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*Love and Hate
the shine in eyes that love
uninhibited and truth that shows
each blink a message of desire
each smile a need for kisses
love the touch of fingers' caress
thus the beginning is full of hearts
full of words so soulful
full of loving and giving
tangled limbs start and end unknown
until the fire singes the spirit
deeper need want complete subjugation
no breath to breathe no secrets unknown
settled dusts of trusts stir
green eyes wake to distrust
when inched away the body
that echo the cymbals
of alarm...leaving now?
distrust followed by suspicion
dislike to hate
the acid in the vinegar
feel free the spirit roams
love shackles break
hate is now a bed
to sleep on just so
not to feel again
the prison of love...
hate is the key
out.
*this poem was entered in a competition here. thank you for reading*
uninhibited and truth that shows
each blink a message of desire
each smile a need for kisses
love the touch of fingers' caress
thus the beginning is full of hearts
full of words so soulful
full of loving and giving
tangled limbs start and end unknown
until the fire singes the spirit
deeper need want complete subjugation
no breath to breathe no secrets unknown
settled dusts of trusts stir
green eyes wake to distrust
when inched away the body
that echo the cymbals
of alarm...leaving now?
distrust followed by suspicion
dislike to hate
the acid in the vinegar
feel free the spirit roams
love shackles break
hate is now a bed
to sleep on just so
not to feel again
the prison of love...
hate is the key
out.
*this poem was entered in a competition here. thank you for reading*
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Re. *Love and Hate
Anonymous
11th Aug 2015 9:44am
I just read this in the comp and really loved it! I hope it wins :)
always thankful for the reads, dear Grace
always thankful for the reads, dear Grace
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Hi Miki, always so kind with your comments.:) thank you. There is such a thin veil between love and hate isn't it, though.
Re. *Love and Hate
11th Aug 2015 11:56am
So true how tediously the separation
of love to hate... Powerful, stirring ink.
of love to hate... Powerful, stirring ink.
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11th Aug 2015 3:54pm
Re. *Love and Hate
11th Aug 2015 12:01pm
Brrrrrr that's chilly!!! :)
sad how easily such changes can happen-wonderful description- heartbreaking!!!!
Good Luck in the comp!!!
sad how easily such changes can happen-wonderful description- heartbreaking!!!!
Good Luck in the comp!!!
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11th Aug 2015 3:56pm
Thank you Soul...I am a bit off the mark for the competition..I just love the writing.:) you did a fine piece in that competition you joined in, yourself. :)
Re. *Love and Hate
11th Aug 2015 12:02pm
I really like this. Hoping too that you tip the competition. "There is such a thin veil between love and hate isn't it, though, isn't it. " Agreed. Much like the teetering, thin line between genius and insanity.....:)
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11th Aug 2015 3:58pm
Oh I understand about tipping the balance into insanity too...its just a breath away at times. And its not even close to 'genius'. Thank you for reading MrM.
Re. *Love and Hate
11th Aug 2015 12:30pm
“In youth, it was a way I had,
To do my best to please.
And change, with every passing lad
To suit his theories.
But now I know the things I know
And do the things I do,
And if you do not like me so,
To hell, my love, with you.”
- Dorothy Parker
(http://www.goodreads.com/work/quotes/868473-the-complete-poems-of-dorothy-parker-penguin-twentieth-century-classics)
To do my best to please.
And change, with every passing lad
To suit his theories.
But now I know the things I know
And do the things I do,
And if you do not like me so,
To hell, my love, with you.”
- Dorothy Parker
(http://www.goodreads.com/work/quotes/868473-the-complete-poems-of-dorothy-parker-penguin-twentieth-century-classics)
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11th Aug 2015 4:00pm
Re. *Love and Hate
11th Aug 2015 1:46pm
How tragic yet how true, that the only escape from the pain of love forsaken is the monster born of hatred...
I know this to be true! jj
I know this to be true! jj
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11th Aug 2015 4:04pm
Been through the wringer too, eh. I went a few rounds actually.:) Thanks for reading Poetryman.
Re. *Love and Hate
11th Aug 2015 7:23pm
Very sad but extremely powerful work. Romance usually fades, but if it deteriorates into hate it's time to move on. The problem is that hatred leaves scars that won't go away. A lot to think about here Grace. Fine job!
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12th Aug 2015 1:52am
Thank you Crowfly ..
You are so right there. Hate rears it's head and its time to leave.
You are so right there. Hate rears it's head and its time to leave.
Re. *Love and Hate
12th Aug 2015 11:45pm
Wonderful Grace, you poem love to hate in such a visceral manner I feel as if you inside my mind concering a past relationship. You have painted how
there is a thin line. Verses two and three are the motherlode of this poem for me.
there is a thin line. Verses two and three are the motherlode of this poem for me.
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17th Aug 2015 2:21pm
Re. *Love and Hate
17th Aug 2015 4:30am
When the fire brought by passion has died down and turned into a cold and bitter feeling of hatred, there is nothing left but misery...time to move on. It's such a tragedy and so true which can happen to the best relationship there is!
Very good read Grace...good luck in the comp!
Very good read Grace...good luck in the comp!
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17th Aug 2015 2:23pm
Hi there EngrVV...long time no see eh. Thanks for dropping by and reading.:) and thanks for that comment.
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17th Aug 2015 3:08pm
Hate is now a bed to sleep on just to not feel again
Hmm, my doll, i hope i never lie there. This is a beautiful painful expression you have created. Thank you. 💋
Hmm, my doll, i hope i never lie there. This is a beautiful painful expression you have created. Thank you. 💋
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