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(Entered in a DUP competition)
Dip your mind
In death, horror and pain
Absorb the suffering and
Paint the world
As you see it
(C) 2015 XMAR82 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
Dip your mind
In death, horror and pain
Absorb the suffering and
Paint the world
As you see it
(C) 2015 XMAR82 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
Published 11th Aug 2015
| Edited 3rd Feb 2017
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11th Aug 2015 7:28pm
Hey X.....I'm likin this.....simple but strong message to look at anothers life.....feel pain and suffering that other souls feel...then look back at yours......see how it really is......thought provoking write.....xo :)
12th Aug 2015 4:22am
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19th Aug 2015 3:47am
I like it...I've often felt, and especially lately, that negative feelings and circumstances often seem to sharpen my pen.
Nice ink.
Nice ink.
23rd Aug 2015 5:16am
