ecstatic, Crim. A turn on in a really clever card game context when the saints come marching in. They'd probably faint. Either that or request your phone number. Great job lady!
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15th Aug 2015 2:43am
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Re: Re. Mardi Gras Pearls
15th Aug 2015 2:45am
thank you beautiful Taryn for such a heart warming comment..
though I'm afraid he's holding a flush and I can't beat my feelings for him..
with love Brenda
though I'm afraid he's holding a flush and I can't beat my feelings for him..
with love Brenda
Re. Mardi Gras Pearls
12th Aug 2015 11:19pm
I love this narrator, she know herself and takes pleasure in who she is...a strong with with an even stronger sexualtiy...she may want to be a submissive
but I feel she is a dom. in wait or perhaps a sheep in wolves clothing? anyway...again you bring a surreal energy to each poem like you are writing
with your blood or perhaps one of your lover's blood?
but I feel she is a dom. in wait or perhaps a sheep in wolves clothing? anyway...again you bring a surreal energy to each poem like you are writing
with your blood or perhaps one of your lover's blood?
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Re: Re. Mardi Gras Pearls
15th Aug 2015 2:49am
thank you lovely one I love how insightful your comments always are..
with love Crim
with love Crim
Re. Mardi Gras Pearls
Anonymous
13th Aug 2015 00:44am
Sweet Crim you never fail to write a fascinating poem.....regardless of the subject......I'm luvin this one as all the rest......you've written great lines thru out this one......all I could do is stop and sigh and read on......brilliant!!!!!! Luv the visual in this one as well......tipping my pen in respect of your talent and the beautiful soul that you are......xo :)
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15th Aug 2015 2:51am
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Re. Mardi Gras Pearls
13th Aug 2015 8:23am
that's nitro poetry. you're right there, Crim, in a place where the party never ends...
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Re. Mardi Gras Pearls
13th Aug 2015 1:00pm
Love the title! You are amazing with creating strong visuals. This woman is fierce ; )
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Re. Mardi Gras Pearls
13th Aug 2015 2:57pm
brenda, you beautiful creature... you are uninhibited, heathen, a goddess, darlin...
"I'm the whore who rides the Earth's cock"
^^^^^
tiny gods, the prowess in that line alone is utterly breathtaking
... i bow to the mastery of your pen
xoxox
"I'm the whore who rides the Earth's cock"
^^^^^
tiny gods, the prowess in that line alone is utterly breathtaking
... i bow to the mastery of your pen
xoxox
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Re: Re. Mardi Gras Pearls
15th Aug 2015 2:55am
I'm truly humbled by your gracious comment beautiful Katja thank you..
with love Brenda
with love Brenda
Re. Mardi Gras Pearls
14th Aug 2015 1:03am
a really strong woman power piece about a woman who knows what she is all about and not afraid to shout it out :-)
you are a gifted lady of such power :-)
you are a gifted lady of such power :-)
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15th Aug 2015 2:56am
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14th Aug 2015 8:48pm
A strong woman who knows what she wants and gets it. Powerful in her sexual aggression, she makes no excuses. Very nice Crim.
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