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what's waiting for me
skeletons grabbing me
pulling me apart
tearing my mind
destroying my soul
the sins i've built
are dragging me down
into a world full of shit
that I need to accept
i've created this
world I live in
no one to blame
except the one inside
who am i
to be right now
judging from the inside
taking away myself
nothing left to feel
except construed misery
but i must accept
this punishment i must bear
pulling me apart
tearing my mind
destroying my soul
the sins i've built
are dragging me down
into a world full of shit
that I need to accept
i've created this
world I live in
no one to blame
except the one inside
who am i
to be right now
judging from the inside
taking away myself
nothing left to feel
except construed misery
but i must accept
this punishment i must bear
Published 9th Aug 2015
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9th Aug 2015 2:04am
The prices we pay to keep breathing,
hmm I know of this place as well.
Many of us do.
You're tugging me soul.
hmm I know of this place as well.
Many of us do.
You're tugging me soul.
9th Aug 2015 2:21am
And the prices we pay to try to forget I didn't think you'd know of this place
9th Aug 2015 2:35am
9th Aug 2015 2:59am
9th Aug 2015 8:41am
We all have our fair chances to correct the mistakes we've made, its all up to you if you want to take a chance...
9th Aug 2015 9:12am
Some mistakes are too grevious too correct they can only be atoned although I have changed from when I made these
20th Aug 2015 5:03am
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